Okay...so it seems like I'm finally pulled back into commenting like I used to before. This is kind of semi-sentimental for me because I feel like I've missed out on this and I've kept out of the loop here for you too....😭
Alright enough with the tear shedding back to the story....there were lines that just caught me when I read them and this post is primarily about what I felt about thoseThis entire update I felt as if people were too much into their inner turmoil which was portrayed in their silence. They were silent for themselves to try resolve this inner conflict and silent for others too (which came out as silent treatment). Sab apni hi dhun mein hai. Koi kya soch kar raha hai, mehsoos kar raha hai, iske liye sochne ke bhi fursat kahan. Apne me hi uljhe hain sab. Khud ko suljhaenge tab hi to doosron ko samjhenge na1) "Chaddo...Aate hi phone mein lag gaye. There was simply no hope for men who married their gadgets first and wives second" --- Agree to that cent per cent! I often think men are married to cricket or sports first and then wives second...2) "While I walked from the elevator to the door, I could not help but wonder that as we aged into the relationship, we all had simple wants, but we never could be simple enough though. " --- Doesn't this follow for every relationship? Somewhere deep inside everyone wants simplicity in life. If only things were like this, could be categorized like that, etc. People say things are as simple as you make them --> this is true to some extent but doesn't apply all the time.3) "If this how strong Miss Sherni was, then rest assured I knew Geet would soon make a mousy return from SF in no less than a week" --- the only thing that popped up in my head after I read this was "HEY watch it" Lol just an instinctive reaction thats all ;-)4) "To me, it seemed that as time passed it could only stop memories from haunting you often. But it never did teach anything about what you do when the same scars spring back into life and stare at you in midday light. " ---I can't even try and express on what I felt after reading that. It's beautiful and lets just leave it at that for now5) Lastly, "What more could I seek, when cold souls only asked for warm comfort? It was Mayday for everyone." --- At the risk of being repetitive, I LOVE YOUR ENDINGS!! Rather than the update I'm always more interested in the endings heheThis was more like a post of what I liked and not at all like an analysis but I couldn't help myself :-D
Its so good to see you here once again. I never did ask you when you were planning on coming back, but honestly I'm glad you did before I could ask you.
But We should have a bash...now that you are back...so that you remove that cry smiley from there.
Imagine the situation at home, turmoil is just bound to be. I mean Geet's past is in the newspapers and Maan's sister is a mess and she is in the papers too. Above all the frigidness between the sis and Bro.
Just like Einstein said, it only difficult to make things simpler.
Gosh! please dont raise your expectations for the endings...they are there alright. You know how its with me and compliments...you should know better.
Keep writing....it will be good to see you more often too...even if you dont want to comment.
Using Pushpi's quote post to announce something.
I'm moving to thrid person omniscient style from the next update. So please bear with me....coz I'm unable to take the monologue crap anymore.
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