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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#421

Yay atlast maan has accepted that he has fallen for geet and awe the rain was cute anyways great updates and continue soon 😊

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: puth
tonyak, please show us that geet is also falling for MSK.....

hi reg. geet's character
*sometimes i prefer nt 2 expose her feelings fully so as 2 maintain d element of surprise in d story
*as far as now she respects MSK
*moreover she has promised him tht she won't expect anything from this shadi
*she still believes tht 1day sameera would be back in his life
*she is commited2all her relations like her family,dadi,friends etc.so she enjoys her times with them also
*she also told tht she won't leave him unless he asks

so i feel,we shd explore her charac. slowly

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
aww that's cute. maan enjoyed the fact that geet was crying because she doesn't want to leave him. yesterday geet cried for her own belongings..that was different ...today geet cried for him...aww that's a cute realization for maan.

Hi,i couldn't resist myself from commenting on this.i just loved this.it was such a beautiful way of explaining what i wrote abt geet's tears n maan's realisation.thank u so much for this nice comments.

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puth

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Posted: 14 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: tonyahk

hi reg. geet's character
*sometimes i prefer nt 2 expose her feelings fully so as 2 maintain d element of surprise in d story
*as far as now she respects MSK
*moreover she has promised him tht she won't expect anything from this shadi
*she still believes tht 1day sameera would be back in his life
*she is commited2all her relations like her family,dadi,friends etc.so she enjoys her times with them also
*she also told tht she won't leave him unless he asks

so i feel,we shd explore her charac. slowly

thanks dear for the explaination😊

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#425

Part 156
sunday afternoon @KM
geet just now returned from her maika&is chatting with dadi.maan wasn't in home.nowdays he doesn't like 2 stay in KM in sunday mornings.so he went 4 office.after some time maan comes&joins geet&dadi convo
few minutes later maneet leave 4 their room&dadi smirks2herself thinking abt DM#2.
Geet first enters d room&maan follows her few feets behind
G:(shoughts)hey babaji!(she runs outta d room&bumps in2 maan&looses her balance&closes her eyes in fear)
M:(holds her waist2stop her from falling&lost in her closed eyes)
G:(opens her eyes few sec. later)
M:(still lost)

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Durga

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Posted: 14 years ago

#426

dadi s upto something ! i wonder wat plan she had made, i guess she dint decorate the room !

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Nadia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#427

your ff is going very nice

you add small parts but they are excellent

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#428

Part 157
G:sir
M:..
G:sir,mein teek hun
M:(comes outta d trance&makes her stand steady&removes his arms from her waist¬ices her worried face)
M:geet,kya hua?y did u shought?
G:wo wo..
M:bolo geet kya hua?
G:(points 2 their room)wo kamare mein...
M:(confused)wo kamare mein kya hain geet?
G:sir,u come&see 4 urself(walks 2wards d room)
M:(follows her cautiously&scans d room with his eyes bt he couldn't find anything weird)geet yahan tho subkuch teek hai.thn y did u shought?
G:sir,dubara teekse check kejiye
M:(again looks aroud d room bt there was nothing wrong)geet now pl. tell me.hua kya?