Kitni Ajeeb Hai Yeh Zindagi

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😊Hello Friends😛
I m a new member here but i have read lots of ff's here as a silent reader.
I had also started writing a story 2 years ago and i post regularly in RTW.
Thought i might share it here as well.
pls. tell me if u want me to continue posting the parts
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As you should have noticed, the ff is called 'Kitni Ajeeb Hai Yeh Zindagi.'

I will post the summary in the next post.
Hoping to see many readers
Love,
Khushi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello again....
i m back with the character post of the story
sorry for the late post
enjoyy
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Character Sketch



Avantika:- She is a very simple girl.  People who know her and people close to her call her Avi. For her, her masi, masa, Raj, Rahul, Prem and her best friends are her world. She likes to play basketball a lot and misses her mom, dad, and Pooja a lot. She has a different world that even she doesn't know about yet. She finds about that later on in the story. Ash, Pri, Armaan and Neev are her bestest friends.




Ashlesha:- Everyone call her Ash. Doing mischief and playing pranks on friends is her passion. But she loves her family and her friends. She likes Neev but hides it and keeps fighting with him.




Preeti:- She is adorable girl. Her family is traditional type, so she has to wear salwaar suit whenever she's out of school. Even though she disagrees with wearing them all the time, she wears them without arguments since she loves her parents. Other than that, she loves her friends and can do anything for them.




Malini:- She is Raj's classmate/friend and sister of Neev. She is kind and simple girl. She finds her mother in Sonia masi too and loves her just like her mom. Even Sonia thinks of her as her daughter. She secretly likes Raj too but just like Raj, she is afraid that he doesn't like her and so doesn't tell him thinking that she might loose a nice friend.




Sonia Malhotra:- She is Avi's and Prem's masi and mother of Raj and Rahul. She is kind and caring and mostly solves everyone's problems. All of Avi's friends call her masi. She plays a major role in the life of Avi and Armaan.




Natasha:- She is the girlfriend of Prem. But is she??? She has something else going on in her mind......




Armaan:- He is the popular kid in school, same grade as Avi and he is her best friend. There is nothing about her that he doesn't know. Avi shares all  her secrets with him. Even secrets that not even Ash or Preeti know about! Even he is something more than what he knows about. Something he couldn't even dream about! He and Avi figure out the whole situation and...




Prem:- He is the brother of Avi, lives in New York, but comes back to India later on. He loves his sister very very very much. He also helps Armaan secretly when there are misunderstandings between Armaan and Avi. He likes Natasha. He met her in New York. But later on finds true love in India.




Raj:- He is brother of Avi, Rahul, and Prem. He is kind-hearted and loves Malini a lot. But is scared of confessing it to her since he is afraid of the outcome and doesn't want to lose her atleast as a friend. Armaan and Avi help him get his love.




Rahul:- He is nice to everyone and finds out everything about everyone one way or other. He is the "cartoon" of the family. There is no fun without him. He loves his family and Avi a lot.




Neev:-He is the best friend of Armaan. He is also friends with Avi. He met Ash through Avi, Ofcourse. He likes Ash but thinks she doesn't like him since she always keeps fighting with him. He helps Armaan whenever in need and lost his mother when he was just 7 years old. He misses her a lot but soon finds a great mother in Sonia masi.


These are the characters i keep in mind while writing an ud. but while reading it you all may assume your own fav couples/ actor, actress if you all like.

Hope you all like it and i m looking forward to ur comments if u want me to coninue. and if u liked to story line....

Love,
Khushi

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Edited by Khushi_Princess - 14 years ago
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Background...
There's a girl who lives in Mumbai, India. Her name is Avantika. So guys, our story starts at her door. 24 Chandini Chowk. She has a big house. In fact, her house is the biggest in the neighborhood. She lives by herself. She had moved to London when she was 10 years old with her family. Something happened to her family and she got very upset. So, she moved back to her homeland. INDIA. She lives in her own world with her best friends and peoples she loves the most. We'll find out later on as we read, as to what happened to her family. So, now. Let's go in this huge house and see what's going on over here!!!!
Edited by Khushi_Princess - 14 years ago
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Hey...
i seem to have forgotten my password for id Khushi_Princess
nd i m not able to get a new password. so i had to open a new account.
the chapters will be posted from this id now.

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thnk you.
glad you like it.
can i know ur name?
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Chapter 1

First, lets start with Avi's house....







