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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Its a Emotional part........ Loved it....... I feel really sorry 4r geet........ Poor gurl 3 jobs god........ Thank she didn't get married wid dat idiot dev.

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

awesome update

hope they meet soon!

con't soon

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

enjoyed the chapter. poor geet, her life sounds miserable. can't wait to see how they meet up again. update soon!

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Wow!!!Awesome man!!

Please continue soon yaar

Loving it!!

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-Veritaserum-

@-Veritaserum-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

gr8 part...... really loved it

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Jaz why u wanna make me cry..oh man that was so heart touching..she and him still alone in the walk of life..learning to live without each other..ahhh i wonder thats possible..

Thanku..and wow is baar wednesday meant wednesday...mmm ok i take my words back..

Thanks a ton..

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

gawd that was awesome update....

oh we have a leap.....maan in london....

looks like their is 360 degree turn in story

waiting for more

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-Urvi-

@-Urvi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

You write amazingly!!

I posted a comment on the first chapter, but I don't think it posted for whatever reason (probably cos I was commenting from my iPod 8-) Silly thing :P)

Anyways, WOW. I found it heartbreaking to read to be frank, but I loved it to the core! And I totally agree with you that the songs help you feel the update. They really do. The lyrics of a song are really important always, not just the foot-tapping beat! But still, WOW. For whatever reason, I felt more sad for Maan than Geet in this update. I don't know what you've planned, but for some reason, it seems like the wedding didn't happen between Dev and Geet. Who knows.

Do update soon!! 😊