Originally posted by: ismita
Hello divya, Hello Ismita
This is my first time commenting on the story,I am a silent reader and very fond of this fan fiction.You have done a amazing work. Thank you hun. I am glad you are reading and liking this story. More glad that you commented this time. 😃
The reason I felt like commenting is seeing Prachi's pain. off lately the story is more focussed on Milind and sally's relationship and Prachi's inner turmoil.The poor girl has left everyone and her parents and came to a totally different place ,which is different in culture and upbringing.But she is trying her best to adjust in the new environment. Yes, that's where the focus lies now. Prachi is coping with a lot of things in her new life and as I said, this will be another learning curve for her.
I really could take her pain ,when Milind totally ignored her.Reading the update I felt ,Did Milind still have some feelings for Sally?How would Milind feel if Prachi dances so closely with Neev ignoring Him? Milind didn't ignore her but was giving her space as she didn't want to talk to him. Milind and Sally were a couple for almost three years. So, there's bound to be some sort of feelings involved there. As for Prachi dancing closely with Neev, I am sure we all know how the posessive and hot-tempered Milind Mishra would have reacted.
I don't know how you are going to shape the story.But really a bit explanation from Milind will not really help.I always felt whenever there was a party Milind kind of ignored Prachi.I really feel Prachi should take a break and go india for some time ,that will help Milind to sort out certain things in his Mind. Prachi is being taken for granted.Also it is high time that Milind knows what all Sally said to Prachi starting from the Party in india .Some of Prachi's reactions are because of Sally's comments . Really Milind needs to sort them out. he has to make up big time . Now Prachi is questioning her position in Milind which is the worst thing to happen to any women who had a love marraige.I feel some thing should really shake Milind to really understand Prachi's position in his life.Please don't get me wrong,I know Milind loves Prachi ,but after Marriage i some how felt his love is situational. I respect your opinion, so please don't feel bad about voicing it. As I mentioned earlier, I haven't covered Milind's thoughts yet. You are right, Prachi questioning her position is the worst thing that could happen to any women in a love or an arranged marriage. Prachi is reacting way too strongly to Sally at the moment and Milind has no idea about it. A lot of things can rock a marriage and going away from eachother will not solve such things. Prachi as you can see in this update has mentally stepped away from Milind and Miind has noticed that. That is worse than physical distance and let's see how things settle down for them.
Sorry for the long post .But I really love ur Fanfiction.Please update soon Thank you. I appreciate your commets. Loved reading them. Will update tomorrow.
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