[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) - Page 56

Fantastic Update!!! Shiv's mother's comments are so impacting that I to read it twice to remember what was written in the update above.. I am laughing my head off sitting in the office... Very nicely written... 👏

OMG WAS IT REAL!!!

Devi u hv got a very very n very unique sence of humour, to bring out laughter out of a sensual update, its only u who is blessd wit ths talent. M so very thankful to u 4 bringin out such a beautiful naughty passionate yet funny update so soon.

Devi Habibti, your awesome! "ek raat"loved all the parts ...how do you do it girl!

Second...Balle balle!!! ..it was amazing! I was reading it slowly, and smiling, blushing, I'm sure these guys in front of me think I'm a freak. Last time, I wanted to comment on why Gauri wasn't saying anything, despite knowing everything that nite Shiv came home drunk, and when I came back I saw this update!!! I loved " Again" "say it again" and then "words Baby..words" YAY!!!

And where did mommy Kapoor come from...when I (or Gauri/Shiv) least expect it..? Poor them 😳

Awesome update
It was both sweet and hilarious.

Gauri's confession was fabulous. Shiv didnot tell G d main reason for not touching her.

Shiv's mom is so funny. She cracked me up. Like G she also has a smart mouth.

Pls continue soon
P.S. Can we've a 21+ part for SG? D nightgown shouldn't b wasted.

wow two updates... wow wo .. they confessed ....... fool shiv.... y his hot wife need to tell.. .. she rocks... luv it.. .. luv you devi... . ..

I can't even comment I am speehless those two parts were amazing. Can never get enough of them! I hope you continue with Them after shivs mom left and i hope we get to see some more tender moments! God I love your writing!

hallelujah.........they confessed........took them long enough.........🥳....
......shiv's house has no privacy at all😆.......everyone knows everyone elses business.........love it here.......though would hate it to hell if happened to me personally........🤢

...thanks devi 🤗.....for awesome updates..................👏

P.S.......all Richard Armitage lovers here...... you guys know about The Hobbit..............all his loveliness.........hidden behind dwarf makeup.......how can we bear it.........anyways .....its great news......

wow loved it..glad their misunderstandings were finally cleared