Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated - Page 98

Originally posted by: esha143

sorry honey😳....ghar ke kaam mein busy ho gayi thi,socha sab kaam ho jaaye tab aaraam se likhungi...tabhi toh itni badi comment de paayi hu...haalaaki uss mein kuch nahi hai 😆,mere bakwaas ke alawa....

its ok ya... mashti kar rahi hu... i understand...

will reply to your post in a while😳 and just for your kind information... i love the bakwas you do😛

Hey Sonia...the update is really good :)

Originally posted by: puth

lovely udpate Sonia

Thanks sweetie😃

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hiii sonia.....😃😃

firstlu am i A A or A😕😕

and when did u become innocent ??????😕😕😕 thats news yaar!!!!

mee lubbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbedddddddddddddddd the update..

super sensous without being over the top...

my heart rate was going up up up.....😳

so now everything is in geets hands ha.....I HOPE WO MAAN JAISI CONTROL FREAK NA NIKLE!!!!😡😡

ok...arjun is good or bad??? why did nt say he is also acting????😲😲😲

me likes anu!!! so u better not make him a spineless money grabbing a**!!!😡😡😡

maans posseseeiveness...😍

his understanding n gentlemanlu behaviour.....AASH in duvidhe...praise karu ke ghussa hu!!!!

about vicky...........VICKY SINGH KHURRANA??? or a distant relative?? lekin agar ye khurranas ki company hoti to adinky ko pata hota na!!!

and me loving anu more n more.....u can reconsider my metafor wala idea😉😉😉

Hiii Ash... ok so you can be A1, A2 or even A3 for that matter... all of them are unreserved as of now😆...

Acha main bigadi hui and you the most innocent one here... wah wah... Geet ishtyle... Ulta chor kotwal ko daante😆... aur tujhe maan chahiye... kal raat ko toh mujhe phenk ke maar rahi thi☺️... so ab return kyun karu?

Its our Geet Ash... fikar not... i'll make sure she makes most of the opportunity😉😆... well that romantic part was a little difficult to write as well😳

Hmm so back to dhamki business and this time for Anu... you changed your opinion of Arjun too soon... last part main you loved him... didn't you😆

Ash ki duvidha.... well relish the past wala and peeto the present wala... duvidha solve... intellegent me😆

Distant relative nahiiii.... he's Maan's bro, Vikrant Khurana... for more details refer part 2😆

And no.... i m not considering your metaphor wala idea😡

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

u always leave me in a daaaaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzeeeeeeeee.

i'm at a loss of words. can't get enough of u'r writing style. luv the way u'r story flows. present n past r always so beautifully submerged into eachother. 👍🏼

maan's possessiveness was incredibly s**y 😉 but awwwwww he trusted her so much back then. he didn't even let her give any explanation for hanging out with yash.......i hope he reevaluate his geet n understand that sumthing's amiss. 😕

gotta luv vicky's entry. i hope cvs learn a thing or two from u😍

thanks a bunch sweetie... i'm humbled... i'm glad to know that my past and present are moving just in sync as i had planned it 😃

his possessiveness brought out the best out of him na😉😆

He'll honey... he'll repent for his mistakes... and then Vicky too is here.... glad you liked him😳

Originally posted by: doosheeka

nice update....................continue soon..................

Thanks dearie
will try to😃

Originally posted by: simi91

amazing update pls cont soonnnnnn thanks pm

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Aww... Simi 🤗
Thanks a ton sweets....so glad you enjoyed😳

Thanks for the lovely card as well... means a lot😃

Originally posted by: rsroopali

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

luved itttttttttttt

n is vicky maans bro

Thanks Roopali😃
so glad you enjoyed... and yes, Vicky is Maan's bro😳

Originally posted by: euphoric

Thanks sweetie😃



Hiii Ash... ok so you can be A1, A2 or even A3 for that matter... all of them are unreserved as of now😆...

Acha main bigadi hui and you the most innocent one here

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.. wah wah... Geet ishtyle... Ulta chor kotwal ko daante😆... aur tujhe maan chahiye... kal raat ko toh mujhe phenk ke maar rahi thi☺️... so ab return kyun karu?

Its our Geet Ash... fikar not... i'll make sure she makes most of the opportunity😉😆... well that romantic part was a little difficult to write as well😳

Hmm so back to dhamki business and this time for Anu... you changed your opinion of Arjun too soon... last part main you loved him... didn't you😆

Ash ki duvidha.... well relish the past wala and peeto the present wala... duvidha solve... intellegent me😆

Distant relative nahiiii.... he's Maan's bro, Vikrant Khurana... for more details refer part 2😆

And no.... i m not considering your metaphor wala idea😡

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

my my.....i have to say that a possessive Maan is one of my favourites...his possessiveness just reinforces that fact that he loves her so much...and i loved the way that entire section of the flashback was written...i could imagine every expression...really written well...

and their closeness in the outhouse made me blush...i kept thinking what if maan hadn't stop....

as for the present...glad to see geet trying to move on...i hope she contacts Anu,...she owes her that much...can't wait to see where you take the story next...

