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Part 22

jaaniye heeriye
jaaniye heeriye
mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein
aaya nazar mein jab se koi hain
tu sochta hain tu puchata hain
jiski kami thi kya yeh wohi hain
haa yeh wohi hain
tu ek pyasa aur yeh nadi hain
kaahe nahi isko tu khulke bataye
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

teri nigaahen, paa gayi rahein
par tu yeh soche jaaun na jaaun
yeh zindagi jo hai naachti toh
kyon bediyon mein hai tere paanv
preet ki dhun par naach le paagal
udta agar hai udne de aanchal
kaahe koi apne ko aaise tarsaaye
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
mitwa...

"Shasha, my fear is about love? What is love? What do you expect from love? I am not sure that I love Sameer or not but I am sure that I respect him more than anyone in this world, I admire him, I adore him. When a sailor doesn't know direction than boat just keeps moving, my life is literally like that boat, but now it is going to change, Sameer gave a direction to my life. I feel like I want to live for him, I want to live for my future, I want to live for all the dreams which were dead but Sameer generated a fire in me to live those dreams again. I want to fly like a bird in the air, I want to dance like a peacock in the rain, I want to wander from one flower to another like a butterfly, yes I want to live again."Geet says.

Geet reached to garden little before 7 as she wanted to enjoy the silence and beauty of garden.

She sat down on the bench while playing with her dupatta, she was nervous as well as happy.

Sun was at the edge of sunset, light sunrays were still being seen. Sunrays were waiting to hide in the lap of mountain so that they could feel the same rest as the kid would feel in the lap of mother. Birds were moving into the direction of their home to find the peace; butterflies were still roaming here and there like they were trying to find something, grass was as soft as the touch of the new born baby. There was only dim light left in the air because of firefly and few sunrays. In the midst of dust and pollution, the only sensuous smell Geet felt was of midnight candy.

Suddenly her eye went on to one caterpillar and she realized that her life was not much different than caterpillar. Caterpillar transformed into a beautiful butterfly after a lot of struggle, the same way, her life was going to turn beautiful after a lot of difficult times she had gone through. She just wished that her life would be as alluring as the beauty of butterfly.

She was lost in her thoughts that she didn't hear Sameer's footsteps. He saw Geet from far distance but he didn't want to break her thinking hence he walked very softly.

He sat down just beside Geet but Geet didn't notice him. He looked at Geet and was lost in her beauty and innocence. Her eyes were as deep as ocean; her lips were like rose petals, her cheeks were like bloomed flowers, her slender figure gave her a look of royal queen.

Eventually Geet noticed him and she was astonished by finding Sameer beside her.

By looking at her surprised eyes, Sameer got a spark on his face.

"Geet, you got amazed by looking at me like you were expecting someone else not me."Sameer says cheerfully.

"No Sameer, nothing like that."Geet says.

Sudden spark in Sameer's eyes reminded Geet the reason behind her meeting today with Sameer.

Geet didn't get the word to start with, she started clenching her teeth, and swinging legs softly under the bench, her nervousness was apparent on her face.

"Geet, you look nervous, I guess I am supposed to be nervous not you."Sameer says with smile while hiding his fear of negative answer.

Geet tried to gather courage; finally she closed her fist and moved little bit to make herself comfortable. Once she settled down, she looked into Sameer's eyes.

"Sameer, I want to start with truth about my feelings, it is hard to describe inexplicable feelings, but it is very important to have clear perspective. I don't know what is love, I am not sure the appreciation I have for you is love or something else, but I am sure that I respect you a lot and you will keep me happy, and I also want a chance to keep you happy, I want to fulfill your dreams by standing beside you in each happy and difficult phase of life. I know the importance of appreciate in life, I should appreciate whatever I have and If I appreciate that God has sent you in my life, I don't want to complaint to God for whatever I don't have rather I want to tahnk him for whatever I have."Geet says while interrupted by Sameer.

