FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03 - Page 100

DISPLACEMENT1

remarkable,,,,
the bereavement...the longing for each other and the depth of their love is so beautifully put together...
especially the para where you described the hues fading and the tv noise as white noise was wonderful play of emotions...
also the part where the whits in his room blinded him and the lonliness was like the black hole...ohh just ultimate...what a brilliant use of metaphors...

i trully loved the update and have already read it thrice and can actually clearly visualize the effect of each line

The stubborness in geet of not accepting that she and him are going thru this phase just because of her implication that living away from him will only help her be self dependant...

and the woory that was etched when geet did not answer his calls...whenever any beloved lives away and you do not get an answer in first or second ring...you always tend to think negative...this is one aspect i have lived thru but have never been able to analyse it that why is it so...each time i decide that i would not behave pessimistic but each time i would fail...

i mean i am so carried away that i can keep on blabbering...
great piece of work..

DISPLACEMENT2

vow vow vow...
this was beautiful...
the subtlities like when he sat on the stairs of the chartered after hearing her voice...
her reaction on seeing him...and their sharing the silence...
great, brilliant., fabulous...

and also the enterance of rishabh finally...
so now we will get to see some of rishabh and naini...

looking forward to how all of them will deal with this new situation..

so maan & geet r missing each other
geet & maan r trying to busy themselves in work to forget their missing each other
awesome updt
loved it to the core
thnx 4 d pm

HOMECOMING PART1

i really like the way you have described rishabh's overbearing ego and his fight to atleast see nain i on pretext of finding geet...
but i am lil disappointed by naini's reactions...i know shw knows that she made a few mistakes but i was actually expecting some fireworks between them...as no one is ready to accept their faults in front of each other and would rather separate than compromise ...

really looking forward to maan rishabh dialogue...
and also the third pr4ecap...seems like love is in the air...

continue soon

wow...3 updates in a row...thats amazing...cant ask for more on my birthday...

part 79 was too good... really loved them... it was so painful to see them struggling to live without each other...

part 80 too was good... so Rishab has come for Naini...and not for Geet...

he actually thought that the Khurana's are dumbos...??


Thanks Hasini...

Part 80

Excellent
So Rishab came for Naini.