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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

First of all,Vicky...since u started off with him....So he's back to India on an errand from Maan to spy on Dev n NT....and now he met with Geet here who is going to work for Dev now?😲...Well u brought Dev n Vicky both at the same time in to the story,as we haven't heard of any of them till now....so don't know whether Dev's a jerk here too or just a JKG of NT...but I'm sure NT is as wicked as in the show,her deeds in the hotel business proves that,bloody money-minded woman😡....well as long as she stays out of my Maaneet's way I won't bother about her,but seeing the setting u have drawn bringing all the characters in to the same frame,I think its highly likely that she'll be the cause of distress between Maan n Geet in present once they come face-to-face and NT happens to know about their actual courtship..... well lets see what u have planned for them,since Vicky is also in the picture,the story will surely get interesting now....An dI'm glad Sasha fro once is not against Geet in here,I don't want her to go through more than she already had....her plate is quite full with out all that nonsense....and on top of that her mind full of Maan,she is bound to be sad now n then even if she has distractions.....and now Maan himself is going to be the biggest distraction for her since he's coming down to look in to the Dev-Tara matter himself.....lets see how she's gonna cope with this situation when she just decided to move ahead in life...and Maan,well I did felt bad seeing him fighting with himself regarding his feelings which he can never deny to self.... The arrogant man waiting outside a house for its window to open....its so touching to witness....it does shows how much he deny in front of Anu,he still cares about her deeply....
So for now Maan is not going to get any joothas from me.....😆

Loved the past moments of maaneet they spent in Geet's house....his taking such care of her in the absence of her parents,his sulking over her last day in office and her bossy attitude towards him and his extra efforts to make the last day of her office memorable for her...all the sweet gestures he did for her,they are so adorable...and the showdwn in Hoshiarpur,mohinder is so right in keeping Geet away from such hypocrites as Darji n Brij....who didn't care for their own daughter,for whom money is everything....I now shudder to think what Geet must have gone though while she has been there seeing Daarji's hatred for her....

well lets just end it here till the next update honey...which I'm looking forward to as things are moving in the direction of a re-union of maan n Geet.....😃



yup... Vicky is playing Laxman to Ram... oops i mean Maan😆

well yes... most likely since Dev and Naintara have always appeared in snippets... and since i haven't changed the characteristics of the characters much u may imagine wat Dev and NT would be😆...

do you even think NT will keep to her business... nah... doesn't go with her character na😡 and remember with the party scene she already have a fair idea...

we r here on same plane honey... i don't intend to increase her worries with Sasha... she'll be just fine... and Vicky will be there to cheer her up😳

I know things would be a little difficult for geet with Maan in picture.. not to mention his attitude😡 so yes she's going to be preoccupied in her brains but there are other people who would support her😃 and she's decided to move ahead but well things not going to turn out as she thinks, right?😆... we could lie to the world but not to the world right... the same is with Maan... chalo shukar hai aaj ke liye toh Maan bach gaya😆

u r right about HP.... so now u see why Geet was trapped there... with no one to her aid... the damage to her psyche and confidence and her depression!

thanks a ton honey... 143😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DrashtiDhamiNo1

lovd the update hun

cont soon plz
p.s. thx 4 the pm



thanks a ton sweets😳
glad you enjoyed

Originally posted by: Miss-Riz

Hey Sonia really good update...continue soon :)



thanks honey....
will try to... do keep reading😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi sonia..
i hear i have a dtae with u at 11!!!
madam esh's command!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hi sonia..

i hear i have a dtae with u at 11!!!
madam esh's command!!



i'm quite positive on tht😃... but bachu still need to comment on ur comments! ruk abhi batati hoon😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Rakhi:

thanks for letting me know... i'll be extra careful now😆 and i wasn't planning to cheat u anyways😡... i beg my pardon your honour but tht was an ackusation😆... jealous... arre he'll get jealous of anyone who's near Geet, isn't it... there's not only Adi but Vicky as well... remember he was upset that she was talking to all but him😆

and toh kya hua practical experience nahi hai toh... theoretical toh hai😉😆... aur agar kahin confuse ho bhi gayi... toh u and Esha ho na... mujhe gyan dene ke liye😆

@Esha:

tujhe hartal karni hai? Esha on Andolan😆... wah wah... Ek Kiss andolan😆

besides maine kab kaha i'm updating in next two days😕... yeh sarasar jhooth hai😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhijn106

Really rona a Gaya padke kya dard h dono ke beech n kitna pyar h plzzzzzzzzZzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon n do pm me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz



Thanks Sweetie... glad u enjoyed😃

and so sorry to have made u cry... they'll meet soon... will PM u... looking forward to hear more from u😳



Originally posted by: maan-ki-sanjana

Love your story! Update soon! ohh congrats on 150 pages 😃



thanks Sanjana😃
glad u enjoyed... will love to hear more from u😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hi sonia..

i hear i have a dtae with u at 11!!!
madam esh's command!!


waise aashu main poochna bhool gayi...tu ne kal Jia ko maan ki behen banaaya aur aaj soni ko bhi .....aise kitnon ko maan ki behen banaayegi unhe apne raasthe se hataane ke liye ha🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric



@Esha:

tujhe hartal karni hai? Esha on Andolan😆... wah wah... Ek Kiss andolan😆

besides maine kab kaha i'm updating in next two days😕... yeh sarasar jhooth hai😆



yes ek kiss andolan....hartaal kar dungi mein...abhi ye kiss hume past tense mein chaahiye so kis pe hi rukna pad raha hai....warna time aane pe present mein aur bhi demands hongi humaari taiyyar rehna😆....aur hume proper kiss chaahiye...woh maan waale kisses nahi jo abhi tak tu ne dikhaaye hai...samjhi...waha show pe kuch nahi hotha,kam se kam yaha toh aise scenes daal diya karo ki humaara mann behel jaaye....aur maine jhooth nahi bola... 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hi sonia....😃

first of all happy womans day...belated!!!😳
and u are my nanand...maans sis!!! samjhi!! apni bhabhi se izzat se baat karo!!😡
hehe...i can see the fumes coming till here..*AASH runs and hides behind ESHA BEHAN*😆
okeys now to the discussion:
lovely update...(ye bolne ki zaroorat hai????)!!😕
vicky is doing jasoosi of dev=nt!! n maan is gonna come to mumbai...yayayayayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy👏
love u sonia....🤗
me absolutely hated darji n brij!!! they are like a cure to womanhood....we might sit n discuss...but there are loads of woman out there for whom such cruelty n abuse is part of life...without a savior to save their souls....men such as them deserve to burn in helll....but sadly in this life they get off scot free...the story of GHSP(which started of as!!! not the lovey dovey current trach!!!) was about this.....😡
to be proud of our womanhood...understand our rights...and fight for them...😡
sonia i hope u show that in ur FF...and dont just show a love story.....Geets fight for justice n her revenge for her abuse n parents death!!⭐️
plz think about it!!
ok enough of serious talks!! 😳
cant believe its me only saying all this na???? hehe.....😲
maans pain n dejection was good...i expected more.....anger reducing n clear brain thinking starting time has come.....
anu has to take matters in her own hands now!!😡😡😡
their romance was cute...can maan plz stopp the softy softy behaviour n try underhanded tactics on geet plz!!!! bahot ho gaya gentlemanly behaviour!!!😉
hehe...that sounds more like me!!!😉
okeys..
thts it....
byeeee...mu cutie..nanand!!!!!!!!!!!🤣



Nanand😡... Esha i'm going to recycle all those joothis you have been throwing at me😉😆😆

and Ashu madam... Esha Behan ke peeche chup ke koi fayda nahi... i m not letting u go so easily... hu ha ha ha ha *evil laughter*

yes bol bol... mujhe apni tareef sun na achcha lagta hai...

thank you hai btw... i love you loads too😳😆

arre don't even talk about the social evils against women.... i have talking to Esha about the same thing today evening... it's horrible... even the cities like Mumbai and Delhi, things r no better and what do u do whn the saviour turns the violator! i.e., the husband himself!

yes these kind of men are curse to the mankind😡

i would try and incorporate justice here... i m so bugged with tht not being mete with Geet actually!

no honey... we only have to make a noise about it! good u made a point there... but the sad part is most of the times as an outsider we r helpless!😭

his anger is going to flair at her sight honey😆... and party scene was hot now... wasn't it? he wasn't too much a gentleman there😆

thank a bunch sweetheart... luv ya🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25

great part as always sonia.....
and plz plz .....sorry for chotu comment......you know these days i am busy like hell...only I know how i am managing to read updates these days.....will give you a long comment once I am free .......



Hey Namita... missed u dear😳

Thanks a ton... u took time in ur busy schedule is more than enuf... but i'll wait for the bigger comments😃

Glad u liked😳



thanks dearie...
glad u enjoyed😃

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