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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey neha!! that was a fantastic part doc! I cant wait for the next part. I hope Prithvi is unable to stop KRipa from going to GOa with ANgad! Please continue soon! That was fab!

Pooja 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
neha continue soon! mujse wait nahie ho raha 😕 😆 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Hey guys i'm soooo sorry, i had no time to write today, i will post the next part tomorrow! 😛

Neha

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow plzzzzzzz continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: neha9

Hey guys i'm soooo sorry, i had no time to write today, i will post the next part tomorrow! 😛

Neha

was it cuz u were watchin the USC vs TEXAS football game? i watched it n sry 2 say but hahaha yall lost lolz 😆 n not tryin 2 rub it in but we won we won lolz 😆😆😆.... u do live in california rite... if u dont ima feel really stupid haha!! 😆😉😆 actually i am already pretty krazy n stupid i dont think i can feel n*e more stupid hehe 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetchick786

was it cuz u were watchin the USC vs TEXAS football game? i watched it n sry 2 say but hahaha yall lost lolz 😆 n not tryin 2 rub it in but we won we won lolz 😆😆😆.... u do live in california rite... if u dont ima feel really stupid haha!! 😆😉😆 actually i am already pretty krazy n stupid i dont think i can feel n*e more stupid hehe 😆

well more than that

i went to the mall first

then i came home and watched some of the game

then i had to finish memorizing my stupid 4 min speech

then i watced the last 38 seconds of the game and i was maddddddd

😡

STUPID TEXAS WON I HATE THEM!!!!!!!!

USC played sooooooo much better, grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i hate them to the billionth power. 😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
when r u continuing neha this is awesome fan fiction plzz continue it really fast
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: neha9

well more than that

i went to the mall first

then i came home and watched some of the game

then i had to finish memorizing my stupid 4 min speech

then i watced the last 38 seconds of the game and i was maddddddd

😡

STUPID TEXAS WON I HATE THEM!!!!!!!!

USC played sooooooo much better, grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i hate them to the billionth power. 😭

oh gosh u still feel good but our eagle sucks but they did wow a day before but eagles sucks this time which i hate it

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky-moon

oh gosh u still feel good but our eagle sucks but they did wow a day before but eagles sucks this time which i hate it

all i can say now is, *SIGH* USC lost

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Posted: 19 years ago

Kabhi Kabhi: Part 19

Kripa came out of the bathroom after taking a shower and stood in front of the mirror running her towel down her hair, when she saw a clean Angad enter the room and frowned at him. Angad came and stood behind her, suddenly Kripa felt uncomfortable with him being around. She quickly turned around, "Angad, just let me change then we can leave." She smiled, but suddenly Angad grabbed her around her waist and pulled her closer. "Angad what are you doing?"

"Kripa I have to tell you something."

"What??" Her voice was dry and low, but she felt nice being close to Angad.

"You look…"

"I look?"

"Kripa you look so,"

"I look so what Anagd?"

"Kripa, you look so FAT in this yellow bathrobe!" Angad left her and laughed at her. Kripa was jumping up and down wining like a small kid who just got her chocolate taken away.

"Angad I hate you, I hate you, I hate you!!"

Angad pulled her close again, "You do?"

"Yes!" Her voice was low, almost a whisper. This time they both lost each other while looking into each others eyes. Kripa stepped closer to him, and slowly touched his face, Angad brough his lips closer to hers. Kripa slowly closed her eyes, their lips almost touched when Anagd left her. Kripa opened her eyes and turned around nervous, and so did Angad. They both ran their hands through their hair, "I'm sorry Kripa. I don't know why," he paused for a second. "Hurry up we have to leave." Kripa nodded her head as she heard the door slam and she was alone in the room once again. Kripa looked at herself in the mirror as the moment replied in her mind again and again. She walked to her closet and took out a new outfit.

******

Angad was waiting for Kripa in his jeep when Kripa came outside. Anagd looked at her and couldn't take his eyes off her. She looked simply beautiful. She was wearing blue caprices with a white tank top, and a white shirt on top it. Her hair; it was pulled back and a few strands hung on her face, she sat down in the jeep and looked at the lost Angad. She was hardly wearing any make-up, she was dressed so normal, nothing fancy and still looked so beautiful, so natural, simply breathtaking.

"Ab ghoorna band karo, and cholo!"

"Nahie Kripa main soocha raha tha ki tum kuch sayda he plane nahie lag rahi?"

"Angad, if you don't start the car right now I'll slap you."

Angad puts his cheek out, "You're welcome!"

"Uh!!! Cholo!" Angad giggles and starts the car.

******

Prithvi on the other hand is kind of late to stop Kripa and Angad, but he's determined that he will separate them some how.

