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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Okay...so it seems like I'm finally pulled back into commenting like I used to before. This is kind of semi-sentimental for me because I feel like I've missed out on this and I've kept out of the loop here for you too....😭

Alright enough with the tear shedding back to the story....there were lines that just caught me when I read them and this post is primarily about what I felt about those
This entire update I felt as if people were too much into their inner turmoil which was portrayed in their silence. They were silent for themselves to try resolve this inner conflict and silent for others too (which came out as silent treatment). Sab apni hi dhun mein hai. Koi kya soch kar raha hai, mehsoos kar raha hai, iske liye sochne ke bhi fursat kahan. Apne me hi uljhe hain sab. Khud ko suljhaenge tab hi to doosron ko samjhenge na
1) "Chaddo...Aate hi phone mein lag gaye. There was simply no hope for men who married their gadgets first and wives second" --- Agree to that cent per cent! I often think men are married to cricket or sports first and then wives second...
2) "While I walked from the elevator to the door, I could not help but wonder that as we aged into the relationship, we all had simple wants, but we never could be simple enough though. " --- Doesn't this follow for every relationship? Somewhere deep inside everyone wants simplicity in life. If only things were like this, could be categorized like that, etc. People say things are as simple as you make them --> this is true to some extent but doesn't apply all the time.
3) "If this how strong Miss Sherni was, then rest assured I knew Geet would soon make a mousy return from SF in no less than a week" --- the only thing that popped up in my head after I read this was "HEY watch it" Lol just an instinctive reaction thats all ;-)
4) "To me, it seemed that as time passed it could only stop memories from haunting you often. But it never did teach anything about what you do when the same scars spring back into life and stare at you in midday light. " ---I can't even try and express on what I felt after reading that. It's beautiful and lets just leave it at that for now
5) Lastly, "What more could I seek, when cold souls only asked for warm comfort? It was Mayday for everyone." --- At the risk of being repetitive, I LOVE YOUR ENDINGS!! Rather than the update I'm always more interested in the endings hehe
This was more like a post of what I liked and not at all like an analysis but I couldn't help myself :-D



Its so good to see you here once again. I never did ask you when you were planning on coming back, but honestly I'm glad you did before I could ask you.
But We should have a bash...now that you are back...so that you remove that cry smiley from there.

Imagine the situation at home, turmoil is just bound to be. I mean Geet's past is in the newspapers and Maan's sister is a mess and she is in the papers too. Above all the frigidness between the sis and Bro.

Just like Einstein said, it only difficult to make things simpler.
Gosh! please dont raise your expectations for the endings...they are there alright. You know how its with me and compliments...you should know better.

Keep writing....it will be good to see you more often too...even if you dont want to comment.

Using Pushpi's quote post to announce something.

I'm moving to thrid person omniscient style from the next update. So please bear with me....coz I'm unable to take the monologue crap anymore.

Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago



Ok... looks like you posted on the wrong thread....pixie...whatz up? how come you are lost? 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am a lost soul who is always lost!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Marvellous
Loved this a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement



Oh! Thanks so much...(She blushes!)
So the title is just apt for a marriage you see.
You are tied to the other person in everyday...In the mind, in speech and in actions...
In sanskrit its called the three vajra...how an individual is made of.

Godavari song asalu gurtu raa ledhu naaku. Endukante...nenu vaala pelli theme gurinchi aalochana lo vunnanu appudu....😆
(I didnt remember the song at all coz I was in to the theme of their marriage)

LOL You made me write in Telugu in an open forum...something I would never do.

Hasini


haha yes the trivajram yet the goal of life is vairaagyam (at least wut the vedantas say...😉)
lol well i am kinda honored that i made u write in telugu 😃 haha... meeku gurtuki vacchina ledha ur subconscious mind did the trick for u 😆... manasa vaccha ninne maricha (beautifully rendered by Chitra n Unni Krishnan) is apt for the chapter n of course apt the theme of marriage in ur words
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks hasini for ur beautiful updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
So Hasini...Today's episode was all about Silent treatment. I'm going to enjoy it. Waiting for the videos to be aired.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Well I'm fairly new to forum but definitely not to your writing. This FF is absolutely amazing to say the least. I started reading it when you probably had about 35 parts written and I was so hooked I read all of them in one go. Now that I have finally signed up to the forum my first comment on someone else's FF had to yours. I admire your writing style and the way you depict emotions so wonderfully. And I loved the latest update, from Geet fainting to Dadi with a baseball bat was just classic. They all lost their minds and need some peace. I can't wait for the next update, especially San Fran. And please add me to your PM list I've already sent a buddy request!

Thank you and continue soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Limerance

Well I'm fairly new to forum but definitely not to your writing. This FF is absolutely amazing to say the least. I started reading it when you probably had about 35 parts written and I was so hooked I read all of them in one go. Now that I have finally signed up to the forum my first comment on someone else's FF had to yours. I admire your writing style and the way you depict emotions so wonderfully. And I loved the latest update, from Geet fainting to Dadi with a baseball bat was just classic. They all lost their minds and need some peace. I can't wait for the next update, especially San Fran. And please add me to your PM list I've already sent a buddy request!

Thank you and continue soon!



Oh! my what can I say? This is true flattery and I quite suck at receiving it well.
Anyways...Thanks so much Limerance to leave behind a message. It was quite thoughtful and also the first one? My My...
Since this is your first time n all, let me welcome you to the thread. "Welcome..."
Glad you liked the update. San Fran is two updates away...It starts off at 75 (You should know this by now, given my obsession with numbers and all)
Hope to see you around often.

Hasini
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime

So Hasini...Today's episode was all about Silent treatment. I'm going to enjoy it. Waiting for the videos to be aired.



Silent treatment everywhere...even me...I'm in the process of giving it to someone too... LOL


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