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Posted: 14 years ago
nothing can't be sooooooo superb
i am reading this part today
and seems val day ke liye hi bana hai :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww... part 15...☺️
MN kiss ...☺️☺️☺️☺️
soooo burning hawt!!!☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
aww... luvd it!!!☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww mayur part ws da best......loved deir kiss☺️
n samrat finally realizes hes in love.....
loved it alot
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Mehak!
awesome update dear!
loved both MN nd SG parts 😳
waiting for the next update
continue realy soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

HAPPY VALENTINES DAY FRIENDS!!!!! 😳😳😳😳

HOPE U LIKE IT!! DO COMENT!! :)

PART 16

Udhay: (yelled) "naheeeeee!"

He turned his back towards Nupur with his hand covering his ears.

Nupur: "hannnnnnn!" she moved in front of him and removed his hands from his ears.

Udhay: "nooo wayyy!!"

Sam: " but you see that is exactly THE way!"

Udhay helplessly looked at Gunjan, "nahheee ,naheee, naheee! Gunjan keh do ye jhoot hai!"

Gunjan: "han han han! Udhay bhaiya ye bilkul sach hai!"

Mayank stood aside , rolling his eyes and getting irritated by Udhay's constant groaning.

Since morning Gunjan, Nupur and Sam were trying to persuade Udhay that he couldn't meet C.J. on valentine day because according to the traditions "dulha" cant meet "dulhan" once the ceremonies have started.

Nupur was trying to console him, : " Udhay bhaiya aap dulhe hain na! You have to follow the rules."

Everytime they called Udhay "dulha" Mayank couldn't help but snort which earned him a glare from both his wife and sister in law.

Udhay: " Mayank jiju aap kaho na inhen! Akhir mujhe kis baat ke saza mil rahe hai?"

Udhay had his hand on his forehead in a complete *majnoo * style.

Mayank: " how about you just cut the crap Udhay!"

Udhay made a sad face and looked at Nupur .

Nupur: " Udhay bhaiya app bhe kis se baat kr rahe hain! You see to understand the importance of Valentine day one need to be ROMANTIC like you."

Mayank raised a questioning brow at Nupur, "Excuse me?"

Nupur: " Udhay Bhiya aap choren na! You go call C.J. while…"

Mayank: (cutting in) "while we can continue where we left of this morning. What say Mrs. Nupur Sharma?"

The knowing smiles of Gunjan, Sam grin and the memories of the morning kiss made Nupur blush.

Udhay: " han okay! You and jiju continue!"

Nupur looked at Udhay with a complete look of disbelief on her face.

Mayank: " see Nupur ab to Udhay ne bhe keh dia! Besides I guess I just got prove that my wife is not satisfied! I will have to work harder to prove how romantic I can be!"

Nupur was going all red .

Sam: " yeah you both carry on while I will go find my valentine!"

Gunjan: " oh I can tell you where Ria is Sam!"

Sam groaned and Mayank, Nupur and Gunjan laughed. The spell was broken but Nupur could still feel Mayank's eyes on her and she felt her heart beat quicken.

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Nupur was caught up the whole day by the arrival of Mr. And Mrs. Bushan. As she was the eldest to naturally her parents gave her all the responsibility and she only went upstairs to change in the evening for the dance party organized in the hotel for the special day.

She had missed Mayank but had not even got time to talk to him. She went upstairs to find he was getting ready for the evening. She was wondering what to wear when her eyes caught a package lying in her cupboard. She picked it up and opened it to find a red saree along with a card.

The card read:

Time stands still when our arms entwine ….and your

heart beats with mine..

And when you smile,
The whole world stops and stares for awhile…..

Cause you are amazing just the way you are….

Happy valentines day….

She picked up the saree and she found a note with it.

I want you to to wear this saree fro me tonight ….

p.s. Before you call me unromantic again… WILL YOU BE MY VALENTINE?

Love

Mayank.

Nupur hugged the saree and she realized her eyes were shining with unshed tears. She loved her husband and she wanted to tell him but she wanted it to be a special day. Time when she could be alone with him…. She heard the washroom door open and quickly hiding the saree , smiled at Mayank and went to freshen up.

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Mayank was changing into his shirt when he realized its button had come off. He found the needle but was unable to remember when was the last time he ever mended anything. He was struggling with it and this is how Nupur find him. His face portrayed irritation. She smiled.

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"laen mein kr dete hoon."

Mayank turned to see Nupur with her hand out stretched. As he was already wearing the shirt so she moved closer to him. Her closeness was like a drug.. effecting his nerves…he wanted to pull her closer and enclose her in his arms… he wanted to shut the world out… to forget about everyone else except his wife…he wanted to confess his love…..but… (Nupur was already done with her work..) but..this was not the right time…..

Nupur looked up and smiled at him…their eyes were filled with love for each other…

Nigahon mein dekho meri, jo hai bas gayaaa..
Woh hai milta tumse hubahuu..
Ooo, jaane teri aankhein thi ya, baatein thi wajaaa..
Hue tum jo dil ki aarzoo...
Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.