"What Geet, I can't believe, you are ready to marry me; it is like a dream come true, Geet give me a moment to grasp this, I am pretty sure today God is definitely standing by my side."Sameer says with a big smile on his face. He was never happy this way before.

Geet felt content by looking at his elated face. She felt happier by looking at his happy face. She felt blessed as she could make someone so happy. Sameer opened his arms to welcome this new reality and Geet responded him by happy hug.

In his embrace, Geet felt the security, the safety which each girl wanted in her life. Within a second in his embrace with closed eyes, Geet saw hundreds of dreams for her new life ' her hands filled with henna, her body covered with red sari, her neck covered with mangalsutra, her house filled with love, her heart filled with hope- all emotions brought tears in her eyes.

While tears were rolling down from her eyes, Sameer felt something wet on his cheek and he stopped tears right there.

Sameer's happiness was unimaginable, he wanted to jump and let entire world know about his love, he wanted to marry right away if he could, he wanted to shower all love on Geet at this very moment, he wanted to hug her tightly in a way that nobody could separate them, he wanted to hide her from world.

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Maan was at his office, thinking about his morning with Geet and about his advice to her. He was wondering about what Geet was hiding from him. Geet looked really dejected today. He even didn't know but somehow he couldn't see distressed Geet. He wanted to see her happy. He couldn't believe that he enjoyed rain today for the first time in his life; he couldn't believe that he asked Geet to enjoy rain. "Why did I do that? I was not like that."He asked question to himself.

He was surprised by his own actions. It was his intuition which made him to do that. It was his heart which made him to do that. He tried to figure out but he couldn't as he couldn't understand his own feelings. He was confused and lost.

"Why is it important for me to see Geet happy? Why is it important for me to help her whenever she needs? Why is it important for me to make sure that she will be happy?"Maan thinks.

He wanted to call her to check if she is alright now, but he didn't know what to say if he'd call her.

He thought various fake reasons to call her in his mind, but he was never hot under collar before. His legs were swinging rapidly under his car seat out of anxiety. His face turned red with some wrinkle on his forehead. Luckily his driver was driving his car today otherwise he could have engaged himself into some accident.

Finally he reached home and he decided to call her. He dialed his number.

"Hey Geet, this is Maan."Maan says on phone.

By the time, Geet was already at her home.

"Hey Maan, I got surprised to see your call this late?"Geet asks cheerfully.

"Geet, you seem happy as compared to your morning tone, well I am glad that you seem happy."Maan says.

"Yes Maan, today I am really happy as I have the biggest news."Geet says.

"I can't wait to hear."Maan says happily.

He felt good by hearing her happy sound.

"Maan, I got engaged."Geet says.

Edited by Asha2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet accepted sameer proposal............she deserve to be happy......... great going........waiting for maan reaction on this news😈......i m sure u have surprise or big twist for us reader in future.........thanks for PM 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh darling yu left us with cliff hanger not fair i'm that Geet got engaged with sameer she really deserve it to be happy awesome pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
holy crap...............our munda was feeling for her and she gives him the news that he wud b expecting the last....................oh now i feel that maan lost his chance with her................i think sameer is gud guy wat geet did was right anyway maan wasnt interested in her anyway @ the start so she has the right to hv her share of happiness.............i hope now maan doesnt do anything to snatch geet from sameer but lets her live her life.........wat hv u got in store for the future dear.............cant wait to read further
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Posted: 14 years ago
what a place to end it....sahi hai...engaging in the art of torture now 😉
Great update!! Sameet seem like they would make a good couple but we all know that Maneet would make an awesome couple. Hmm...let's see how Maan reacts to the news...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Asha why are you doing this to us??stopping at the cliffhanger😭😭😭
i am sure maan would definetly be upset listening to this....but still i want to read it in your lovely words😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part---happy 4 Geet but feeling bad 4 Maan as he has jus started feeling 4 geet---wondering how they r going 2 becum a couple---Cont soon Xx... 😃 👏 👏

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