Today is April 12th. And it's Avantika's birthday. It is early morning as we enter her bedroom. She yawns and get a feeling that something strange is going to happen today. Then she realizes that today's the last day of school and also her birthday. She looks at the clock and see that she's getting late. So she gets ready soon. She's wearing the red dress that her friends insisted her on wearing.

(this is how it looks like)



Since it is the last day of the school, they are allowed to wear whatever they want to wear and not the uniform. Her best friend's names are Ashlesha and Preeti. Today she turns 16. That means she's in 11th grade. Then she goes to the kitchen and gets some breakfast.



She hurries and goes to school.


As she is parking her cycle she sees Ashlesha and Preeti coming towards her with a big smile on their faces. They hug her and say: "Happy birthday, Avi!!!" (Her friends call her Avi. Short for Avantika. And they call Ashlesha as Ash, and call Preeti as Pri.)

Avi: "Thanks Ash. Thankz Pri."

Ash:"So, who wished you first???"

Pri: "Oh come on. Is it a thing to ask??? Ofcourse itz Armaan!!!"

Avi: "I m afraid not. Not this time."

Pri: "Don't tell me he forgot."

Ash adds: "Again.."

Avi: "I m afraid so 😭 😭 😭 😭 "

Ash: "Don't worry. By evening he'll surely remember."

Pri: "Yah. She's right."

Avi: "I hope so." And smiled. She was done locking her cycle. "Let's go."

As soon as they walked in they saw Armaan coming towards them.

Ash: "Uh...oh...here he comes... Aaj mein usse nahi chodungi...."and starts walking ahead of them when Avi stops her.

Avi: "Leave it. I don't want to talk to him today. Just ignore him and keep walking...Please?"

"Ofcourse." They both replied nodding their heads.

Armaan approaches them and says:"Hey guys. What's up??"

(Armaan is also their friend since kindergarden. Just like Ashi and Pri.)

They ignore them and he thinks that they probably didn't see him. So he catces up with them against and repeats it again: "Heya"
Avi knew that he wouldn't go away until they talked to him. So Avi motioned to Ash and Pri that they could talk to him so he goes away.

Ash: "Hi Armaan."

Pri: "Hey"

Avi doesn't reply and just keeps walking. She could hear them three talking but the voice was fading with every step. She only heard:-

Armaan: "Hey, what's up with her?"

Pri: "Nothing happened to her. Something happened to you."

Armaan: "Me? What happened to me?"

Ash: "Figure it out. Bye. We're getting late to class."

They walked off. Avantika was talking with some of her classmates when Ash and Pri joined her. They asked: "Ready?"

"Uh huh." Avi replied nodding her head.

While walking to class Pri asked: "So, where's the party?"

Avi: "What party?" she asked pretending like she didn't know what they were talking about.

Ash: "Come on. Don't try to fool us."

Avi: "Alright. Party is tonight Ofcourse. 6:00 o' clock and you both are coming early to help me decorate. Right?"

Pri: "Is this something you have to ask? We'll surely come."

They entered the classroom. The teacher was already there. They came in and Avi saw Armaan in his usual seat that was next to her. She didn't want to sit next to him so she asked the teacher: "Can I seat with Ash and Pri today?"

Teacher: "Sure Avantika, today's the last day so u may sit wherever you feel like. "

Avi: "Thanks maam."

She nodded and smiled. Avi went and sat next to Ash and Pri. By seeing this Armaan was confused and now he really wanted to know what was wrong. So he wrote a note to Avi.

(this is what it said)
To,
Avi!
Hey. What's up? Are you mad at me?😲 Why aren't you talking to me? Did I do something wrong? Pls. talk to me.😭 😭 😭 When you are mad at me I don't like it one bit. Pls. smile 😊 😊 😊. You look good when you're smiling and not sad... By the way, you are looking pretty today.😛 😛 😛 Nice color!!! Pls. reply to me!!! :( :(.
Your best friend:
Armaan. ⭐️

He then folded the note and gave it to Neev who was coming to our desk. Unlike Armaan he remembered that today was Avi's birthday. He took the note from Armaan with a puzzled look.

Armaan: "Give this to Avi if you're going that way."

Neev: "Sure." He said and started coming to our desk. And said: "Happy Birthday" to Avi.

Avi: "Thanks."

Neev: "Here. This is for you."

Avi: "For me?"

Neev: "Yah. Armaan gave this to me to give it to you."

