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Mona

@.:.MONA.:.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#361

yeye finally lol...this gives me a feeling that armaan does have feelings for ridz but he is waiting for ridz to realize it and that is why he keeps hinting her with the ways his eyes change color when he is close to ridz...i hope she realize this before she leaves or else it would be too late..cant wait to read more..update soon and thankx 4 the pm..

❤️MONA

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vidu87

@vidu87

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#362

hey shrutika

superb part

luvd it

thnx 4 d pm

cont soon

nd evn d previous parts were also vry gud.

sry coz of ma xamz was nt able to compliment

. but seriously d parts were fab

but aftr readn 2days parti thnk armaan feels sumthng 4 ridhima but either he is not accepting or by telln ridhima he dosent want to spoil their friendship.

lets seen wat happn nxt. waitn eagerly to read d nxt part

so plz plz cont soon

congo for 50 pages🥳

Edited by vidu87 - 14 years ago

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Sara

@immayurfan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#363

awesome part loved the cake part

and do add the flashback

thankzz for the pm

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Parneet

@ParneetS

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#364

hey Shrutika...:) wowww hun it was awesome...:)
luved the part...it had all the emotions...moments of AR...their fights. their diff feelings that they can't name yet...!!!
i sometime feel Armaan love Rids n wants her to confess.. cuz he always say smthg or the other..:)
awww luv their b-daii moments..it was funny reading abt Andrea..lol tht girl needs a life..:)
their fights always bring them closer somehow..:0
thanx for the pm n cont soon..:) awesome part..:)
tc :)
Preet <3

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Parneet

@ParneetS

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#365

Congratulations on completing 50 pages...:)
n u can continue with the present track of u want cuz all the fbs have shown their strong bond moments n we have an idea of everything in their relation by now..:)

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AVKKG

@AVKKG

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#366

I cannot say this enough -- this is simply one of the most beautiful FFs I have ever read.
The way you write is simply AMAZING!! I cant believe that this is your first FF. Girl -- dont ever stop writing! You have a great gift, and I would love for you to write more so that we get to read more of your stories!!!

Coming to the story, I simply love how Armaan is giving Riddhima the space and the time to grow up -- more realize what she feels for him, versus pushing her. He clearly loves her, but is waiting for her to recognize what she feels!!!
And the way you interweave the present with their past(flashbacks), is just awesome.

I have no suggestions with regards to the story...the way you have put things across right now are perfect for me!!!

Keep writing and please update soon..

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

Ah, the final update didn't dissapoint! Loved reading it! And contrary to popular belief, I do think a lot of women do not realise when they fall in love with a friend!

When its a crush, or infatuation or a complete stranger (as in familiarity and no as in not knowing aperson) we're quick to put a name to our feeling. But when its afriend who is involved, we are the dumbest creatures going around. I think when women have comfortable, easy and close friendship with a guy, you are so stuck on it being a good friendship that it takes a lot longer for you to realise that it could be more... where as for a guy :-) at the end of the day, a gal is a gal is a gal! :-))

Thanks so much for the PM... I am sure the FF shall span two threads..you write very well and its such a pleasureto read something which has a lovely story rather than just being about AR being madly in love with each other and full of their "love" talk!

Waiting for the next part!

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 14 years ago

#368

As an aside, can one convince you to do a mid-week an dthen a wknd update instead of both on the wknd? :-)

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Chahat Chawla

@chahat_armaan

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#369

that is such a good FF, please PM me :D

you write really well. do continue!

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#370

HEY :D

I cant believe i missed out on such an AMAZING ff!

Seriously, it is just soo addicting..i ended up reading the entire thing all at once in 2 and a half hours :) But, now im all excited to read the next parts. Btw, im loving Armaans and Riddhimas characters, and i wonder how things will be when riddhima goes back and omg, when will they realize? But im starting to think that Armaan has realized, and is just waiting for riddhima to realize her true feelings,and i can see that happening already ;) I hope its not too late, infact even if it is after she leaves, and then, when they meet during nikki's engagement, that would be even BETTER. I know im kinda mean to just seperate them and then, have a grande reunion...but that would spice things up...and also allow them to come to terms with their feelings...but again, im very excited as to what youre gunna writer further:) And, oh yeah, present parts would be nice for now..lol

this is a different ff, i mean youve described the bond of friendship between them so WELL :)

Continue soon

and dont forget to pm me...and also, ive sent you a buddy request :)

Edited by Armaan-KSG - 14 years ago