Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated - Page 53

Originally posted by: esha143

Nice update Sonia....loved to see Geet beating that Manager and then deliberately slipping him to fall....it servesd him right....enjoyed all of Maan's antics to make Geet realize his intentions....and finally their near-confession...its really good....I didn't expect them to talk about it yet...but felt happy that they did..... now eagerly waiting for the next part to see Maan's reactions to Geet's fears and how he removes them and of course their actual confession....😛

Originally posted by: sakadafi

What a fabulous update!!! Loved and enjoyed every part of it. Maan's teasing...Geet's jhansi ki rani avatar...the moments the two had together........very beautifully penned. 👏👏👏👏👏 Continue soon...

Originally posted by: richiiiii

omg!!!

i loved your ff.....itz cute and enthralling

plz update soon

n add me in your pm-list😊

Originally posted by: euphoric

yeah i know... kahin toh shuruwat hui😆

trust me those all time glycerine soaps really make me sick and thts exactly when i love to switch off... i don't understand why drag things... end it gracefully and let it go but they bend it so hard that they end up breaking the spine of the plot and characters... i was grateful when Rajeev Khandelwal left kahin toh hoga... it made it so easy to not bother switching on the television next day😆

My mom a fan of colours and star plus too... it gets really irritating at times... but then such is life dearies😕😆

and ok to give you a little more satisfaction u r right about Vicky's entry too😆

Originally posted by: euphoric

Thanks dear😃

Glad you liked the concept... plot and the narration

have added you... hope to hear more from you😳

Originally posted by: .muskaan

last time when u wrote abt RK... i forgot to tell you just how much i like him... god he is one flawless actor... did not watch him in KTH but have seen his show LRT*need i mention just coz of him and when they killed him i gave the show royal ignore*...

yippppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.... finally one guess that was 100% correct... i mean abt vicky's entry i did not add any phaltu bak bak just wrote when he will enter so that way my tukka was 100% correct

Originally posted by: richiiiii

thnks for adding😊....and i hope you continue soon.....so that you can hear from me soon 😆

why do i have a feeling that geet will work in dev's hotel....which is more or less doomed...and then maan will finally intervene....i mean thats the only way i think by which these two can come in contact again.....or maybe you have something else in mind😉

anyways whatever it is ..i know it will be great.....

thanks once again

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

ohhh wow...u are such a talented writer.i just came across ur FF and read all parts in one shot....but now the suspense is killing me,....can't wait to read more....plz add me to ur PM list ....thank u :)