Well Nammy, I'm reserving this post for my essay...and as I can see my spamming-buddy Sheenu beat me to it this time! 😳
There's just one thing I've gotta say with the lil bit I managed to read...
it's that I never believed Abhi to be insensitive. From what I've observed, he was always extremely sensitive...in fact, so much so that he didn't need to hear her thoughts or her emotions, he could feel them. Very few people have that ability to understand the unsaid. I don't know but I just can't bring myself to agree with that little thing you've written. Soryy about that. Will go into further explanation and details later.
Till then,
*EDIT*
Yeah so...*rubs hands together*
The poor dear...my sweet dukhi Abhi being so dukhi makes me dukhi as well... okay so ignore it if you didn't understand it 😆
Why does he always have to jump to conclusions! 😡 She flirts with others, yes...but the only person she kisses is him 😳 Ain't that enough for the gadha to understand?! But he's such a sexy gadha...*sigh*
And there he goes again... uff kya hoga iss bande ka iss life mein! *looks heavenwards for an answer but God doesn't oblige*
Why is he so hard on her? Truly I can't understand...one moment he's soft and the next he's so cold 😲 but that's his charm...
I love him so so sooooooooo much...😃
Poor Nikster...got another scolding! 😆 Why don't I feel the sympathy 😆
Nikki's past...hmmm...that's an interesting take. Till today we've always been digging up Abhi's past...it's a nice move, venturing into Nikki's past. Me wants to know 😃 Batao, batao!
Why is Adi so surprised? That's all Abhi does throughout any convo na...make eyes and go "hmmm..." 🤣 Woh hi toh uska kaam hai. You talk to him for hours on end and all you get are "hmmm", "haan", and "ohh" 😆 😆 😆
Aaarghhhh why does that girl cry so muchhhh!!!!!!!!!!! 😡 *rolls eyes* She needs to grab Abhi by the collar and give him a serious dose of what he needs...😉
AHA!!! Dr.Moody melts at the very sight of those red eyes! I knew it...he's such a softie inside, na...he's a nut!
Well he's a coconut, basically. 😆
And he needs to have some nuts...like, eat nuts I mean. Memory toh Ghajini ki tarah ban raha hai! 😲 Badaam khilao koi usse! 😆
Again. He hits that sensitive nerve. I wanna punch his beautiful face...but I can't...😭 he's too handsome! I wanna go and bang Adi's head to the wall...and then bang AN's heads against each other's. They all need a reality check. Hmph.
Oh nooooooooooo 😲 No no no girl, I don't care how angry or hurt you are, DONOT throw up on the guy before you...he wears the best shirts available in town and I will grieve for an entire week if you ruin any of them!
After a while, Abhi releases her wrist from his grip and turns on his back. He presses his thumb and forefinger to the bridge of his nose to hold back the tears stinging his eyes. He struggles hard to keep his emotions under control. He was now damn tired of being on a constant roller coaster of emotions. He closes his eyes and takes deep breaths to gain some strength.
Nikki, head down, was glued to her place. She unconsciously held her breath while the seconds ticked by. After a long minute, she stole a look at Abhi, half expecting that he would have turned his face towards her. But still his back was facing her and she could sense his tension and apprehension
Aaah...there we go with the vulnerable AN...never ceases to move me, that. I just love how raw their emotions are...it exposes their hearts to the deepest, farthest cornners and that's the beauty of it. I love the way you put it, Nammy. Beautiful. 👏 👏 👏
And I see it's inspired from the riot scene. Nothing so beautiful has ever been portrayed on the small screen, in my opinion. Thankyou for bringing back the memories. You've done a wonderful job here:
He raises his left arm to stop her in her track and turns his face towards her. He was damn angry with himself for losing control over his emotions whenever she is around.
Nikki watched him carefully, his expression were unreadable, until it settled into one of steely.
Abhi stares hard at her, his expression resentful, "Dr. Nikita, you may leave now. I don't need you anymore. I can finish work for myself. Leave… right now." He emphasized each word deliberately.
Nikki's pulse caught in her throat and she was feeling a spike of pure panic. She had lost him again… and this time forever…. Her eyes shimmer with fresh pool of tears. Stepping back abruptly, she turns and rushes out of his cabin.
Abhi sits back in his chair…. He sits there motionless for God knows how many hours. Belatedly, he realizes what she had said.. Abhimanyu, I don't want to go... what should i… And what he had said … I don't need you anymore.… leave right now …
I couldn't help but quote the entire thing, it's so beautifully put. Hats off to you, Nammy. Brilliant job...extremely complex feelings put so smoothly into words. The translation is truly touching. 👏
Aaaah...so finally SLD the clown is of some use. Thankyou for that, Nammy. 😃
A wonderful, wonderful job. I love the way you're taking this story. It retains the essence of AN that we relished till the pool scene...something that was destroyed after SLD's entry. Thankyou for bringing that back. I'm loving this. ⭐️
As I said before, I love the flow of your language...it's simple and you put everything very nicely together. I really enjoy it.
I'm loving this FF. Update soon! 🤗
Edited by Khushboo_AN - 14 years ago
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