FF-MGt~2~*My Dark Lover*part 35 pg 104 note pg117

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#751

loved it..superb ending...we want more ff's

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Swati Chowdhury

@MishtyShona

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#752

Fantastic yaar... An emotional ending... Will miss this FF yaar...

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#753

explanation

well

there relationship is deep…. if you think about from the beginning she knows him since the age of 11…. he betrayed her sister. torture… purely everything she went through she blames raj…. for geet & raj… this pain is there love. geet loves his pain… thats why raj shouts… i don't he shouts this.. but u can presume…. that his pain only belongs to geet & geets happiness lies in his pain…. opposite of love…. there relationship is way too complicated for me to explain😆

i need 10 more parts and i know u all only want mannets….

geet basically speeded 9 years of her life wasting on raj…. planning on how to destroy him… & maan only few months… she knows raj inside out but maan only few months…. she loved maan… but her mind always revolved round raj…. her main aim became to destroy raj…. that was her first piority… nothing mattered to her untill maan walked in… and thats when it hit her…she is in love but even if she wanted she could never give him everything… her love was limited…. because raj hatread was in her. it was powerful then love…

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Dilsay

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

explanation

well
there relationship is deep'. if you think about from the beginning she knows him since the age of 11'. he betrayed her sister. torture' purely everything she went through she blames raj'. for geet & raj' this pain is there love. geet loves his pain' thats why raj shouts' i don't he shouts this.. but u can presume'. that his pain only belongs to geet & geets happiness lies in his pain'. opposite of love'. there relationship is way too complicated for me to explain😆
i need 10 more parts and i know u all only want mannets'.

geet basically speeded 9 years of her life wasting on raj'. planning on how to destroy him' & maan only few months' she knows raj inside out but maan only few months'. she loved maan' but her mind always revolved round raj'. her main aim became to destroy raj'. that was her first piority' nothing mattered to her untill maan walked in' and thats when it hit her'she is in love but even if she wanted she could never give him everything' her love was limited'. because raj hatread was in her. it was powerful then love'

Very well explained .Excellent theme and character sketching.Most appropriate and excellent ending that could have been given to this track. 👏

Brilliant piece of imagination and thinking . ❤️❤️❤️❤️ ya Keyama.

Please keep writing.

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Eram

@viny_queen

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#755

It was a emotional ending...😒....felt very sad😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

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siroilily

@siroilily

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#756

Thank u for d explanation. Im feeling better😭

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pinky

@bpinky

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#757

hey i love this FF very much n whn i read the last part i ws crying😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭...i jst dnt knw wht happend bt i ws reading n suddenly my eyes were full of tears n i ws crying....i really felt vry sad n bad for maan n geet😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭....geet shud nt hv planned to do suicide i felt so....evryone hs some past n geet's past is traumatic bt maan being there vth her evry moment, i feel she cud hv startd a new life vth maan.....maan's love is so strng tht geet hs to accept it n geet too fell in love vth him....i lovd tht geet decided to marry him bt den she did suicide n i can visualize it while reading so d credit goes to u dear...u hv wrote it in a such a way tht i can visualize the scene in frnt of my eyes....wow....excellent job👏👏👏👏👏👏👏....outstanding performance👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏....my words r poor to praise ur writting skills, good job⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.....n den whn i read d epilogue, again my eyes were full of tears....geet waited at the gate of heaven for him to come n den dey both enterd der wow👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...i lovd tht bt i ws very vry emotional whn i read wht written on geet's grave😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭.....n u knw evn i tried to focus on other work to come out frm d effect of this end, i failed badly cos my heart n mind cud nt think abt anythng else except this end....i ws in very emotional state, it took me 2-3 hours to come out from d emotional state aftr reading this end....amazing writter n claps for u 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏cos d true writter is the one who can make d reader feel d emotion of characters n u did it⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️....thank u so much for lovely ff....love u dear.....

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love-water

@love-water

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#758

Just sarted to read this Ff of urs! Seems like not a happy ending!

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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#759

It was so sad :(( but that was an amazing story ...

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Najiba

@najch

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#760

I held on from reading the last part for so long for obvious reasons. And I have to say it was phenonmenal. The ending made me cry, Maan's love was so beautiful. And you etched the last bit with the heaven sequence so ethereally - I don't know what to say.