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Posted: 14 years ago
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okay finally! im so sorry i updated so late was just caught up with work!! so sorry!! here it goes guys, please comment and tell me how it is...










Recap- Atul comes back. Anjali and Atul decide to have lunch together. Armaan and Riddhima are on their date on the yacht. Riddhima looks beautiful in her red dress and Armaan is in his dashing white shirt and blue jeans. on their date'

They loosen the hug after a while' Armaan bent down on his knees as he places his hand forward.

"dance?" he asked

Riddhima smiled and placed her hand on his. Armaan stood up and walked her to the middle of the dock.

They had come quite far from the harbor now. He held her by her waist and pulled her closer. As she had both her arms around his neck and he had both around her waist and they moved slow and soft with the soft tune that played. The looked into each others eyes and their heads brushed together now. They swayed with the soft music. Armaan looked at her flashing his dimples and she looked down as she smiled too. She now bought her down hand and placed it on his chest, he still held her by her waist. Just as she was falling more and more in love with him as she felt his heart beats. He held her hand and pulled them up and turned her around. After one round he stopped her half way as she could finish the next one and pulled her towards him. Her back hit his chest and he held her tight with both his hand around her waist, her hand also were tangled his. Armaan buried his head in her hair. He loved that smell. He felt that was his place to stay forever. He buried his face deep down in her hair he soon reached her neck. As he nuzzled her neck slowly still taking in her fragrance. Riddhima shut eyes and tilted her head to the other side as she felt his touch. As small smile played on her face as she felt ticklish. Moving up, and kissing her ear lobe, he held her tighter. Riddhima moved her head little as she felt him kiss. The disturbance the hair was being, Armaan moved her hair in front of her shoulder exposing her back. He bent down and placed few kisses on her shoulder. Riddhima with her eyes shut, just let go, she loved him and she trusted him that's all what was she thought about. She loved the feel and the touch of his lips, they belonged to her. As he moved up and planted on last kiss on her ear lobe he turned her around. Riddhima place her hand on his chest again and he held her by her waist. He then took then on hand on her and held it on the side in between their shoulders. And now they properly danced and moved with the music. He twirled her out and the again in, they were facing each other again. The green and the blue met and created magic. Riddhima came closer and hugged him. Holding him as tight as possible and he also put his around her and they completed each other. Even Riddhima did not why but her eyes just turned watery at that moment. May be, it was just the unbelievable happiness. Not able to see her face as it was buried in her chest he head her take a deep breath.

" okay basket, I am sorry and chill I am not that a bad boyfriend also that I get you on a date and don't offer you dinner also I have arranged for it. You don't have to cry for that come on." Joked Armaan just to change her mood. Riddhima laughed Armaan and hit him on his chest loosening the hug.

Armaan laughed too, " lets go have food?" he asked.

She nodded and he held her and pulled her towards the dinner table at the corner of the dock.

He pulled her so as to make her comfortable and sat himself. He the removed the lid of the glass bowl. He had arranged for only one dish for the evening to keep it simple and he knew that if this was there for Riddhima then it was nothing like it. And this was something on which Riddhima could survive for the rest of her life. It was her favorite spaghetti with white sauce and olives. Plain and simple yet her favorite she smiled as she saw the spaghetti.

"spaghetti!" she exclaimed as she picked up the bowl to serve Armaan and then her.

Armaan rolled some spaghetti on his fork and fed Riddhima as she ate it she too did the same but did not feed him just pretended to do so and then fed herself. As Armaan s mouth was still open because he thought she was going to feed him, he made a dejected face and Riddhima laughed. He laughed along. Riddhima got busy in her spaghetti again. He looked at her an smiled. She looked just like a little kid who has been given the permission to raid a jar of cookies. He giggled at her innocence. Looked up at him asking him what was so funny by lifting her eyebrows, he simply shook his head. Not bothered Riddhima just lifted her shoulder and went back to her spaghetti.

After the dinner Riddhima leaned forward on the railing on the dock. Armaan jailed her from the back by placing both his hand on the railing on each side of Riddhima. Placing his chin on her shoulder. The were staring at the beautifully lit metro of Mumbai. Im the middle of the sea Mumbai looked heaven. All the huge buildings were lit and the traffic just added to all the lighting.

" Its so beautiful" Riddhima said admiring her city.

"hmm.' Agreed Armaan planting a small kiss in her cheek.

