~Anu's OS Gallery~ Mistake[AR] Comp.|pg 74|1/7/12 - Page 27

Originally posted by: zigzagway

Hi Anu...

The ss, its a great starting. I am so eagerly waiting to know what mistake did armaan made that riddhima left him.. plz plz plz continue soon and thanks for the PM....😃

Originally posted by: janu1610

Anu yaar nice plot...loved it .
plz continue soon...
send me pm.whenever you post the part.
i think i m already in your buddy list...

love
ritu

Originally posted by: anamika2010

hey anu...nice shot...but plz. clear it,what mistake have done by our hero.....he kissed her forcely or made her mom of his child....hehehe....sorry,don't mind.......love...

punam

u'll come to know.................

Originally posted by: _Afrin_

nice intro...........very interesting......................

i m really curious to what Arman did................and waiting for ridz's entry.............

so cont soon...........................😊

thanx for the pm................

Originally posted by: vaaniKSGmallik

awesum part

great going

thnx for PM😊

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"im sorry ridhima...mein ne jo kiya...woh ghalat tha...plzzz wapis ajao...its been 2 months now...im waiitng for u...plzzz wapis ajao na...plzz Ridhimaa...but nahin mein ne jo tumhare saath kiya...woh ghalat tha...i deserve more n more punishment then this...that m family disowned me...i hate myself...im hating that moment...the moment i gave u sooo much pain...im sorry...

"he hit his already bandaged hand again on the floor...but feels no pain...as the ain inside him is more than this physical pain..."

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on one side'this was the scene'n the other'

a big house on the outskirts of the city' wid two floors'having a bit rough texture'windows open n old'n a garden outside wid some workers cleaning the garden as many leaves have fallen due to autumn season'.many children playing in the garden having gala tym'.

A long road was there'which joins to the main road'going towards the city''.a board was hanging there which reads the name of the place'. Sanjeevani Orphanage Lonavala'.

A gal was standing in the window'looking at the kids'playing in the garden'n enjoying'

having gr88 tym'n the workers'who were cleaning the garden..

Tears roll down her cheeks seeing the dry leaves..Scattered everywhere'

Gal: meri zindagi bhi bilkul in bikarey patoon ki tarah hai..jinhen jahan hawa chahye udha le jaye'koi nahin jis se apna dard bant sakoon'apna dil ka hall bata sakoon'mein kitni independent thi'apna har faisla khud liya..magr ek faisle ne zindagi hi badal dali'kitna baroosa kiya'apni zindagi tumharey naam kar di'''magar tumne mera dil thor diya'tum ne mera vishwas thor diya'mujhe tor diya'I HATE U ARMAAN'.I hate u''''

While she was thinking n saying all this to herself'someone called from behind'breaking her chain of thoughts..

V: Ridhimaa beta..kahan hai..chal aja khana tayaar hai'.

Hearing the voice..Ridhimaa cleared her tears'n went inside'she came here after getting hurt by Armaan'she can never forget wat he did'but she never shared wat she is going through wid any one'nor her family'nor her bua'the care taker of the orphanage'as she didn't want to share her personal life wid anyone'she just said that she want to take a break from her life'n want some peaceful moments

'i-e. she is here''..but her bua know very well'that something has happened'y a gal who got married just a 8 months ago'wanna go away from her new house'n her husband'but she didn't asked as she want Ridhimaa speak herself'

Ridhimaa went inside...all the kids of the orphange gathered at the dining table..to have their breakfast...n to catch up wid one another..

they r havong exams next day...so all busy chatting abt their exams preparation...wid Ridhimaa n Bua serving them...

Ridz: arey bachoon...chalo pehle nastha karo phir batein karna...chalo jaldi... "she said wid a smile plastered on her lips...but Bua was watching her...communicating wid the kids...talking animatedly wid them...she was smiling...bt nt from heart...she was here...but still far away...thinking something else...may be thinking abt Armaan...missing him..."

after the kids left..Ridhimaa didnt had her breakfast...instead started picking up things from the table...n started doing work...

Bua: arey Ridhimaa pehle kuch khale bacha...

Ridz: bhook nahin hai bua..abhi mann nahin...jab hoga tab kha lon gi...

Bua: par eta thora sa kha le...dekh tera kitne dinon se aise hi chal raha hai...na kuch khati hai na peeti...aise tu tu bimar ho jae gi...thora sa kha le...

Ridz: abhi nahin mann bua...baad mein kha loon gi...plzz frce mat kariye...

Bua: teekh ahi jaise teri marzi...magr kuch kha zaroor lena nahin tu weak feel karegi...

Ridz: ji...

saying this to Ridz...bua left for her chores...n her Ridhimaa started working...it was her daily routine from last 2 months...she work n only work...she dont feel like eating...she lost her appitete the day she left Mallik Mansion...

Ridhimaa who was kept like a princess...no one ever did let her work...nw works like manics...she just want to get rid of his memory...bt she knw she cant...she loved him soo mcuh...given herself to him...still he hurted her badly...

Armaan was not less the other side..he was heart broken as well...more then that...he was getting accused by all...even the servants dont respect him anymore...

it was morning tym...n Armaan got up...he slept onn the floor...holding her pic close to his heart..as if holding her close to him...but he knew...wat he didto her...will surely nw nt bring her back to him...she will never want to come such a bas***d like him...