After reading the note she crumpled the piece of paper and seeing this Armaan figured that this time a piece of paper is not going to help. And so he started wondering what the problem was. Ashi, Pri and Neev saw this too.

Seeing this Neev said: "Pls. don't tell me that he forgot again."

Ash: "Sorry to say it, but your your best friend did forget."

Avi: "And this time he's not gonna get off this easily."

Pri took the paper from her hands and started uncrumpling it. She read it and passed it to Ash, who than passed it to Neev. All three of them shook their heads in disappointment. Finally Avi said: "And Neev, don't even think about reminding him about this. Let him figure it out once by himself." Neev nodded and left to join his other friends. The whole day passed with chattering all around the classroom. Finally it was time for recess and the bell was about to ring. So everybody settled down so the teacher would dismiss them.
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Precap:- Ash and Preeti talks to Neev and Neev tells Armaan what he is forgetting... kya Armaan apni galati sudhaar payega??? Kya voh Avi ko manaa legaa????

Love
Khushi

Edited by Princess_Khushi - 14 years ago
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Chapter 2

As soon as the bell rang, everyone rushed out of the room. Avantika told Ashlesha and Preeti to hurry up since she knew Armaan would surely try to talk to her. Ash and Preeti were digging in their book bag and said: "Yah. You go."


Avantika rushed to the door so she could get out before Armaan reached her. But Armaan was too fast and he came in front of Avantika and blocked her way. She moved to her right. Armaan moved the same way and stopped her from going out. She then moved to her left. Same thing happened on this side too.

Avantika stops trying to get out and looks up to him as if to say 'What?'

Armaan:"Problem kya hai? Tum mujhse baat kyoun nahi kar rahi ho? Maine kiya kya hai?"

Just than Ashlesha and Preeti came up behind Avantika and stood on either sides of Avantika. Ash replied for Avantika knowing what she would have said, "Problem kya hai? Yeh tum puch rahe ho? Hum bhi tum se yahi question puch sakte hai!"

Armaan: "Kya matlab?"

Preeti: "Matlab ki tum kuch bohut important bhul rahe ho. Aur shaam tak yaad karle na. Varna......"

Ashlesha: "Good luck!" and gives him the thumbs up sign. "You'll need it."


Avantika does not say a single word to him and all three of them walks around him and make their way outside. Armaan is just standing there still thinking as to what he had done wrong. All he knew was that Avantika was not talking to him and reason is something very important. And he had to find out what.

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Preeti, Ashlesha, and Avantika are now walking down the corridor making their way around the crowd. Ashlesha says, "Avi. Tum jao. Hum abhi aate hai. Mujhe Dia [Their class-mate] ko uski book vapas karni thi. Preeti, mere saath chalo gi? Please?"

Preeti: "Sure. Avi, Tum canteen jao. Hum abhi aate hai."

Avantika nods and says, "Hurry up." Ash and Preeti nods and turns back to go to the classroom. Avantika goes the other way.

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Preeti stops when she sees Dia and says to Ash, "Ash, Dia toh yaha hai. Phir hum class-room ke ander kyoun jaa rahe hai?"

Ashlesha puts her hand around Preeti's shoulder and says, "Kyoun ki hume Neev ko dhund naa hai."

Preeti is confused and asks, "Par hum Neev ko kyoun dhund rahe hai? Tumne toh Avi se kaha tha ki tumhe Dia ko book deni hai."

Ashlesha slams her hand thinking 'Aab iss ladki ko kaise samjhaau" and says, "Haa. Maine kaha tha. Kyoun ki mujhe excuse dhund na tha. Taaki main joh karne jaa rahi hun, voh Avi ko pata naa chale!"

The way Ashlesha said that, it scared Preeti a little. Because whenever Ash starts talking like that, it meant that a big trouble was heading at someone's way. Preeti stops Ash by holding her by her wrist and asks, "Hum kaha jaa rahe hain? Aur tum kya soch rahi ho?"

Ashlesha senses Preeti's fear and says, "Don't worry. Main aisa kuch bhi nahi karungi jiss se koi bhi hurt ho. Main sirf Neev ko yeh keh ne vaali hun ki voh kisi bhi tarah Armaan ko bata de ki voh Avantika kaa birthday bhul gaya hai."

Preeti: "Par humne Avantika se promise kiya tha ki hum use nahi bataenge."

