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sania

@saniashzadi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

hey Mel....

lovely update dear...sometimes its difficult t see ur loved one dieing infront of u nd u r helpless...perfectly described these emotions dear...

love

sania

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punam

@punamluvshilpa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#122

hey melody....i love ur ff...but i hate ur this ff from my heart ...sorry ,.i could not give u like tab.....i lost many things in my life....so i always like to read happy ending ff or romantic ff....'dr.arman and riddhima and their love ' is my life's most lovable part....i cried bitterly for many hours after reading it....and i also can't read whole ff....sorry...i was helpless............plz.don't pm me when u write this type of sad ff.....sorry dear.............

punam

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arooshi

@arooshee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

I love Armaan so I stopped before the last scene as it was heart wrenching
but very well written
write happy wala buddy
ye sad wala .....it pains

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liveforever

@liveforever

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Aww this was sooooooo saddd!!

Poor Armaannn!!!

Please start your next one shot soon...

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sweety7395

@sweety7395

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Hey nice OS. It was so sad. At first I was angry at Armaan but I had a feeling that he wouldn't do that to Ridz. When I found out the reason, I literally started crying. It was so sad. Loved the way you portrayed their emotions. It was nice. I really don't like reading sad stories on AR but I still read it. Thanks for the pm. Write more.

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Mel.
Very nice OS and very well written. It made me cry . It's always sad to see your love one go like this. I really like what you said in the end.
"Memories" are very important in life. They give us the strength to live ..

Do write more but yes happy wala 😊 .. Thnx for the PM..

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Sahar

@MissDior

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Hey i just read The Day She Became His. I must say it was a great OS😃.
Loved the way you wrote ARs fellings just before their weeding, and they way Arman kissed her right after the priest pronounced them as husband and wife😳😍.
Lovely Os
I will read you other OSs too, and will comment on them later😊

Edited by -simi - 14 years ago

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

OMG Mel

This was...SO..I mean,No words.I just have no words...It was SO beautiful,so touching,so realistic, and...So,So ,meaningful,painful,at the same time...Its so hard to imagine AR in this state...I..Am Speechless.

Loved it!

-Maitree

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perfectsmile

@perfectsmile

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Beautifully written.
Its not easy to let go of the loved ones, especially when they are bound not to return. You have explained this beautifully. The helplessness, fear, concern and love. Everything is at the right place.
Good one.