They stared at the city. Cold wind blew. With it so did Riddhima s hair on Armaan s face. He shut his eyes as he felt her hair, his adobe on his face. He just loved these small simple things that happened to him when he was with her. Feeling her hair blow she pulled then all in front of her shoulder as she turned a bit. She saw Armaan s eyes still shut as a small smile played on his face. She smiled.

"Armaan." She whispered as she placed her palm on his cheek/

"haan" Armaan opened his eyes less startled as if some one just woke up just as he was falling asleep.

Riddhima smiled, so lucky was she , she thought to get him.

She turned completely around to face him yet still between arms. Armaan came closer to her , he held her by her waist. Lost in those blues, she moved forward too placing both her arms on his chest. They looked at each other, they looked at themselves in each others eyes. Slowly, Armaan moved forward tilting his head a bit as she moved forward too. Their nose brushed together. Armaan smiled. Riddhima looked at those dimples. She made the initiative and moved forward. So did he. There was no limits today for Riddhima today. It was Armaan and no one else thought Riddhima. And there were never no limits for Armaan as it is. They slowly came closer and their lips brushed together. Its just brushed together as they both shut their eyes and slowly Armaan eloped her upper between his lips. They kissed. Her hand went up to his head in his hair and pulled him closer. He did nothing but held on to her waist tight. Riddhima first let go the kiss, as she came up for air. She opened her eyes looked at him. As he too looked at her confused, wondering whether Riddhima minded this gesture or not. But, she smiled and looked down as she blushed. He smiled too at her consent. Armaan coming closer kissed her again. She replied to the kiss with equal love. This kiss was short yet more passionate as this time both came up for air. He was now still looking at her, blushing Riddhima just smiled and hugged him. Unable to take his stare she buried her head in his chest. Both stood there hugging. They loosen the hug as Riddhima phone rang.

She walked to the table to pick her phone up. It was Padma.

"Riddhima.." Padma replied as she picked up the phone.

" ji maa.." Riddhima said.

" beta, how is it?" Padma asked.

" its amazing maa" Riddhima replied looking at Armaan who was looking at her leaning on the railing.

" good, I am glad. Accha beta, when you coming home.? Its 10:30." Padma asked.

"yes maa we are just leaving."
Armaan looked disappointed as she said that.

"okay bye." Padma kept the phone.

Riddhima knew Padma would not ask her to come home directly. But by asking that she wanted her to come home as it was late.

" lets go back Armaan, it actually late."

"but basket yaar?" Armaan refused as she came closer.

" Armaan we should go, it is late."

Armaan agreed as he himself knew it was, but he just did not want this evening to end.

Picking up his phone he dialed a number.

" haan Ramesh, take the yatch back." He commanded.

Cut the call as he was still disappointed.

Riddhima smiled at the "puppy dejected" face he made'

As if she wanted to go back. But she did not really have a choice.

He parked the car outside her house. She looked at him.

"thank you so much Armaan, it was amazing." Said Riddhima still sitting in the car.

Armaan smiled and came forward to kiss her again. This time she stoped him by placing her hand on his chest, and giggled.

" don't you think it's a bit too much for the day" Riddhima teased him.

He came back as he felt partially embarrassed and partially shy. She laughed at his expression. He was just so adorable she thought.

"I love you" she said as she got out of the car.

" love you too" armaan said as he waved he bye'

He saw her walk into the house and smiled to himself..





okay yes Armaan and Riddhima kiss the first time in my ff!! yes they do! was very scared while writing this part hope it did not become to vulgar or somethin? =S please tell me how it was?

waiting eagerly...

prarthana.

Edited by AR-AR-AR - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
hye frnd the part was superb.
And the idea of their frst kiss was also very nice. U did it in r8 situation.
Update nxt part soon.
Thankx for the pm.
T.c.
Anuj.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
it waz gr8,awesum, fab...jst perfect
will be waiting fr the next part plzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
thnx a lot for pm.and the part is awesome including the kiss.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
hey dear...very nice romantic part...and its not at all vulgur..its shows pure love..very nice writing..update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Awesum part magical date yaar cont sun
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
love you guys.
thanks for your super duper comments!!
lol!! haha!!
next part will be sooner!!!

loads of love and thanks,
prarthana.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
[ff is good but u r veru late
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
You wrote the part very well. Loved the way Armaan planned the date. He is so thoughtful. Also the kiss they shared was beautifully described. Lovely!
Do update sooner this time :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Gr8 part... The first Kiss was really nice and out of love. you described it perfectly.

Continue soon ...

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