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Posted: 14 years ago
wen the next update ll be??
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow nice Plot Kemaya..............Pls update soon...................😉
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Posted: 14 years ago


don u dare take more than 20 min........u already make us wait for u so longggggg....😉😆😉
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*~Intezaar~*

part 3



Geet walks down to the mandap. she was surrounded by other girls. they were laughing giggling. Maan sat there. frozen. not sure how to react or behave. he felt like running from there. but he kept him self there just for the sake of dadi. Only thing Maan was ware of that he is ruining someones life. He didn't knew how will he ever repay.

Geet came in and sat next him. she looked at him from corner of her eyes. he looked fine but more like a statue. he just sat there.

as the process went by geet blushed... sighed.... as her hand rested on his. maan couldn't feel single touch of her. He was only thinking about sammera... what she might be doing now. was she looking for him.

he looks at geets hand that was lying on his. he wasn't holding it properly. nothing.

geet felt odd.....



The wedding was over....

Everyone waved them the last goodbye....

Geet sat in her new room... Middle of the bed... With big gungat..... Expecting her hubby to pick it up... But she sat there.... Hours have passed... Maan failed to appear in his SR!


Geet was confused... where was he exactly.
Geet gets up... Changes in to her nightdress... Waits for him bit longer.... Geet still didn't managed to see his face. Or maan seen her'. properly...
She waited and waited... Then eventually feel sleep....

Maan sat in the outhouse. Frustrated. Dadima just forced him in to a marriage. He didn't even see her face. He made his mind up... He have to talk to her. He have to tell her everything. he couldn't fight with this.

It's 3am... Maan makes his way to his room in mansion...
Geet got up straight way hearing the door open.
Whole room was decorated with red Rose. Smelling perfect.

Geet looks at him... For the first time her hubby... He wasn't that bad looking at all. Everyone was right. She thought.

Geet: hi... she said softly...
Maan looks at her... She was beautiful. Could have married anyone easily... Why she chose to marry him? She must know some fact he thought. Everyone knows MSK and his life story. He tried his best to keep everything to him self. But it never works. Media eats him like a hell.

Maan: I have to tell you something.
Geet Walks up to him... Looks at his deep red eyes.
Geet smiles... Bit sigh. Remembering what girls have told her about SR!
Maan: I...
Geet looked at him with her innocent face... Trying to read his face. There was hope.
Maan turned round and closed his eyes because all her hope is just about to shatter. All her dream was just about to break. All her thought and desire just about to vanish.
Maan: Dadima forced me in to this marriage.
Geet was bit surprised & confused. Not sure what to expect... So she decided to stand there and listen.
Maan: I wanted to tell you the truth before and I hope Dadima have told you everything.
Geet stood there frozen... She managed to wispher out "what truth?"
Maan: I am in love with someone els and I would never ever can move my life with you.
Geet stood there frozen.

All a girl ever wants her hubby to love her forever. But here on there first night her hubby is saying he can not move on with me. Ever. she was still confused about everything. her brain was innocent.

Geet: you didn't even try!...
Maan: I am sorry but I can't. Sammera is everything to me. I could never leave her. She needs me. Only reason I married you because of Dadima. Everything you will need would be here. I am moving out of mansion. I am also happy if you want to leave.
Geet sat on her bed straight way. Not sure how to react. Not sure how to even talk.

Maan: I am sorry... He walks off.

Geet didn't cry... Because she her self hardly had any feeling for him but still some tears appeared on her eyes. She looked round trying her best to stop.

She went under the spread' tears was rolling down her eyes'.

Maan came back to the outhouse... Sam nowadays have her routine sleep. She was improving. Improving for good.

Sam wakes up... Finds maan sleeping on the sofa.
She screams... Maan jerks up....
Maan: what happen?
Sam laughs: I want some water.
Maan smiles and grabs a glass of water from the side and helps her to drink.

Sam: why are you here? She spoke in her childish voice.
Maan smiles: to help you. You should sleep now.
Sam: when my daughter and rishab will be back? You have promised.
Maan: you remembers that?
Sam: you have promised.
Maan: they will be back soon.
Sam smiles and falls sleep again.

Maan calls the night duty nurse to keep an eye on her while he goes to his bedroom.



Next: geet mets sammera'.


Part 4



*~Intezaar~*

hay you all' here is 2days update' :D i hop u liking this so far' please plaease do leave some lovely comments' and the LIKE button'

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it.
Too curious for the next update-Geet-Sameera meeting!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey it ws sad yar....geet is heartbroken n evn maan too...n now waiting for next part...i m sure geet vl support maan...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar..awsome update ..but still u havent mentioned wat is geets proffession..do update the next part soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor geet am soo sad for her
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ur update soo gud
wats gnna appen nxt?
plz update soonxx!:):)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update but I feel sad for geet.

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