MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 35

kinza !!!!!!!! u ended thios part at such a wrong moment! :(
haye!!! kya kahoon mein tmen? 👏 tum itna acha likhte kaise ho pehle to ye batao!!! 😆
too good yar!!!!!! eveything , every dialogue was sooo perfectly fitting the situation!!!!!
uff! too good kinza!!!!! 😊

amazing part!!!👏awesome!
each dialogue was perfect!!
cont soon😊

Awesum Mehak

Cinderella, Sorry for the the late comment.

Nupur build up so much hope, only to have crumble down to nothing when he whsipered, " i'm the one who raped you" gosh, a women would have rather died than to see the man who ruined her life. This kind of scar on a womens life never gets erased, its there even though its not their, every moment reminding you of the pain and agony you have to go through for being a helpless women.

I loved Nupur in is avatar the stiiff and hard one who has collected all the pain inside and now its all bulging out in form of anger for mayank. She has gone through so much pain that now she has become a rock. And Maayank deserved each and every words she shot towards him. I'm very happy that you showed her a strong willed women.

Though i feel sad for priya, she had just begun to bond with Mayank, she found a mirror of her father in mayank, but sadly she too naive to know the truth, her young age and little understanding of the world makes her unknown to the faults her dad has.!

I LOVE this story, Its beautifully written and you are doing full justice to it cinderella. looking forward to whats coming next.

Sajjal

Great update dear

OMGGGGG... he so deserved this...... i am so proud of Nupz......

nice yar ye to hona hi chaiye . rpae is really a very big crime .

or punishment to banti hi hai

wonderfully described part............!!!!!!!w8ng to knw wht will happen nxt...........!!!!!

This ws a perfect update...U described this as a manner that its happening infront of ur eyes...Brilliantly portrayed MN's character even the dialogues wr very strong...
Im very proud of nupur...I wanted this kind of reaction from her...She should not spare him so easily...And for Mayank its the punishment for his deed...Now looking forward to the future and waiting for 'their daughter'...

Mehak.......Awesome update........👏

well Nupur is right..........n Mayank however regretful he is........can't be forgiven............this.crime has no proper justice associated wid it...............even if he repents.................i dunno but feel bad for them both.........

Thanks for sharing😃