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amruta04

@amruta04

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

hey dear awesome one shot very well written loved it do write more take care and thanks for the pm.

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Access_Denied

@Access_Denied

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Fighting wid exmaz
but read it coz cudnt control!
gimme some time i'll surely update ma comment😆😆

You wrote it superb
THUMBS UP

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

aww u guys are all so sweet. aankho mein aansu aa gaye mere to😆

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diyaa1pk

@diyaa1pk

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

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hey dr sani basket rani 😉....first tell me KAHAN GAIB THEI.😡.....

missed u nd ur FF....OS.😭...

now to ur OS😛 ......

hmmmm.......kya kahoon😕 .....really nice nd sweet story with a very sensitive bakground ......

yea dis used to happn ...still happns bt ppl r gettng awareness ...

..TRUTH IS ALWAYS BITTER ....may be ppl do get offended ....nd dis is nt only da case in pakistan ...bt in india bangla desh too ..im pakistani my self.....nd im okie with dis OS becuz i kno abt dark side of our society

basically problm wid dis mind set is dat ..... they seem to change outwardly....moving in a good society .....developing kno how of how act as a civilized person ....bt they wat they cant change is dre mental state ....da rural ..nd fuedlistic upbringing jst penetrates in dre soul ...nd no matter how modern dey become ...they cant leave it behind....

DAUGHTER ARE PRIZED POSSESSIONS.....bt they are not tobe thrown away nd treated like sm usesless ..lifeless being .....

bt sad thng is ....even now dey are bartered.....

OYE STOP ME ......i can go on nd on .....😆

loved loved loved it ......really nice

started off on a serious note .....nd i was checkng nd re chnkng ....if its really written by u ....SANI KYUN ITNNI SERious hoo rehhi hai ....kya hoo gaya hai ....

bt then SSG perh kar sakoon aya ....sani is okie alright ...nothng happened....

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.........

MAY ALLAH BELSS U MORE .....keep spreading happiness

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

nooooooooooo i don't like res es. diya jeeeee better edit it soon😆

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: x.sunayna.x
Hey ! Thanks for the PM !
This is an amazing one shot, completley different to anything else in this forum :) You wrote a fantastic OS on such a touchy topic and showed Riddhima/Rihana emotions !

Its crazy that things like that still happen! Anyway, loved the whole runaway scene, AR - super cute :) Especially the river scene !

Freaked me out when her family where at the British embassy ! But lucky they're rotting in prison now !

Prom scene - even more cute ! Armaan is just adorable !

P.s OMG You named the older sister Aaliyah - its the name i've reserved for when i have kids in like a million years :) !! I LOVE the name !

Looking forward to more OS' and fanfic updates !

first of all thanks sunayna for the praises. yup i was shocked myself reading about all the news and stuff.

yeeee armaan is always adorable man.😆 but riddhima is surely a dim wit. bechare ne itne signs diye phir bhi nahi samajh paayi😆 thank you for ur comments😃

aww u like that name? LOL it's my friends name😆

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
awesome os
loved it
loved the concept
fab work
beautifully written
thanks 4 da pm

thank you😃

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: salinashah
hey amazing OS sweety i never ever read this kind of OS ,that was sooooooooo amazing
well thnx for the pm

plz do write more OS

love u

salina

haha being different is in my blood😆 thank you

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Neha.K.
I rarely comment on ffs...but ur writing somewhere forced me to tell you that "THIS WAS AWESOME" nd well written..very different concept...

Good Work Sani..😊 A big applause to you for this

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OMG am touched and elated that u think my os was worth ur time and comments😃 thank you

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL
sani...im at lost for words....i dont know how to leave the long comment u wanted...im overwhelmed with emotions...just one thing...you're amazing :]

what meri chapar chapar machine is loss at words😲😆

that doesn't suit ur personality jaan😆 thank you so much😃