Ashlesha: "Hum use kaha bataa rahe hain? Hum Neev ko keh rahe hai ki voh Armaan ko bataa de. Aur vaise bhi, kya tum chahti ho ki Armaan aur Avi kabhi ek dusre se baat na kare? Tumhe yaad hain na ki Avi ne kya decide kiya tha? Don't you?"

Preeti thinks hard and after few seconds says, "Baat toh thik hai. Chalo. Neev se baat karke dekhte hai."

Ash gives Preeti a one side hug and say smiling, "That's my girl! Chalo!"

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In the canteen Avantika is impatiently waiting for Ashlesha and Preeti and she kept looking at the watch every now and then. the waiter kept on glancing at her every few seconds coz avantika always motioned to him to bring her special whenever she comes to canteen. but today, she hadn't motioned to him and he was getting impatient. he finally decided to go over to her and ask for himself.

Chiku: "Didi, sab thik toh hai na?" He was just 14 years old and he had to work and quit his studies. Avantika had helped him out by giving him book and forcing him to study and get education.

Avantika glanced up when he heard him and shook her head. "Ha. Bas Ashlesha aur Preeti ka wait kar rahi hu. Kyu?"


Chiku: "Apne abhi tak lunch order nahi liya tha iss liye puch liya. acha, aap wait kijiye, mujhe jaana hago," glancing back at the line forming near the counter.


Both bid good bye to each other...

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Preeti and Ash go inside the classroom and look for Neev. They find him at the very end of the room playing with some other guys. They walk over where he was and Ashlesha says, "Neev. Hume tumse baat karni hai."

Neev: "Bolo."

Ash: "Yaha nahi. Aage chalo."

Neev: "Kya hain na. bolo na. dikh nahi raha. Mein ek bohot important game khel rahe hai. Aur mein win bhi ho raha hun. I don't want too loose."

Ashlesha gets mad and says, "Bohut important game. Oh! Toh main abhi tumhe dikha ti hun ki kaise jeeta jaata hain," and picks him a little above from ground by his collar.

Neev: "Okay okay okay. Leave me."

Preeti: "Ash. Chodo use."

Ash: "Okay." She leaves him and almost falls to the ground. He straightens himself out and says: "Okay. Kya hai?"

Preeti: "Well...tum jaante ho ki Armaan Avi ka birthday bhul gayaa hain." Mutters the next part to herself, "As always."

Neev: "I know. Aur iss me main kya kar sakta hu?"

Ash: "Are you gonna shut up and listen or..." Understanding what Ash meant by that...

Neev: "No no no. Mein sunn raha hun. You keep going."

Preeti: "As I was saying, agar Armaan ko iss bar yaad nahi aaya toh phir Avantika ne decide kiya hain ki voh Armaan se kabhi baat nahi karegi."

Neev: "What? That can't happen!!!"

Ash: "We now that idiot. That's why we need your help. Tum Armaan ko bataa do kyoun ki hum nahi bataa sakte. Humne Avi ko promise kiya tha ki hum use nahi batyenge."

Neev: "But, I also told her I won't tell Armaan anything."

Ash: "Yes. Kaha tha. But she didn't make you promise. And if you don't want to tell him, than just write a note to him. But do something."

Preeti: "Yah. Just tell it to him in some way. We'll keep Avi busy till then. Okay?"

Neev: "Okay. I'll think of something. Don't worry." Ash and Pri got their lunch and went to keep Avi busy.

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Precap:- Avi doesn't want to come to the End Of Year party. But then Pri convinces her to come. Neev somehow tells Armaan what he's forgetting. Mr. Singh has called Ash, Pri and Avi in his office. Are they in some kind of trouble??? Keep reading to find out!!!

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Edited by Princess_Khushi - 14 years ago
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WOW SO YOU STARTED UR FF OVER HERE TOO...THATS IS SUCH A GR88 IDEA YAAR...
WELL U WONT SEE ME COMMENTING AS U KNOW I ALREADY READ A WHOLE LOT AHEAD IN RTW...
BUT GOOD LUCK...UD SOON
ROCK IT⭐️
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Hey Khush...i didnt see that u hadnt log out...and i forgot that i wasnt using my lappy lol...
so the above post is definitly nto by you but by me...

srryyyy 😕
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Originally posted by: Kasurbest

Hey Khush...i didnt see that u hadnt log out...and i forgot that i wasnt using my lappy lol...
so the above post is definitly nto by you but by me...

srryyyy 😕



hehehehe....
ofcourse u did't!
nd tht's fine.
u can comment after it's caught up.
n thnx

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