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-pixie-

@-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#301

While you took off another covering, the picture still remains hazy. What went through Shiv's head while he was scanning the crowd for Gauri and then when finally he saw her and her reaction to Thalia's kiss? I can't wait for Gauri to rip him apart once they get home- or is it going to silent treatment?

Thalia is one hell of a complicated female.I am still trying to understand her character- so dunno whether I like her or hate her but yeah she sure as hell keeps things interesting around here!

ps: I also love trashy dime novels. They are my guilty pleasure if I want to unwind. and Yes, I ordered my copy of Lord of the scoundrels last night off flipkart...talk about product placement. I am a marketeers delight, I know.

pps: Meery Xmas and Happy holidays to you and all the readers of this amazing FF!

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

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Posted: 14 years ago

#302

Merry Christmas to you & your readers.

A kiss says a dilemma of a person & here guess shiv clicked it & so does the woman she's a n intriguing character.........& somewhere deep down a woman of different thinking........maybe like lotus in mud.

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#303

Gwad what is with this woman.....she is sure confued one

and making me one also.....should I sympathize with her...

Curious now....did shiv too saw G and Shank

waiting for more....Merry christmas and happy new year

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#304

you must know you are an awesome writer cuz that was wicked! seriously! i don't know who to yell at-

Gauri for staying in Shashank's arms,

Shashank for not reacting,

Thalia for her acts or

Shiv for his inaction!

They all Need to work it out!!

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Sigma

@Sigma

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#305

merry xmas devi

interesting update

how long before Gauri sees Shiv as he just left her there

will she believe Shiv if he says he knows that Thalia doesn't really have feelings for him after she kissed him

has Gauri really understood what was going on through Thalia's head

will shiv not try to find out what thalia is really upto

I still don't know Shashank has reacted, did he even see the kiss i wonder, I assume he did or has heard about it but he didn't go after Thalia or has he gone to Gauri instead

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#306

The last two updates were great....its thrilling to see the same scene play infront of you from the minds of different characters.

Holidays are meant to bring happy family time...but in my home it means that you have an influx of relatives that do not let you enjoy your favorite FF in peace.....Baaaahh!!!!

Ahh but the devil in me always finds a way...So!! I again bribed my brother to lend me his hi-fi mobile so that I can read when the family sleeps. You know what I have finally realized what I am going to ask Dad for New Year this time....a brand new hi-fi cell!!

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#307

Devi,

Please update soon.

Missing ur updates.

Thanks

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#308

"I wish you hadn't done that Thalia. I don't think you want me like you pretend you do. That much is clear now. You could have just told me what you really want. There would have been an easier way than this."

I loved how Shiv called her out. Talk about deflating an ego! The thing that has me puzzled is his last two remarks. What does he think she wants, and what would he have done? I can't see him cheating on Gauri now. No matter how he is tempted.

I can't figure out how I feel about Thalia. On one hand, I want to laugh like a maniac at her embarassment, and on the other, I want to pull her into a hug and have a mother-daughter chat with her. Diagnose that, Dr. Devi!😆

Please update soon.

Edited by saomom - 14 years ago