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Posted: 14 years ago
Happy holi to you n ur family
It was very nice update loved it dear
plz continue soon
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Divya very nice, loved it , Shweta is such a sweet heart. In a way Milind was very right why did Prachi let her, poor Prachi being so jealous , not good for their relation. Awesome part loved it , continue soon.

what an amazing holi gift Thaks a ton Dear. muuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
oyyyye, cliffhanger!! :/ not cool, Divvya!! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was fab update been waiting for that...lol
it was sad bt cute
luv da bonding btw shweta and prachi
Can't wait for da next prt
Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part yaar loved it pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Happy Holi Divyaaaaa🥳

Perfect update,very well written...i was so worried that u r going to stretch the fight for 2 updates but glad its better this way..i know its not end here,we know milind cant stay angry withhis cherry for too long..and loved the kiss and i so xxpecting a long tight hug kher choddo🤔
shwetha is the BESTEST MIL❤️ ...prachi is really lucky ...and loved their BF scenes..and shwethas surprise birthday gift for milind and vicky is really cute but the last bit of the VDO made things more complicated for prachi,al these days she only heard of sally-milind childhood relationship but now witnessing herslef would be very hard for her and no wonder her insecurities reached new hights🥺
so vicky is leaving to india,so he is not the one whos goingto hear prachis miseries abt sal and mils past,i want milind tobe the one who hears out prachi and setles everything btW*Hemand want prachi to tell everything abt the first confrontation btw her and sally in that party in india b4 hteir weding..bcoz he is the righ t choice and he knows very well to which extent prachi should know abt his past with sally and what r all should be kept as a secret(which is not going to help her in anywhic ways)ami i right or u have other plans😳whatever BRING IT ON DIVYA...its time we get into the past of milsi sally relationship iam as much as curious as prachi to findout their past milind can keep secrets with prachi but not withus ok😆
Milind is a sweetheart he phoned prachi to chk with her ..poor guy is startving all day,😔hope the party i the evening easeout things muchmore and want to see my MICHI happy in EO arms❤️
Update fasht divya no delay this time,start writing 😎
Love u🤗
TC..❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi di,

nice update😊
love shwetha...she is the best!

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautiful update Divya !! This is one of my favorite chapters so far because of the way it was written. Loved the way you potrayed each and every scene especially the one between Milind and Prachi and the Shweta and Prachi. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Liz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Divya,

Superb update yaar!!! Brilliantly written…I think this by far is your best writing.

Miling reacted as expected. He really has no control over his temper when he loses it. Though very cruel, he was absolutely right in pointing that Prachi was only thinking about herself. But he should have also judged that something somewhere is very wrong. Prachi is not the one who will take Shweta's scolding to heart and sulk and create a scene. He didn't even catch on when Prachi reacted vehemently to his "letting Sally take her place." He did ponder for a minute or so but than his anger got the better off him. May be later on when he thinks about all this coolly he will catch on to the main problem.

Prachi also reacted very badly and immaturely. By the time she realized her mistake the damage was done. After every showdown with Sally, Prachi promises herself she will not let her bother her but every time she reacts more and more and now the results are getting disastrous. She has hurt the whole family. Poor Shweta was left wondering that Prachi is upset because of her. Anand is upset more so because Shweta is upset. Vicky must also be very hurt with her "traitor". Prachi really needs to watch out and get her thoughts and emotions in order before she ruins her every relationship.

Milind has always made light of what he had with Sally in the past; and to cover up for that he refuses to see what the real problem is. Prachi on the other hand is getting glimpses of their past every day and is becoming a nervous wreck as she has no one to share her problems with. These two really need to sit down and TALK!!! Prachi desperately need to speak out all that she feels about Sally and real fast. Why is she scared to speak about Sally with Milind? Is it so because she is scared of facing Milind's anger and reaction? But who less can assure her than him? This lack of communication between the two is very unhealthy and disappointing.

The scene between Shweta and Prachi was absolutely fantastic. Loved the way Shweta took the initiative and cleared everything. Shweta has always made every effort to ease in and assist Prachi in her new life. And to think that Prachi was offended because of her must have really have hurt her. Thankfully these two didn't bottle up and cleared the misunderstanding. The best part about the conversation was even though Prachi was at fault Shweta never harped at it and was focused only on reassuring her and calming her. She is such a sweet MIL. Prachi is very lucky. She is well aware of her son's famous temper so knew that Milind must have been angry with Prachi and tried making up for hi also. Looks like Shweta also caught on to the fact the there is much more to what is bothering Prachi. Now the question is when and how the truth will enfold and how will the Mishra's react.

You know I was keen on morning after grilling some sense into the lovebirds and the two may finally sitting down and talking, but not so; and now I think rightfully also. All this drama needs a proper culmination before the story can move forward. Hopefully that would not mean a completely broken down Prachi before Milind realises the grimness of the situation. Something major is all set to happen at the evening, but what? I am not looking forward to another confrontation between Sally and Prachi. Prachi is too fragile now to take on Sally and her bitchiness. If so happens an already low in confidence Prachi will be completely devastated and broken.

The moment between MICHI in the morning was written very well. Prachi's vulnerability and Milind's anguish at the helplessness of the situation were brought out beautifully. Prachi not saying loud what she felt means you are saving it all for later. And I have such high expectations….

With the passing of time Milind has mellowed down and his love and concern for his 'cherry' has certainly overtaken his anger. The phone conversation was an ample proof of it. So was the fact that Prachi is feeling completely lost, disturbed, very-very low on confidence and completely guilt-ridden. Watching the video has further aggravated the situation and deeply affected Prachi's emotional fragility.

Ab bahut hua. Jaldi say sab theek karo. In desperate wait of the next update.

Hugs,

Sona


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