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@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Thank you and you are back for this one...No Kidding....
Sure will add Maan and Geet. Cant lose the Ek so bees part, plays an important role in the later part...

Thank you, glad everyone liked it, but still very few comments, compared to what has been expected, Lets see.

@ lov: No way it will be english all the way...coz I cant go hindi all the way 😉

OMG! I would just skim it and read it again later, but it was so good!! ek so bees part is important...love the your little hint/spoiler!!😆

Girl don't worry, ppl will comment later...it's monday after all....I'm sure ppl are busy with school and stuff!! don't worry this one will be just as popular!

BTW: Are you really gonna make this one shorter than NY times....I really not too short, b/c it's quite an unique concept...especially the way you write it!

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Tesha

@Lov26

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Thank God Its easier for me to go through English that's why i was asking..

Did something bad happened 3 years ago to make Maan became a bad guy? I guess you are going to develop that in the coming parts but could not resist asking.

Are u going to give a background on each of them or are you just going to reveal their characters as the story goes?

Hasini, that is a real switch between New York times and Ek so bees? What inspired you to write a darker type of story? Well am assuming this one is going to be sort of gloomier, harsh way of life or something along these lines.. Is that so?

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Lov26
Thank God Its easier for me to go through English that's why i was asking..

Did something bad happened 3 years ago to make Maan became a bad guy? I guess you are going to develop that in the coming parts but could not resist asking.

Are u going to give a background on each of them or are you just going to reveal their characters as the story goes?

Hasini, that is a real switch between New York times and Ek so bees? What inspired you to write a darker type of story? Well am assuming this one is going to be sort of gloomier, harsh way of life or something along these lines.. Is that so?

I wanna know the answer to this part too!!

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Geet Malhotra

@SapphireFlames

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

pretty ff..:)

different concept..continue..i'm officially and crazily in love with ur ff's now! :)

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Shalve

@Shalve

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

awesome update... really like the story line.... do continue

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

good start Hasini.. waiting for the next update 😊😊😊😊

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Its different n interesting

now waiting to read further.....

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sweet coco

I wanna know the answer to this part too!!

@ Lov 26: Oi did you read the promo? It gives you what happened 3 years ago in his life...

English it is girl...I'm actually planning to switch to full english if I can.

No I never write character sketches...Dint for NY times either. Only the background and then start off. That's not the normal script style I know.

Yes I wanted to explore life in the dark side. We cant always have the sweet guy who is not selfish. I felt Maan in NY times is very hard to exist. The issues and scenes you see in NY times can be reality based, but Maan's character is not.

I really felt Maan as a bad ass could do best in this setting and not elsewhere. Inspired by Godfather's Al Pacino's role, I have taken this bit, but let's see how it goes and hopefully I will be able to do full justice to it.

It will be a short one compared to NY times...actually I dont know...this only has the draft storyline so far. Nothing has been planned in details and that i why I'm sweating right now.

Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago

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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

That was splendid…..the way you penned it…..it all was so realistic and could feel the emotions running there. Geet has some principles which she follows and she wants to save Pinky….not caring about herself…..really nice! Dev, here, is loyal to Maan….I kinda liked it. Maan too is principled….interesting! Geet could feel something for him already and decided to help them out....she tried to nurse him and actually told him her real name….indicating that she is re-connecting to herself….that Maan is the one who will bring her out of this and give her her lost identity back….it was indeed beautiful…the last bit. Really looking forward to reading Maan's reaction upon meeting Geet and how they proceed there onwards. Do continue soon.

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Maarrriiiam...Mariam :-)

@MaankiMariam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

wow that was amazing 🤗 even though she is a prostitute u have made her have standards n made her a human being with feelings which not a lot of people do, her working here is her majboori and u have written it excellently 👏 plz PM me wen u update...iv sent u a buddy request xxx

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