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Posted: 14 years ago
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"Tum?" Muskaan says wiping her eyes as she notices Rahul.

Seeing his hand on her shoulder, she scoots away.

Even though it hurt him to see her rejecting him, Rahul understood that now is not the time for all this, he first needed to regain her trust.

"Yeh lo" Rahul said handing her a handkerchief seeing that her hands weren't doing a good job of wiping away her tears.

"Thanks" Muskaan replied meekly, taking the handkerchief.

"Muskaan, tumne kuch khaya?"

"Why does that matter to you Rahul? Apne kaam se kaam rakho" Muskaan replied flaring up again.

"Ok ok calm down. I'm sorry. Can I just sit here?"

"Ya duh! I don't own the place."

After a few minutes of awkward silence, Muskaan got up mumbling something about a patient.

"How do I make her understand" Rahul shouted out, hearing the door slam behind him.

Resting his head in his hands Rahul sighed.

"Muskaan... I didn't mean to hurt you baby..."

Watching him from behind the door, Muskaan felt bad seeing him so dejected. A part of her wanted to reach out to him, calm him but there was still a part of her that never wanted to trust him again.

Which side should she pick? Should she go back and at least hear him out? Or should she simply walk away? Muskaan pondered.
Edited by sweet.melody - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
first of alll thank u soo mcuh for living life to RM memories..i reallly loved each and everyone's parts!!! GREAT JOBB guys! would love to read more and more of RM cute/romantic/funny/ fighting scenes....keeepppp goinggggggggggggggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
👏 WOW, awesome parts everyone :D..lovely work :D
Edited by vaish04 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

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Muskaan was utterly confused. She hated to see Rahul, in such a dejected position, She knew, he loved her, she knew he came back for her. But that did not mean she can let him enter her life once again, so easily, for she certainly cannot bear another heartbreak. She wanted to know, why he left, which a part of her heart told, he would never reveal.

"I want you Rahul, but I can't ignore the fear that pops up in the corner of my heart every time, I think of our future. I have to know why you left, I have to have myself convinced, that's when I can let you back in my life, I love you Rahul, I am sorry"

Sitting at her favorite corner of the terrace, the place which had seen her in times of her, sad, miserable moments, times, when she missed him, needed him, and he was not there, she pondered what she should do. She breathed out a sigh, when she reached no where in her thinking process. Again and Again, the same feelings, the same flashbacks, her heart yearning for him, yet afraid for the uncertain. She heard the door click open, and saw Shilpa entering the terrace.

"Hey Muskaan" Shilpa said. Muskaan noticed the dullness in her eyes.

"Hey Shilpa, kya hua" Muskaan asked

"Nah, just tired" Shilpa lied.

"Abh tu mujhse bhi jhoot bolne lagi hai?" Muskaan pouted.

"Rehne de yaar, abh main apni kahani sunaungi toh bahut sad sad hojayega, waise bhi teri story atki hui hai" Shilpa tried to lighten the atmosphere.

"I know" Muskaan sighed, not knowing what more to speak.

"Yeh Mard itna Dard kyun dete hain yaar" Shilpa spoke all of a sudden.

Muskaan for once laughed at the meaningful yet comical statement.

"Kya, has mat yaar" Shilpa made a face.

"I don't know, I think we should go ask them" Muskaan suggested playfully.

"Muskaan, abhi toh tu sad thi, abhi kahan tujhe mazaak sooj raha hai, bas kar, I am SAD" Shilpa said stressing the last word.

"Ok Ok, sorry" Muskaan hid her smile.

"Agar mujhe aise hi hatana tha, apni zindagi se, toh meri zindagi mein aye hi kyun, Bhagwaan ji aap bahut khelte ho yaar, aur har baar aap hi jeet te ho, computer ki tarah" Shilpa said, angrily, pointing upwards.

"Kisika kisike zindagi mein ana jana, pehle tai hota hai" Muskaan spoke softly, "aisa merey Bauji kehte the"

"Agar usse ana jane se dard ho toh?? Jab Jana hi hai toh Ana kyun??" Shilpa continued with her misery

"Abh yeh toh, Rab hi jaane" Muskaan spoke, ending the conversation, as both their pagers ringed.

"Duty calls" Both said and left for their work.

Just as they were finishing the stairs, Muskaan hugged Shilpa all of a sudden, startling Shilpa.

"Muskaaan" Shilpa spoke horrified.

"Thanks Shilpaaaaaa" She hugged her again.

"Kyaa?? What?? batake hug karo" Shilpa asked

"Arey yaar, I think we shud leave yeh sara Dard-Ward, even Mard, to Rab Ji, Woh dekh lenge, mujhe lagta hai, yahi theek rahega" Muskaan spoke, happy that the terrace talk lead to some clarification in her mind.