*****

Angad and Kripa were half to Goa, they were passing a empty road, and it was almost four hours since they had left their house. Angad had the song "Mar Jaawan Mit Jaawan," blasting in the car. And he was singing along, "bangaya tera main chand mulakaato mein
tu hi samaayi hain mere khayalato mein
pher nigaahein na apne deewane se
haar na maanunga main dil aajmaane se
teri mohabbat aur nasha
mainu bada tarsawa
mar jaava jaava
mar jaava mit jaava mar java, mar java…"

"Angad!!!!"

Angad stops the car in the middle of the road and looks at Kripa worried. "Kripa kya hua?"

Kripa looks at him annoyed, "Why are you torturing poor Abhijeet Sawant."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean if you can stop sining!"

"Oh!" He started the car again, "Aur main aaisa he parashaan ho raha tha!" He scoffed.

"Waisa tum yeh gaana kiska liya gaa raha tha?"

"Kripa last time when I said this I was joking, but I'm serious right now. I'm really in love with Priya." Kripa looked at him and he looked serious. "I was just playing with her, but I think I love her. I mean, she pretty, even she loves me. But, I'm just mad I married you!" He sighed.

"I'm sorry Angad, that because of me you have to away from her, but really I don't care if you see her. I mean, I'm sorry that I'm in your life." She wiped a tear and looked away. Angad smiled, like a brat.

Sometime later neither Angad or Kripa were talking. "Angad."

"Haan Priya.. I mean Kripa!" He turned his face and smiled again, "Sorry I want just thinking about her."

"Ya whatever, I'm hungry."

"So what can I do?"

"Get me something to eat!"

"If you look around you'll find many trees. I'll stop the car you can go around and search, if you find fruit bring me some too, if you don't bring your self some leaves, but don't get me any!" He stops the car, "Go!" He looks at her for a few seconds, "Come on go Kripa!"

"Angad, you should have packed something to eat!"

"Wah! Kya baat hai! Kal tak patni aapna pati ka liya khana banathi thi, aur ajj patni aapna pati ko order de rahi hai!"

"Kyun? Patnio na thekha le rakha hai yeh sab kaam karna ka!"

"I don't know, lakin tumko lena chaiya tha!"

"Kyun ab koi gaana nahie sooj raha?"

"Um haan! Mujhse takdeer bhi roothi, dil ki umeed na thothi, ka Kirpa na mujhko khana na diya! Tum tha mera humsafar kiski lagi hai nazar, yeh sitam tu bata kyun hua, jeena na jay tera bin saathiya… oops I mean, jeeya na jay khana ka bin saathiya! Uh!" He heaved another sigh, "Yakeen nahie hota tum meri bilkul parwa nahie kathi Kripa."

"Angad gadi rooko!"

"Lakin Kripa…"

"NOW!" Angad stops the car, and Kripa hops down. "Ab tum jao, aur aagar chaho tho Priya ko phone karka Goa main bola lena. Ya main phone kardogi!"

"Ok! Jaan chothi!" And leaving Kripa alone, he drove away.

Kirpa picked up a rock and threw it towards his car. Then she sat down on a huge rock hoping he would come back. About five minutes later when he didn't a guy on a motercycle passes from there. Then he came back to walked to Kripa. Kirpa turned around on the rock so she couldn't see them anymore. But she was tempted to look back, when she did she found the guy right behind her.

She stood up, "Tum ko kya chaiya!"

"Tum darling!" He tried to touch her but suddenly Kripa felt someone's arms around her shoulders. Hoping it was Anagd she opened her eyes, and there he was, standing there, with his most famous grin.

"Aagar tumko pita nahie hai tho jao!" Angad was still standing beside her, holding her.

"Kyun yeh tumahari kaun hai?"

"Meri biwi ho, girlfriend ho, jo bhi ho tumko kya hai, ab jao nahie tho tumko hospital jana paraga. Come on now go!"

The man gave Angad a dirty look and left. Kripa huffed and pushed Angad away, and walked to the car and sat down. Angad sat down beside her, "Darling, tumko aagar mujhko pitwana ka itna shauk hai tho pelha bol deti main wrestling champion banjata. Vo tho aacha hua vo chala gya, aagar mujhko larna partha tho main usko ketha, 'Bahi sabah aap meri biwi ko le jao' "
"Aagar tum chaho tho main usko wapis bolalo?"

"Nahie, filhaal hum chaltha hai!" He put the car in gear and they continued their journey. "Kirpa."

"Huh?"

"Peecha bag main maina chips rekha tha tumko khana hai tho nichalo."

Kripa looked at him, "Aur yeh baat tum mujhko do ghanta pelha nahie bata saktha tha?"

She reached into his bag and took the chips out. "Ab saara kudh maat kahana, I want some too!" She held the bag in front of him, "Kripa, aagar tumko aapna bagwaan itna pyaar hai tho mujhko bol do, I'll let your drive. Itni traffic main you expect me to eat? Accident ho gya tho?"