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Gunjan was glancing at Sam flirting with girls. She felt a pang of unhappiness engulf her….she felt jealously flow through her body whenever Sam touched any of them….she had alredy realized her love for him..but he was different…he was an outgoing, flirt while she was an innocent girl completely unaware of anything except the fact that she loved him… from the core of her heart she loved him…..

Khayalon mein, lakhon baatein yun tu keh gaya...
Bola kuch na tere samne...

Sapne hain, palkon tale, tum se na jaane kyun.uuu....
Kaise bataayein, kyun tujhko chahe, yaara bataa na paaye.
Baatein dilo ki, dekho jo baaki, aankhein tujhe samjhaye.
Tu jaane naa.. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na
Tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaane na .. tu jaaaane na...

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Sam saw Gunjan looking at him….everyone was wearing red He was doing it all for her benefit…he loved her and now he wanted to know her feelings…. Being a man of much experience may not have prepared him for innocence of Gunjan but his experience had taught him one thing… if a girl is jealous she surely loves you….

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Gunjan was sitting alone on one side …

"will you mind dancing with me?"

she looked up at Sam's smiling face and outstretched hand.

Her face lit up and she placed her hand in his….

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Mayank was standing beside Mr. Bushan listening to him when he saw Nupur descending the stairs like a princess all attired in the red saree he had gifted her…. He excused himself and moved towards her to receive her. her hair were falling down on her shoulders just the way Mayank liked and she was wearing the locket he had gifted her .

He moved her towards the dance floor and as if in a trance …..

He enclosed her in his arms and danced with her …

Nupur felt as if his arms was the only place she belonged to… the only place she felt safe…

She placed her head on his chest and danced along….


I've never seen you looking so lovely as you did tonight …
I've never seen you shine so bright ..
I've never seen so many men ask you if you wanted to dance..
They're looking for a little romance, given half a chance …
I have never seen that dress you're wearing …
Or the highlights in your head that catch your eyes I have been blind…
The lady in red is dancing with me cheek to cheek..
There's nobody here, it's just you and me, It's where I wanna be …
But I hardly know this beauty by my side ..
I'll never for get, the way you look tonight ….

Mayank: " I love you Nupur…"

Nupur felt her breath caught. She looked up at him …she finally saw the love she wanted to see in his eyes…

Nupur: " I love you too.."

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Sam held Gunjan closer….
I've never seen you looking so gorgeous as you did tonight …
I've never seen you shine so bright you were amazing ..
I've never seen so many people want to be there by your side…
And when you turned to me and smiled, It took my breath away …
I have never had such a feeling..
Such a feeling of complete and utter love, as I do tonight ..

The way you look tonight ..
I never will forget, the way you look tonight …
The lady in red ..
The lady in red ..
The lady in red ..
My lady in red .

Sam: " I love you Gunjan……"
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Posted: 14 years ago
OK!..so on time Ma'am, i was about to logout!...😆.

OMG..the update was so romantic..😍 😍

I LOVE MAYANK!..he is so dreamy and so perfect!.😍, i loooovvveeedd his note on the sari..so sweet and so romantic..😳

and his stance in front of uday, gunajn and samrat, "we continue from where we left in the morning..😲 😳 😆

lovely mulan, a great valentines treat!..

and all the best for ur rehearsals tomorrow, 🤗

and yes SAJAN were also nice, but MAYUR....😍
Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one dear waiting for the confession.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part-15
beautiful update.
d song situation was so funny.......bechara samrat!!!
mayur kiss was............awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
loved them
mayur always roxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
waiting for more mayur..........their bonding gtn stronger day by day.........n it ws worth watching :-)
update soon.
thanks for the pm.
Part-16
wonderful udpate
it was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo romantic
awesome
mayur again roxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
mayank was so sweet........how sweet he proposed nupur n give her saree...........beautiful.
loved it.
shirt scene was also very cute.
OMG!!! finally mayur confess their love..........yayyyyy..........m happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
n samrat also confess to gunjan.........
hmmmm.................its interesting.
update soon.
waiting for more mayur scene.
thanks for the pm.
Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 15
awsome update
and wow what a song
lover it
cont soon
love
tanzeel
Edited by hiiiiiiiiiii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited
PART 15

"asusaul her courage failed but the urge to touch him was too strong and finally she moved closer and lightly brushed the hair away." –Aww..love will make us do almost anything…such a pure moment!!

Not only Mayank, I too was surprised by Nupur's display of affection…It was nice to see though!! I'm glad that Mayank's heart won over his mind in this issue…thinking too much is not good in matters of love…

" my wife seems to be never satisfied nowadays." – Mayu is becoming very naughty these days!! Poor Nupur….

Sajan part was nice!

PART 16

"Mayank: (cutting in) "while we can continue where we left of this morning. What say Mrs. Nupur Sharma?"" –oooh….Mayu is becoming too naughty yaar!! He keeps teasing Nupur but I love how he keeps calling her "my wife" or mrs.sharma…so cute!!

I loved the card and Mayu's note!!

Buttons & Mayur seemed to have a special connection… reminded me of the pre-Sajda moments!

Girls & Jealousy – it's true na?

Nupur coming down and Mayu receiving her and then the dance and then the confession…….it was sooooooooooooo magical!!

Sajan confessed as well…wow!

Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago

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