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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

update in 10-20 min' and gus what' I HAVE MY NEW IDEA for ANIMOSITY. and its long time one to' hahah thanks to my mum. LOL🤣



waiting.........thnk u auntyji for giving idea so we can get update.........😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*~Intezaar~*

part 2



Dadi stood there looking at his grandson. Thoughtless. After knowing every fact about her life... how could he still love her unconditionally.

Dadi: you will not ruin her life. You will move on with her.
Maan: I am not marrying anyone Dadi. No one.... he shouts in anger and pain. no one understood him. no one. how could anyone think like this specially after knowing what went through him and sammera.
Maan was about to walk in... Dadi blocks his way...
Dadi: if you don't marry Geet you have to walk over my dead body in to this room.
Maan: DADIMA! maan was furious now.
Dadi: I am waiting for your answer

maan: what type of behavior is this? maan retorted.
Dadima: I am waiting for your answer maan.
Maan: Dadima!
Maan knew well how stubborn his Dadima is and top of it she is a heart patient. He can't risk it.
Maan: ok... maan closed his eyes with that answer...
Dadima smiled and walked way to prepare everything...

Maan walked in... Looking at Sammera sleeping peacefully. He sat down next to her and started to brush her hair. Tears rolled down his eyes. He looked way to hide them.

In geets house...

Everyone was super exited. Her parents were admiring her. At last she was getting married.
Rajji: di... I hard he is very good looking. she teased.
Ridzy: he is. But very angry. she added.
Rijji: to ka hua! He will melt like a candle in front of my sister.
Ridzy: so to hay....

Dadima walks in with 20 servants flowing with gifts jewelry from khurana khandan.

Geet blushes seeing her upcoming Dadima. But she was looking for maan.... Her future hubby. all her friends and family teased her with maans photo. Bara unfair world. She thought.

Geet: I am the one who was getting married. And I still haven't seen his face. She thoughts.
Ridzy: what are you thinking Geet?
Geet: nothing!
Ridzy: want to see him na... She teased.
Geet: no! Of course no!
Ridzy laughed....

Geet goes down to take dadis blessing....
Dadima: Meri Pari bhu...

She gives out all the khurana khandans jewlary.
Dadi: you have to look after them very well they are all khurana khandans jewelry. It's a old tradition. Prampra.
Geet: ji Dadima.

Maan looked at Sammera who started to look round the room looking for her husband and daughters photo. She messed the whole room up. There was nothing in place.

Maan allowed her to do everything. Everything. Se needed this freedom to realize the need...

Sam: maan where are all the photo? Bolo na maan.
Dr looked at her in surprise.
Dr: she remembers your name

maan:"why wouldn't she."

Dr: this is amazing.
Maan smiled....
Maan walks towards her cresses her cheek... "your maan. Just your maan."
Sammera: where is rishab? He promised he won't leave me. He promised.
Maan: he will be back soon. Maan smiled.
Sam: promise.
Maan: do I ever brake any promise?
Sam: no.
Maan smiles...


Geet sat in her room.... She still didn't managed to see his face. What type of bride she is who haven't seen her hubby face. Ugh... And omg... we haven't even talk... And what type of groom he is? Wouldn't he want to see me?

Geet fought with her mind... Then eventually fell sleep.

Dadi walks in to the outhouse...
Maan have been there for 3 weeks now. And only improvement in Sammera was she remembers Maans name. That was it. Maan and geets wedding was 1 week way.

Dadima: how long will you waste your time on her. After marriage your wife won't tolerate this.
Maan: You are forcing me in to this marriage. I hope you have told her all the truth.
Dadima: she doesn't need to know the truth... Because from today on you wont come in to this outhouse. She will be transferred in to the mental asylum. I have taken all the care.
Maan looked at her in shock.
Maan: and if you do that it won't take me a second to cancel this marriage. he replied.
Dadima: you won't do anything like that.
Maan: Sammera is my life. I can die for her. It's your responsibility, that you want to ruin this girl life....... he looked at dadi in anger... he wasn't sure him self why he was agring with this marriage. he have refused few before but why could't he refuge this... I want to see this girl.
Dadima: you won't! I wont let you. I am not giving you any option to back way from this marriage.
Maan looks at her then walks back in the room. Sammera was in deep sleep.

Next: The wedding day...

Part 3




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*~Intezaar~*

hay you all ty for all the lovely comments and support. Maan & Geet wedding is next' poor girl she have no clue about anything'. pls pls pls do leave some more lovely comments for me to read. this will be one update a day. :D animosity' i will start from 2 mx

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
Omg keyama..how selflessly he loves sam...they will marry na..he will be impressed by geet's innocence na...tell me na...please....one more update....and wow!! You are starting animosity again..am so happy....update was too good
Edited by SimplyAparajita - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
loved the update cant wait 4 The wedding day!!!!!!!!
Edited by maaneetfan123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
poor maan😭 ..........poor geet😭 .........poor sam😭..........n........poor dadi😭.........poor maan...... he loves sam but force to marry geet.......... poor geet....she must have so many dreams about her married life......poor sam...she lost her husband n child n herself........poor dadi...bc she want her to be happy n settle down in life........she realize tht maan need someone special in his life... even if he is denying it as if now......... great update 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Poor gert she is sooo happy for her married day and she don't even know the truth hope geet she will understand when she know the truth
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
poor Geet i feel sorry for but dadi she is doing unfair she was suppose to tell the truth i hope Geet love has strong magic so he can forget Sameera fantic update us always
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
dont let dem marry yaar........................😭😭.............maan loves sam💔
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
i loved it soon maan going to fall 4 those innocent eyes 😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Loved it Awesome..
Poor Maaneet..
Waiting or the wedding day..
Update asap


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