"Tho tum kya chatha ho Angad?"

He opened his mouth still looking at the road, "Ahhhh!" Kripa smiled and put the chip in his mouth! "Thank you! Waisa main Priya ko phone kar diya hai, she should reach Goa as we get there as well!"

"That's great, I should have took Prithvi with me. He would have very happy!" Angad loved seeing Kripa annoyed with him like this.

They, turned and once again took up on an empty road, Angad was tired of driving, so he was driving slow now. Kripa had a headace, and hated that he was driving so slow.

"Angad!!!!!"

"Ab kya hua?"

"If you drive this slow I'm sure I'll be dead by the time we reach Goa. Drive a little faster."

Angad took a deep breath, and changed gears and suddenly he was driving as fast as the speed of wind at the moment.

A truck was coming from the other side, before they would crash Angad turns the car.

"ANAGD!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING!" Angad turned and Kripa fell on him, and held on to him her face in his arm.

"You said to drive faster."

"Not this fast you idiot! Now stop the car!" Angad hit the breaks, and the car stopped with a loud screech. Kripa exhaled, and look at Angad, who was smirking. "I hate you! I really do hate you." She got out of the car and walked away from him.

Angad frowned, and followed her. "Kripa. I'm sorry."

Kripa turned still frightened, her eyes wider, "Sorry? Angad aagar kuch ho jata tho?" Before Angad could say anything she was in the car again and they kept going. Around eight that night Angad and Kripa reached their hotel in Goa. A servant took their bags inside, Angad and Kripa were walking inside, they were still not talking when Angad bumped into a girl. Angad looked up and saw no other that Priya standing there.

Angad was shocked, and Kripa was speechless. "P-P-Priya what are you doing here?"

"Angad, I'm here with Josh and everyone. I've been here for a day now!"

Angad smiled weakly, "Lovely."

Priya looked at Kripa now, "You look lovely Kripa."

"Uh, thanks Priya."

From the other side Priya heard someone call her, "I'll leave we'll see you later."

"Bye Priya." They both hugged and Angad kissed her cheeks. Kripa was sinking as every second passed on. They both walked to the reception.

"Hi, can I have my room keys?"

"Name sir?"

"Angad and Kripa Khanna."

"Angad." Kripa called.

"Yes Kripa ji, ab kya problem hai?"

"I want a separate room."

"Why?" Angad asked.

"Because I do."

"As you wish!" Angad turned to the lady, "Can we have another room?"

"Sorry sir, but everything is booked."

"Sorry Kripa!"

"Main tumahara saath room nahie share nahie karogi."

"Lakin Kripa hum ghar pa bhi tho room share kartha hai!"

"Lakin Angad main yaha par tumahare saath room share nahie karogi."

Angad sighed, "Fine, I'll see if I can move in with Priya and girl friends."

Kripa snatched te keys from his hand, "CHOLO!" Angad smiles a cheeky smile and follows his wife.

Kripa enters the room and throws her purse on the bed and then sits down. She's angry about almost everything so far. Angad's has been bugging her all day and it's getting old. But the thing she is most worried about is the way he drove earlier today. Kripa didn't talk to him almost for two hours after their drive. As the moment replayed in her mind she cried. Then wiping her tears she stood up, asking herself, "why am I worried about him so much? Accident hota, usko choot lagthi tho mujhko kya farak partha hai?" Then she sat back down, holding a pillow in her lap. She wasn't mad that Angad was flirting with Priya, or that he had been bothering her all day, he was upset about the fact that if they would have met with An accident this morning, Angad would have got hurt. She didn't care about herself at the moment, she was worried about Angad.

When Kripa noticed Angad walk into the room she shifted a little. She stayed on the bed, without looking at him. Angad smirked, and sat down beside her. Kripa once again turned her face so he can't see his face.

"Kripa, darling, are you angry with me?"

"No Angad why should I be angry with you?"

"Ok. Then I'm going."

Kripa faced him quickly, "Kaha?"

Angad smiled, "You were crying, weren't you?" When Kripa didn't reply Angad sighed. "I'm sorry."

"Tumahari oxford dictionary main ek he work hai? I'm sorry, har baat ka liya sorry."

She stood up and walked into the bathroom.

Angad confused asked himself, "Why is she angry? Because I 'love' Priya, or because I've been bothering her all day?" He looked at the bathroom door and shrugged.

Will Angad's 'love' for Priya allow Kripa to realize she loves him? And, as Kripa and Angad get home Kripa is shocked when she comes to know something about Angad.

Sorry i couldn't write yesterday, I was busy, but I should have wrote stupid, stupid Texas won, there was no point in watching the retarted game. 😡

Hugs and Kisses

Neha

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