Did I whisk your heart away?...Part3 Pg10 01/29/11 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

No! Pls dont tell me Abhi is in love with Riddhima! I hate when that happens!Ya, me too but Abhi is awesome, isn't he...we love him! Cuz then like Nikki is kind of the "second one", you know? THE SECOND FIDDLE...u mean lol...don't worry Nikki wouldn't have to compromise in this ff.Urrgghhhh.. anyways, nice ff :)lol...glad to know you liked it at the end of the day. thnx for taking out time form ur schedule to encourage me. Have a nice day and abt th epm...sure thing!

Pls add me to the pm list!
Sheena :)

Hey there, Sheena! To be honest, I found this comment of yours very interesting...so I looked up your posts and started following ur ff "Another Chance ofr us". Infact, until now I was so stubborn about not reading AN ffs...that nothing on earth would make me read one. But this simple comment made me wonder how good a writer u'd be! Maybe...u won't realize it even if u read the lines above a couple of times! The monologue u had with urselves...trying to convince urself more about the fact that Abhi loves Riddhima lol! You are my resolve-breaker...I have finally started reading AN stuff too lol!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: malluangel

dedn... i like your writing style, totally didnt think abhi would be the dude...

lol...ya....the chances of Abhi-Riddhima seem so bleak..no one believes it! Thnx a lot for appreciating my writing, especially stmg like that coming from an amazing writer like you is a big pat on my back! btw....what's dedn... curiosity lol! Have a nice day!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
wow
this is just amazingly beautiful
n awesome too
love it too much
Riddhima n Abhi, together, sounds interesting, God knows whats up next,
n then Armaan Shanky n Smriti, nice one,
wow, Armaan's giftm hayye, dad, kahaan ho aap, just look at these gifts, lol,
n tht girl, i seriously hope its Riddhima, wudnt want anyone else,
thanks for the pm, n update soon

love
pooja
Edited by kweetrockstar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: repercussion

Hey there, Sheena! To be honest, I found this comment of yours very interesting...so I looked up your posts and started following ur ff "Another Chance ofr us". Infact, until now I was so stubborn about not reading AN ffs...that nothing on earth would make me read one. But this simple comment made me wonder how good a writer u'd be! Maybe...u won't realize it even if u read the lines above a couple of times! The monologue u had with urselves...trying to convince urself more about the fact that Abhi loves Riddhima lol! You are my resolve-breaker...I have finally started reading AN stuff too lol!

Hey, I was just checking to se if you updated, and I saw you replied to my comment. :)
Yes, my pet peeve is Nikki being "the second fiddle", as you put it. In the show it just felt like Nikki was so.... i dont know, new to the feeling, i guess; and Abhi had been through so much... it just didn't feel right to me... But i guess thats how love is, isnt it? You fall in love not looking at the person's past, just for who they are. I guess thats what matters the most. :)
And haha, Im glad you have started reading AN too... they are a wonderful couple, just like the rest. And yes, I have writen a lot of ff's, but I just dont get time to write. There are such wonderful concepts to be explored, but so much less time. Lol, sometimes I laugh at myself and ask," What am I doing? I already have so many ff's going on." But I cant stop myself. :)
Pls do update soon! Lots of confusion going on in my head lol! And can I know your name?
Sheena <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Nice FF....pls PM me whn updated.....!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
just read u r ff , luved it..........
do pm me when u update..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chocolatefreak

Heeeeyyyyyyyyyy woooooooowwwwwwwwww That was an awesomeeee parttttt,Thanks for reading it and appreciating it as well! sorry cudnt reply b4 was reallyyyybusyyy s read both the parts togedrrr...Awww...that's perfectly fine...Busy= Life lol!
amazzingggg ur story is beautiful nd ur a wonderful wonderful writer...Awww (again lol) Thanks a lot! The same goes for you as well!
nd wooooowwwww finalllllyyyyyy armaaan saw riddhima i think nd he reallly is mesmerized...Hmmm...that's for you to find out...woooooowwwww cant wait 4 him to falll in luvvvvv....Me either but let's await their destinies!
awesome going nd mr modi likes riddhima omg cant wait to c the story proceeding
and thankuuu for the pm My pleasure!
and plzzzz doooo continuee sooooooooooooooooon yaaaaaaaaaaar 🤗 I have a week off next week...planning to update atleast 2-3 parts then to make up for the delays!
Wid lotsss ov luvvvv...Love you too! Have a nice day!
rida

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey there! How are we? As promised, I'd be updating quite a many parts starting Tuesday. For now...savor the teaser! The teaser does not necessarily or better, truly represent the next part in its entirety or the upcoming parts for that matter....but something's good to devour while I cook the seven course meal, eh? 😉

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"The baby kicked....he just...OMG...Nikki!"

"He did? Awww....lemme feel it too..." said an excited Nikki while Riddhima shook her head giggling, her eyes ebullient with joy.

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"Ahem-Ahem....This is for you, Riddhima"' he whispered huskily.

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"I love you, Riddhima.........."

"I love you too, Armaan....I don't love him, anymore..." she replied sensuously licking the chocolate dripping along the edge of her lips.

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"Ethereal beauty.....she's gorgeous....." Armaan whispered to himself while staring at the photograph, sprawled lazily across his bed.

"Forget her, Armaan....."

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" You may, now, kiss the bride...."

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So, any predictions, comments, expectations or ideas (I'd be honored to reflect your imaginations here and there in the next couple of parts).... More than eager to read your opinion of the teaser a.k.a precap a.k.a promo...ya you get it right? PM service only to friends on the list for the teaser!






Edited by repercussion - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Lol i tnk uve taken da charge of gving heartataks to ppl lol r u inspird by sherlock or james bond ms queen of suspense
i read it 5 times to exactly get ur upcmng story rofl hehe its realy nt simple yar smetng realy bg cukng in ur mind lol i feel v al vl b tnkng smetng nd ul b gving us dhersare jhatke
nw seriusly cnt wait to read da story im hel impatient and al ur fault lol nw gv da parts super fast
yar 1 tng i wantd to say as its an ar ff so there r particularly 3 ridhimas nd we al r frm difrent fngroupz nd we respect each odr vry mch na and al us kashians luv shlpa so its realy obvius tat we supose hr as ridhima
al i wnt to say is as its an ar ff so bringng in shlpa as anodr charactr wud distrb us kashianz coz dn hw vl v take ridima as shlpa nd dn v cnt c shlpa nd ammy seperatd again
ur just an awesme awesme awesme writer who produces a stuning story out nd um totaly nd deeply in luv wd ur ff nd lol cnt wait to read mre of it nd da teaserz r mindblowng update sun nd tnku 4 da pm it means alot
bubye
rida
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: repercussion

lol...ya....the chances of Abhi-Riddhima seem so bleak..no one believes it! Thnx a lot for appreciating my writing, especially stmg like that coming from an amazing writer like you is a big pat on my back! btw....what's dedn... curiosity lol! Have a nice day!



tis true that... noone expect abhi n rhidz cuz they werent a possiblity ever since he "met" nikki 😆
thank u for liking my writing😃 but its not that amazing... haha but take all the pats u want😆
and dedn, was supposed to be dedan like u kno dedan dedan dedan try saying it....
which is like 2 weeks after he "fell" for rhidz... that boy wears his heart on his sleeve... hmm

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