[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134)

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bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#551

Fantastic Update!!! Shiv's mother's comments are so impacting that I to read it twice to remember what was written in the update above.. I am laughing my head off sitting in the office... Very nicely written... 👏

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richiiiii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#552

OMG WAS IT REAL!!!

N DID THEY JUST CONFESSED!!!😍

WOW!!DEVI IT WAS AWESOME!!!!

AND BY THE WAY SHIV IS A PURE SEX GOD!!!

HIS WORDS ARE ENOUGH TO MAKE YOU FEEL AROUSED😳

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chubzy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#553

Devi u hv got a very very n very unique sence of humour, to bring out laughter out of a sensual update, its only u who is blessd wit ths talent. M so very thankful to u 4 bringin out such a beautiful naughty passionate yet funny update so soon.

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arabianpaki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#554

Devi Habibti, your awesome! "ek raat"loved all the parts ...how do you do it girl!

Second...Balle balle!!! ..it was amazing! I was reading it slowly, and smiling, blushing, I'm sure these guys in front of me think I'm a freak. Last time, I wanted to comment on why Gauri wasn't saying anything, despite knowing everything that nite Shiv came home drunk, and when I came back I saw this update!!! I loved " Again" "say it again" and then "words Baby..words" YAY!!!

And where did mommy Kapoor come from...when I (or Gauri/Shiv) least expect it..? Poor them 😳

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#555

hah Shiv's mum 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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wilddevil2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#556

Awesome update
It was both sweet and hilarious.

Gauri's confession was fabulous. Shiv didnot tell G d main reason for not touching her.

Shiv's mom is so funny. She cracked me up. Like G she also has a smart mouth.

Pls continue soon
P.S. Can we've a 21+ part for SG? D nightgown shouldn't b wasted.

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Fatima Ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#557

wow two updates... wow wo .. they confessed ....... fool shiv.... y his hot wife need to tell.. .. she rocks... luv it.. .. luv you devi... . ..

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bushrayou

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Posted: 14 years ago

#558

I can't even comment I am speehless those two parts were amazing. Can never get enough of them! I hope you continue with Them after shivs mom left and i hope we get to see some more tender moments! God I love your writing!

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Deezi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#559

hallelujah.........they confessed........took them long enough.........🥳....
......shiv's house has no privacy at all😆.......everyone knows everyone elses business.........love it here.......though would hate it to hell if happened to me personally........🤢

...thanks devi 🤗.....for awesome updates..................👏

P.S.......all Richard Armitage lovers here...... you guys know about The Hobbit..............all his loveliness.........hidden behind dwarf makeup.......how can we bear it.........anyways .....its great news......

Edited by dee30 - 14 years ago