Armaan got freshened up n went downstairs for the breakfst...as his bhabhi specially requested him to come...n he couldnt deny her...he dont want to go...as HER [Ridhimaa] parents were also there...they knw wat he did to her...n has blasted him badly...telling him that they made mistake marrying their princess wid an animal...n nw she left...widout telling anyone...they dont even want to see her face...

all trired to find her out...but no one was able to track it down...Armaan also tried...bt he was feeling sooo guilty n empty from inside...that he was not able to think straight...

remembering all this...he went downstairs...n saw all his family was sitting on the table...waiting for the breakfast to be served...his mom...bringing the food...his bhabhi..Anjali...arranging the plates...his mother-in-law...Padma...sitting...n looking in space..maybe missing her other daughter...

his bhai Atul...n dad...Jai...along wid her dad...Shashank...sitting n chatting...may be discussing some business problems or project...

as he procced towards the table...he saw all eyes set on him...as if accusing him silently...n he lowered his eyes wid shame...

he saw her mom...got up...after giving him a disgusting look...n even her dad..n his own dad got up...to go...but all stopped hearing Anjali's voice...

Anjali: aap sab kahan ja rahe ho...chaliye nastha kar ke jaiye ga...aur Armaan tu wahan kyun rukh gaya...chal jaldi aja nastha kar le...

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Armaan start moving towards the table again...but stopped hearing wat his father said...

Jai: Anjali beta hum yahan nashta nahin kar sakte..aur khas kar tab jab kuch log yahan pe hoon..jin ke saath hum kabhi nahin bethna ya unhein dekhna chahte... 'he said looking at Armaan wid anger in his eyes...n Armaan eyes got filled wid tears...ready to come out...'

Atul: dad...

Shanky: nahin Atul beta...hum yahan nahin beth sakte is darinde ke saath..ay na hi mein ise kabhi maaf kar sakta hoon jo is ne kiya... 'he was really angry on Armaan'

Anjali: but plzz dad...papa...nastha kar lijye meri khatir...

she said...pleading them to come sit n have dinner wid the family...n looking at her face they cant deined n moved to have breakfast together...

when she looked back at Armaan...he was taking steps back slowly...n tured to go but stopped hearing Anjali...

Anjali: Armaan tu kahan ja rha hai...chal breakfast kar le...

Armaan: mujhe bhook nahin bhabhi...aur waise bhi mein kisi ko pereshaan nahinkarna chahta...

Anjali: magr Armaan... 'bt he didnt stop n moved out gone back to his room...'

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Armaan was in his room...thinking abt his life...Ridhimaa...where she would be...sitting on the edge of the window...eyes closed...n tears rolling down his cheeks...

after sometime Anjali came wid a plate of food for him...n saw him wid tears n pain that ca be seen on his face..

she was really disappointed knowing abt Ridhimaa leaving...she was her baby sis...n she [Anjali] loved her [Ridhimaa] so much...n missing her...firstly she was angry on Armaan for wat he did...bt seeing his condition all her anger got disappeared like thin air...

she so want to his dimple smile back...hw he use to tease her...n his sparkling blue eyes...which always show something mischevious cooking in his mind...she want her Armaan back...her bacha...who was always there for her...supporting her...she loves him sooo much...he is like a first child to her when she got married...they both team up against Atul...tease him...fight wid him...she was missing all those moments...her eyes got filled wid tears...bt she cleaned them...as she has to support him now...he needed her...

Anjali: Armaan...kya kar raha hai bacha...chal nashta kar le...dekh mein tera mann pasand nashta banaya hai aaj...

armaan who was thinking abt Ridhimaa n was in his own world...came out of his trance hearing Anjali...

Armaan: nahin bhabhi kuch khane ka mann nhain plzz force mat kariye ga..

Anjali:magr Armaan...bacha is tarah tu aap bimaar ho jao gae...dekho kitne duble [weak] ho gaye ho...kuch tu kha lo...

Armaan: plzzz bhabhi mera maannn nahin hai...kuch bhi khane ka...aur jiske haath ka khana pasand tha..usey khud hi khud se door kar liya... 'he said the last bit in a wisper...but Anjali heard him...'

Anjali: bohat pyaar karte ho na usse Armaan...

Armaan: apne jaan se bhji zyada... "he said looking in vacuum...thinkiing abt her...'

Anjali: tu bas fir...aur kya chahiye...ja aur le aa usey...

Armaan: woh nahin aye gi... 'he said looking sad'

Anjali: woh zaroor ayegi agar use apne pyaar ki door se bandh lo gae...aur use bulao gae...tu zaroor ayegi,...arey suna nahin SRK ne kya kaha tha... 'agar kisi cheez ko shidadt se chaho tu puri kahiynat tumhein usse milne ki saazish karti hai' tu bas...ja aur le aa apne pyaar ko...

Armaan: sachi bhabhi...woh ayegi na...

Anjali: haan...magr usey yahan tak lane ke lye tujhe takat [strenght] bhi tu chahiye na...tu chal jaldi se yeh kha le...

Armaan: nahin bhabhi plzzz...mera gale se ek niwala nahin utre ga...plzzz bhabhi...

Anjali: Armaan magr...

Armaan: plzzz nahin... 'n tears got filled in his eyes again...thinking if she would have eaten something...'

Anjali got disappointed n left...leaving Armaan thinking abt how his life changed drastically..

a complete free bird...an immature n irresponsible guy changed into a different human being...

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ok that's it guys.. dont have strength to write more...

next part is gonna be flashback that wat mistake Armaan did n how he will bring her back...

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