Deceived- MG FF ~Part 13~ on pg 66 & impt note - Page 34

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Posted: 13 years ago
Index For me 😉

Part 1 - Page 2
Part 2 - Page 4
Part 3A - Page 9
Part 3B - Page 11
Part 4 - Page 16
Part 5 - Page 20
Part 6 - Page 31
Part 7 - Page 35
Part 8 - Page 38
Part 9 - Page 43
Part 10 - Page 47
Part 11 - Page 53

When do we get Part 12 Please 😳?
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Posted: 13 years ago
i think its about time you update...dont u think???😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just love it. No drama with Shasha and Tasha. But I don't know what Maan used to blackmail Geet? If u could can u translate the dialogue in English plzzz I just love ur story!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls update karo yaar :(

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey guys i m sooo sooorrryyy 😕i realize i have been gone for too long and i must have lost my readers😭. well as i told you i got married and then i had a baby. it was all such a rush that i couldn't continue but now that i am in a routine i will continue this ff😛. if u guys are interested do tell me and here's a short part to assure you guys that i am continuing 😳 i hope you like it and do comment pls


PART 12




She woke up with fear of getting strangled but as she came to her senses she realized what was strangling her. It was maan's arm around her neck. That was when her eyes flew open. He was literally lying upon her. His leg was trapping both of her legs beneath him and considering his weight even trying to move was useless without waking him up. For a few minutes she kept laying thinking of the pros and cons of waking him up and not waking him up when he stirred in his sleep, she quickly took advantage and started to move away but instead of letting her go he held her more tightly and snuggled her neck. She couldn't move as she felt shivers in her body and it seemed even in his sleep he had sensed it because his hands started moving on her waist back and forth lightly and within seconds his fingers touched her bare skin beneath her shirt. She gasped and he leaned closer to her, his lips touching her collar bone trailing up to her ear while his hands kept working their way on her body more unwaveringly. Her breath was uneven and her heartbeat fast but she admitted in her heart that she liked this devastation he was creating to her senses.

"say it loud geet" he whispered against her skin, shocking her,

"wh…at?" she found her voice breathless.

"admit it" she stirred as he nibbled her ear.

At the moment the alarm started to ring shaking the hell out of geet and maan both. She jumped and he reluctantly let go off her. Rolling down from the bed she stood up clumsily and started to rush around the bed finding her slippers while fighting with her hair to round them up in a bun. She didn't even realize that she hadn't turned the alarm off.

Maan watched her with amusement while turning the alarm off. She was having another panic attack.

"geet relax" but she wasn't listening.

"calm down geet"

"breakfast ready krna tha, sb jag gaye honge, kiya sochenge" that irked maan and he caught her by her arm while she was crossing the bed talking to herself and kept her gaze fixed on the ground,

"look at me" that shook her and her gaze shifted to his face but she quickly looked away and he saw a blush creeping up her face as she remembered what happened a few minutes ago.

"kuch ghalat nahi hua hai or koi kuch nahi sochega" he said patiently holding her firmly but she didn't look up just nodded absently.

"geet!" he caught her face in his hands and slipped his fingers in her hair and lifted her face up to him and she finally met his eyes.

She was scared, vulnerable and so innocent.

"it's ok geet." He couldn't say anything else and pulled her to his chest, she let him comfort her. Her panic attacks were scaring him now.

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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh my god i toh have lost the hope also that u will ever come back to continue this work i soo liked this story of u rs and was so sad that u left it in btw thanx so much for coming back plz now do continue it for sure ...hehe will comment about the update after reading it 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice but short one and what is it with her panic attack that maan is scared about ? am i forgeting something kya its long time na may be can u plz tell me about it
hope to get the next update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulation for the marriage nd the baby... But u stay in a hostel nd studying at that time?????? Nice part... Actually need to read this story again to recall it nd i m definitely interested...
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back and congratzzz can;t wait for a longerrr update
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back dear n congrats for ur bundle of joy
short but sweet update😛

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