Promise and Pyar FF#2 (Thanks buddies - Pg 128)

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BluntlySpeaking

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Posted: 14 years ago

#661

hey tonya....started reading ur thread just yesterday and since then havent stopped laughing.....outstanding fiction!! perky, crisp and oh so humorous! i am a great fan of fiction written in 1st person.....pls add me to ur PM

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#662

Part 449
M:(shocked,lowers his gaze&looks @ himself 2 check whether he is wearing shirt&takes a long breath)(buddies,ye geetne sach mein maanko pagal kardiya)
dadi:(confused)shirt?
M:geet whose shirt u r talking abt?
G:(still eyes closed&points 2 TV again)his shirt
maan&dadi both turn 2wards TV¬ices tht Lord Ram is being shirtless
maan&dadi:(blast in2 laughter)
G:(opens her eyes&stares @ them)y u both r laughing?
M:(could't control laughing)geet wht did u say? Lord Ram aur Shirt(again blasts in2 laughter)
G:(she is very happy2see maan laughing like this.she is silently staring@him)

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namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#663

omg...now she wants lord Rama to wear shirt...

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#664

Part 450
dadi(stops laughing&staring@her grandson with her eyes wideopen)
M:(holding his stomach&still laughing)
geet&dadima r staring @ him unbelievably
after few minutes
M:(stops laughing&stares@dadi&geet)aap log yesa kyun dekh rahe hai?
geet&dadi:(don't want 2 make him feel embarassed or emotional.so both ignore his question)
G:so is he Lord Ram?
M:geet,haven't u ever watched Ramayan?
G:nai
dadi:par geet beta,just nw u said tht u like Ramayan very much?
G:i lied 2 u.sorry dadima
dadi:(smiles)koi bath nai beta
G:is he Lord Ram?
M:geet he's nt Lord Ram.He is Gurmeet Choudhry,famous actor

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roopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#665

i think maan is reallllyyyyyyyy smithen by GC just like manisha by maan
hahahahahahahahaha🤣🤣

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#666

Part 451
G:kya?Gurmeet Choudhry doesn't wear shirt?
dadi:geet beta he does.bt thn&thre he strips his shirt in GHSP serial(buddies,no offence)
G:par ye tho Ramayan hai.has Gurmeet stripped his shirt in Ramayan too?
dadi:beta...
M:dadima,i'll deal with geet
dadi:(smiles)
G:(stares@maan)
M:no geet,he hasn't stripped it
G:thn whre is his shirt?
M:geet,in Ramayan,Gurmeet is acting as Lord Ram
G:hmm(listening2him carefully as if maan is telling her d entire Ramayan story)
M:so he can't wear shirt in Ramayan
G:kyun?
M:Lord Ram din use 2 wear shirt
G:kyun?
M:Ramayan happened in itihas period
G:hmm

Edited by tonyahk - 14 years ago

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leen10leen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#667

hahahhaaa.....srsly this is one of my favs....

cnt get enough of it...

u r a great writer...

plz continue soon..

n do add me to ur pm list if u have one...😊

n yeah....143...lol

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heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#668

G:Gurmeet Choudhry doesn't wear shirt?
dadi:geet beta he does.bt then &there he rips his shirt in GHSP serial(buddies,no offence)
G:par ye tho Ramayan hai.has Gurmeet ripped his shirt in Ramayan also?
dadi:beta...
M:dadima,i'll deal with geet
dadi:(smiles)

That was aweeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssooooooooooooome my stomach is aching and my 3 years old son is just staring at me

Tonyahk mission killing us

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#669

Part 453
M:geet,in Ramayan period there were no shirts.so Lord Ram din wear shirt
G:hmm
dadi:(staring@maneet lovingly)
M:have all ur doubts cleared nw?
G:ek aur hai
M:(rolls his eyes)pucho
G:u r saying tht in Ramayan period thre were no shirts.tht is y Lord Ram din wear shirt.hena?
M:hmm
G:Ramayan serial shooting must have taken place in recent times only.hena?
M:hmm
G:in these days lot of shirts r available in market.hena?
M:hmm
G:thn y Lord Ram in Ramayan serial doesn't wear shirt?
M:geet tumari problem kya hai?
G:Lord Ram's shirt
M:wht is ur problem in his shirt?
G:his shirt itself
M:??