"Sachi yaar, abh bahut hua yeh rona dhona, sochna, samajh na, I'm go to leave it to you Bhaggu ji" Shilpa said looking upwards. And both hugged once again, laughed and left for their respective duties.

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Hope you liked the part :)

PS - Please try to carry on the Happy environment for sometime, phir baadmein, it can turn intense, nearing the actual confession :P

And I loveee Muskaan Shilpa combo :P

Oh Once again, try not to bring Ridz :P

Enjoy,

Vaishuu😳

Edited by vaish04 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
nice parts shilpa and Vaishu ....i agree lets carry on with a happy enviroment for a while
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
nice part Vaishu!!! :D

haan the happy track will be nice for a while :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
really beautiful parts by everyone!
and for all those who donno me n for those who knw me but didnt recognized me im amber =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shilpa (entering locker room ) : hello guys !....abhi abhi mujhe Dr.shubhankar mile they ......wo hum sab se milna chahte hai ....ABHI

Anjali : abhi ??.....par abhi kyu ek toh wasey hi late ho gaya hai aaj ....aur duties dene wale hai kya ab ?

Atul : tum phikar kyu karti ho anjie ...agar tumhe aur duty mili toh muskaan tumhare hisse ki duty kar lagey tum ghar chali jana

Muskaan : oye ??? main kyu

Atul : tu anjie ki dost hai na.....phir tujhey acha lagega kya ki teri dost ko dark circles ho jaye

Muskaan .: teri toh ....meri aankhon k,,.....

Shilpa : oh god tum dono baad mein lado .....ab chalo phele dekhtey hai ki Dr.shubhankar kyu bula rahe hai

Muskaan : haan chal ....tune hero aur uss kaankhajure ko toh bata diya na ke cafetria mein milna hai


~Cafetaria~

Shubhankar : keerti ka shaadi k baad first birthday hai ....and i want to make it special for her

Shilpa : yeh toh bahut achi baat hai sir

Subhankar : haan, woh hamesha complain karti rehti hai ki shaadi key baad main bahut unromantic ho gaya hu ...wagera wagera

Rahul : matlab ke app shaadi ke phele romantic they ???

Atul : mere muh ki baat cheenle yaar rahul tune .....haan Dr.shubhankar ...sare romantic ideas toh originally armaan ke hote they .

Subhankar : haaan aur iss baar bhi mujhey armaan ki aur aap sab ki madat chahiye .

Armaan : par dr.keerti ka birthday hai kab?

Subhankar : kal .

All of them togather : What !!!

Muskaan : aur app humko ab bata rahe ho ....12 bajene mein sirf 2 ghante baki hai .

anjali : 2 ghantey mein yeh sab kaise honga ?

Subhankar : mujhey pata hai ki i m late ... main khud kuch acha sochkar karna chahta tha ....par koi achi idea dimaag mein nahi aa payi ....isliye finally tumlogo se madad lene padi

Armaan : we understand your feeling dr.shubhankar ...but i m sorry ab kuch nahi ho sakta hai ...ab app unko sirf 12 baje wish kardo ....kuch special karne k liye wawt nahi hai

Dr.shubhankar : NAHIIIIIIIII ..kuch bhi bolne se phele socho Dr.Armaan main senior Doctor hu ....appko mere madad karni hongi ...nahi toh main kuch bhi kar sakta hu .....main...main app sab ko suspend kar dunga .

Dr.Muskaan : HAwwwww! Dr.Shubhankar app humko dhamki de raho ho .....

Dr. Shilpa : sir hum sab appki madad zaroor karte par appko hamko phele inform karna chahiye tha na.....iss time pe toh koi dukaan bhi khuli nahi milegi .....hum sab decoration aur cake wagera kaha se layege ?

Shubhankar : main iss mauke ko haath se nahi jaane dene chahta hu guys .....kafi dino se keerti mujhse bahut upset hai .....and isse acha mauka mujhey nahi mil sakta hai usko impress karne ka

Anjali : cmon guys ....i think hame dr shubhankar ki madad karni chahiye .

Atul :haan anjali sahi keh rahi hai .... hamare pass 2 ghantey yani ki 120 mins yane ki 7200 secs hai .....agar hum sab chahe toh waqt se phele sari preparations ho sakti hai

Armaan : ok then ....sab kuch waqt ke andar andar ho jaye isiliye hame aapas mein kaam divide karlena chaiye ...

Dr.Shubhankar : ok guys lets go

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wat the surprise will be is up to the next writer


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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
wowwwww, keerti ka bday..cool :D some one please continue, i suck at surprises 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
^^same here dats y im not continuing too
and the part was fab

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