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drmaha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#381

it was the bestest update of urs.........😊 i just loved it dearest.........

whole scene of stage performance was dam gud.......
but sami should not have do ths........y he came between both of thm...........😭

aab maza ayyeiga doonoo ko........specially mayank......😆

u r too gud .........tumhara update padh k m really happy........

now update sooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn......................😛

plshhhhhhhhhhhhhh....................

love ya dear..........

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#382

As we are at chapter 10 I want u to answere sum of my questions…tht will really help me as they help me at BYLM time..

what is the best thing abt this ff
so far the bst part/dialogue/moment u felt
worse or bad thing
a moment u want to read…except…there confession marriage n truth reveal..as all of it is part of ths ff but at certain time

plssssssssss to answer me …im dying to read abt this….but don't forget to coment regarding this part to

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drmaha

@drmaha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#383

what is the best thing abt this ff

i love the relationshp with blind trust........😊

so far the bst part/dialogue/moment u felt

Mayank: kya ?kya ?problem hai ?..han nhi pasand?.mjhy nhi pasad koi bhi..KOI BHI?.nhi dkh sakta kisi ko bhi tumharay asa pass?.tumharay sath ..yeah haq sirf mera hai..bs?tumharay ghusay per?tumharay narazagi per?tumhary nakauroo per?tumharay her pall per sirf mera haq hai?. Mein tum se door raho , pass raho?.tum se bhago na bhago?.tum se laro ya na larooo?..tum per sirf mera haq hai?

Jab mein ny apni her baat, apna her dard , apni her khushi , apna her kahwab sirf tumharay sath share kiya aur khabhi kisi k sath nhi tu tum kasay ker sakti hoo yeah?

I LOVE THT DIALOGUES........IT CLEARLY SHOWING THE INTERNAL PAIN OF MAYANK, HIS UNSAID WORDS, HIS LOVE TOWARDS NUPUR......., HIS POSSESSIVENESS.........I AM SO TOUCHED FIZA.....

worse or bad thing

CANT IMAGINE MAYANK AS A DRUG ADDICT......

a moment u want to read…except…there confession marriage n truth reveal..as all of it is part of ths ff but at certain time

WANT TO KNOW HOW MAYANK CHANGED.......HOW HE BECOME ADDICT......WHT WAS THE REASON.......

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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Posted: 14 years ago

#384

wow..........this is the best part of this ff.........par ab kya hoga......tu itne suspence par kyun khatam ki.....plz yaar jaldi se update kar dena

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#385

Another Awesome Update Fiza...

Loved It Dil sy ❤️

and i loved the friendship and trust on each other..i loved every thing of the FF...

and to pick one dialog its so diificult yarr..

as i said before u have great writing skills...

loved ur humour..

and i didnot find anything bad in the FF...

and i want more samrat teasing moments...

and u r doing very good justise with ur FF...

so everything is perfect...

Edited by -moona- - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#386

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hayeeee..mai kya comment karun..mai to abhi bhi uo college ke stage pe khoyi uyi hoon😍😳
itna sona part uo bhi mere liye😳..
thank you shank you jee
nahi ab aisa nahi karungi..😆
OMG...ab mujhe bhi play ki reharsal karni hai😉🤣🤣
hayeee...uo dialouges then?😲..mayank to apni baat keh raha tha😆
nupur kokuch kuch huya na😳🤣
dekho jaldi se nupur ko kuch kuch karwao🤣
i cant wait for that😳

acha now coming to the questions

what is the best thing abt this ff.......the frndship bond..between mayank nupur and also sami..😃
so far the bst part/dialogue/moment u felt....chapter 10..mujhe is part ka har dialouge acha laga..balki best laga...😳😳
worse or bad thing...mayank ki uo buri halat..mujhse dekhi..matlab padhi nahi gayi😭😭
a moment u want to read...samarat and mayank moment after mayank realize his feelings😳😳

par hume kya milega is questions ka answer karke🤣..ek romantic and mayurish OS to milna chahiye atleast😳

love
tasfia

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago