Deceived- MG FF ~Part 13~ on pg 66 & impt note

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

both r nervous and doing blunders😆

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Really nice update..

can you put up index on first page please?

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Tesoro

@Tesoro

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Asmara, you are updating girl. Cheers!!!! Thanks for not leaving the story unfinished as this puts the readers in a bad mood.

Congratulations and Best Wishes for your married life. May God blesses your family.

Will be back after I read the updates. :)

Thanks once again.

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Tesoro

@Tesoro

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#364

So Maan wants to take their relationship forward and Geet also is feeling the same. This might help them a little and their time away from the family will result in good bonding.

Till now Geet kept herself hidden behind the family. During their honeymoon, not only, they'll come closer as man-woman but also as husband and wife.

Maan is doing everything to solidify their relationship.

Hope you continue soon. Take Care. 😛

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shalinisaran89

@shalinisaran89

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

omg...

awesome upd...

jst lov it...

mi breath also gt stuck wid promo...

simply awesome

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Hey Asmara welcome back dear...

seen ur FF update after such a long time...how is ur married life going on... and CONGRATS for having baby...may God bless ur baby with long and healthy life...

so u r shifting also and I understand that u will not get net connection for some days...

it is ok dear...but please as soon as u get time and net connection please update...actually too much gap in between make me forget basic storyline...I have to read all updates again that is why I am commenting so late...I hope u understand what I am trying to tell u...as this is ur story but u also must have to read what was ur storyline...

about these last updates----

Maan is assuming himself that Geet will definately say no to go with him alone so he is himself withdrawing back because he is feared of rejection...but the thing is that why Geet so dreaded with intimacy between husband-wife...this natural relation is making her flinch and scared...why ?...I think there is more in her past as if somebody close may have tried to force her that is why she is emotionally scared of sexual intimacy...

waiting for her to tell Maan all about her past and come out of this emotional turmoil...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

lovely update 😊
will wait for you

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#368

hi asmara ! this is the first time me commenting on your ff ! I read it long back but thought you left it incomplete ! its really nice to see you back ! just love the story and your style of writting ! can you please add me in your pm list... would not want to miss this story. hope , you have settled in your new life...new city ! will wait for the updates...