The Abandoned Child - AR OS [25 dec, 2010]

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aisha_ranbir8

@aisha_ranbir8

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

hey loved the OS ..............its such a beautiful.......n mature story........... n each character portrayed all the emotion required perfectly...............riddhima i could understand her pain n loss she faced ...... n armaan's pain which he couldnt show............. n their love towards their child n each other is so unconditional................. n nick who had suffered so much in life at such a small age n trust n love he showed in riddhima waz beautiful............... loved the OS .........U R an amazing writer ............u write all the moments so perfectly dat i could imagine each thing ............. anywaz thanks for sharing a such mature story n a golden piece by u..............anywaz take care...........love aish.................

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Euphoria.

@Euphoria.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

this oneshot made me cry so badly!

my vision is still hazy as i am typing this reply! god it was tooooooo emotional!!!

i simply loved the way you showed both armaan and riddhima's POVs towards aryan's death ... as much as i would hav eloved it if aryan was alive, the fact that nick is taking his place could not have been any better! truly it is perfection in imperfection!

and that adoption bit of the puppy too was brought in so well! simply loved every single thing in this oneshot and it is truly one of the best i have read in quite some time! and basically to sum up all my feelings ... this oneshot was FANTASTIC and OUT OF THIS WORLD! 👏

keep it up and do write more :D