Hey dear... thanks a ton buddy

well a possessive Maan is always a treat for all of us... wish we had more of him on the show too😉😆... glad that you liked the narration😳

What if Maan didn't stop😲... sweetie... i was in office while posting... Maan had no option but to stop😉😆... give her some time... she'll contact Anu😃

Originally posted by: swetha10

nice update.. luved the possessive maan.. continue soon

Thanks a ton Swetha...
So glad you enjoyed😳

Originally posted by: maneet1985

awesome...!!!

Thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: Shalve

awesome update...loved it...

Thanks Shalve... glad you enjoyed

Originally posted by: komlika

awesome 👏......... maan is so possessive 😲....... now this explain why he is so angry at geet n doesnt want to find her........ how would have he felt when he saw geet sitting with other man to get married 😭.......... what is story of arjun? is he bad (PLZ dont make him bad.... anu is so nice) ........ vicky is maan's brother😉..... vicky is so going to irritate geet to be friend with her......... let see what twist he brings to story......... let see how u make maaneet meet 😍......... continue soon n thanks for PM 😛

Hey Komlika.... thanks a ton sweetie😃
yes... he couldn't see her with anyone and seeing her in the mandap... was his last straw!
Yes Vicky is going to irritate Geet but then he's going to support her too😉... i'll try and update soon... glad you enjoyed this one😳

Originally posted by: Miss-Riz

Hey Sonia...the update is really good :)

Thanks a ton dear😃

Originally posted by: esha143

reserveeeeeeeeeeee..............😆

Sorry for being late....caught up with some work.....ok coming to the update now....

I loved the whole party thing....how Anu never left a chance to tease Maan about Geet,Geet's rambling and Maan's teasings....all are so cutee.....and then Geet's gussa on knowing Maan's past n her ignoring tactics on Maan which drove him wild n crazy....I loved the possessive Maan particularly....he's more hot when he's being possessive 😉😆.....that's why it became difficult for Geet to handle him 😛....All the moments that transpired between them in th eout house are so beautiful....its my most fav. part in the update....I loved the way how he showed her his trust on her and his possessiveness for her all at once...and also showing her effect on him.....and his on her.....and left her to decide the pace of their relationship....the comfort level between a couple is more important than their desires n passions.....and as for AA....I liked their pair....and seeing his involvement in the present track ,I think he's a positive guy..as for NT's words I think she's referring to Arjun-Annie's relationship,which they are acting before others' to keep secret....Lets see....

I like the whole family of Adi...they are so sweet,they love Geet so much and they're so supportive....and I liked today's present track....finally something positive in the light of all the negative that surrounded Geet till now....and I'm guessing that she's to meet Maan soon due to this job of hers and then the supposed war will begin.....well bring it on....lets see how long Maan will remain a moron in this FF and refuse his own feelings for Geet.....I'll prepare my Spl.Jootis in case I need them for either Maan or his creator😉😆😆....

Totally awesome update.....loved it very much....Keep up the good work on Past track 😉😛😆

Oh I totally forgot about Vicky,sorry😆.....so u brought the last of Khurana siblings in to picture....who idolizes Maan....well lets see if he can be the bridge between his brother n his love....so thats how Maan n Geet will meet,through Vicky,as I think Vicky is gonna Geet's new boss 😉....Am I guessing too much now,will stop it here then😆...u continue with the rest bud....😛

First of all Esha... really really thanks😃

remember i had mentioned i was planning something for the party... so this was it😆... thank ku for those encouraging comment😳

Anu as always was just being her irritating best for her Veerji😆... possessive Maan is just like an eye-candy... me lub him too... poor Geet😳.... he was being his mischevious best and it was their first so close moment together... and as you mentioned his focus was to make her comfortable with his proximity though i doubt that can ever happen😉😆

Hmm... so my thread divided on views about Arjun😆 but i guess its more to do with Anu's character... i m so happy that we have all fallen for this Anu😳

your guess about the present track is very close... but then wait... lemme go hunt for my shield😆... throw as many as you may like on Maan... haan haan... will surely keep up the past wala good work😉😆

Vicky and Geet will work together... well let me say only this much that he's going to Anu's bro especially in case of bridging the gap😳

Thank you so much for the lovely comments hun😳