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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

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I am intent on demonstrating my blushing ability...LOL! Who am I kidding????

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Hmm..I find it very strange that these two interchange personalities the moment there is sex involved...
Outside the bedroom:
He is brattish and impulsive and she is the mature one with a level head on her shoulders
Inside the bedroom:
She is the one who lets go and goes with the flow, willing to take things further while he is the one who either stops or at least thinks that sex is not going to resolve their issues

I am very intrigued by Gauri's behaviour....

Pixie,
Amazing analysis.
I guess Shiv thinks that way cus he is very much experienced when it comes to Sex and he knows that Sex will not solve any problems but just mite complicate things further....
While on the other hand...Gauri is not experienced ...and because of that ....sex is one aspect that makes her vulnerable and unexperienced and in that moment she loses her ability to think and analyze things.... and just goes with the flow cus...that is all she can do at that point in time.....
Just my thoughts on this...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update

Looks like making out in d balcony has some serious benefits. U r giving us free education.😉

I loved d teasing & their light-hearted hot convo.

Shiv has been possesive of Gauri from d childhood itself.

Pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant .. update ..
started to suffer from lack of update but that was soon sorted out!
thoroughly enjoying 'The Oldest Story' but then so are scores of other people!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

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I am intent on demonstrating my blushing ability...LOL! Who am I kidding????

******************************

Hmm..I find it very strange that these two interchange personalities the moment there is sex involved...
Outside the bedroom:
He is brattish and impulsive and she is the mature one with a level head on her shoulders
Inside the bedroom:
She is the one who lets go and goes with the flow, willing to take things further while he is the one who either stops or at least thinks that sex is not going to resolve their issues

I am very intrigued by Gauri's behaviour....


ahh... blushing doesn't look good on you pix 😉

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You think Shiv is brattish and impulsive outside the bedroom?
Edited by sridevi27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great one as always....really loved it to core
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Posted: 14 years ago
Devi, I think I have been a bit careless in my choice of words...I think what I was trying to say is that in all the non-Gauri interactions- he comes off as having a devil may care attitude and is willing to act on/go after what he wants rather than obsessing about stuff...And at times acts without thinking through the consequences(Good for us 😉)..That he is a brat, I have no doubts about 😆(ok, in my imagination he is a brat and you cannot change that 😛!!!)


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Devi, I think I have been a bit careless in my choice of words...I think what I was trying to say is that in all the non-Gauri interactions- he comes off as having a devil may care attitude and is willing to act on/go after what he wants rather than obsessing about stuff...And at times acts without thinking through the consequences(Good for us 😉)..That he is a brat, I have no doubts about 😆(ok, in my imagination he is a brat and you cannot change that 😛!!!)




Lol... I can't change anything in your imagination pixie ;)

In all seriousness though, I was genuinely curious about your thoughts rather than trying to change your analysis, because as I said in a post before, what the writer thinks and what comes through in the writing may not correlate perfectly. So, I am always curious when readers give me their take... gives a different dimension to the characters :)

And I agree with you, Shiv is a total devil (guess where he gets if from ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Will you grace us with an update today? ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Will you grace us with an update today? ;)


Anytime soon😆

Also thanks to the overdose of romantic fiction during my teens, in my mind Rakes=Brats too!😆
Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update Devi...finally something sensual !!!
okie....now I truly know what does the chap 7 hold...
song of songs after all I read all of them ..courtesy you 😳

even that Victor thing was funny..at least I found it funny ....

Keep Updating :)

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