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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Ma Dearest Muski...!!!😉
im so sori Yaar...!!! Busi hoon...!!!😛
per Congo...!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
new FF...!!!..n I LUV it...!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Maan is diff⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.... wiv dadi shock faces...!! hehehehe😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
ILU....Geet goes😲...!! WOW...!!!!😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
n Maan punch a sch boy...!!! hehehehehe😆😆😆😆😆😆
i reali dont like that boy...acha hua Maan ne puch mara usko...!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
per Dadi dont wori Maan...ko sch se nahi nikalay gay....Geet ko chor kay vo nahi gae ga...!!!!!😃😃😃😃😃
bt Maan is dumbo...!! kyun ...kaise..?????!!!!😕😕😕😕
cnt so soon...!!!!
Luv ur Sugari...!!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet's totally naughty... I kind of enjoyed Geet's reaction toward Maan but hate Maan's peer.. they are just.....😡
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Posted: 14 years ago

so used to MSK= Mr.Perfect i cant belive our Maan like that.I am happy Muskan for new FF i miss madhoshi.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Wonderful Update!!!!!!
Geet is so excited,
And Maan ko dekha,
all of a sudden he became Mard,
kya ghoosa maara,lovely,
Curious to know bot Geet,
what made her say ILU to Maan, hai na.,.....
Please update soon,
and update more
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg muskan another ff....yay i love it!!! It is so cute....Geet is so funny she told Maan she loves Mann on their first meeting. She's so cute i love her charactwr! And aww Maan is shy and gets bullied wow thts something new lol. Shud be interesting to read abt tht and wah kya jawab diya tha usne woh ladka ko jo Geet ke bahre mein bura baat kar raha tha...he totally deserved tht punch!! Hopefully now Maan will try to study harder so can prove everyone wrong and stay at the school longer so he and Geet can become friends! Plz continue soon and add me to the PM list. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok...........waiting....24 minutes left
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤓Im ready wid my specs....
Please jaldi update karna...😍.. Warna main dream karte karte soo jaaungi...🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love this UPDATING status!!
Please update soon!!!
Love you!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

~deewangi~
part 3

geet - he is X-B
ridz - sr hain
meera - humare school main
geet - hain
arohi - aab toh uska peecha karne chod de, school main hi millena
geet - nahi
ridz - geet this is really bad, its been more than a month now
u have been making us go out of the way behind him
meera - yeh roz ka natak ho raha hain
arohi - geet yaar its much out of the way
geet - main to jaavongi sur tum ko bhi anna padega
ridz - I can't come today
geet makes a baby face
arohi - main bhi nahi aa sakti, mama ke saat shopping jana hain
geet looks at meera hopefully
meera - aarahi hoon, aise looks mat de
geet hugs her - thanku..

daadi takes maan home early that day
daadi - why did u hit that boy
maan looks down quitly
daadi - I am asking some thing to you beta
he just leaves to his room & does'nt have his lunch
daadi to munshi ji - kya kara is ledke ka
munshi ji - aap isse kisi hostel main dal do
daadi - nahi woh teehk nahi hoga
munshi ji - maam waise bhi aapke pas time nahi rahta uske liya
daadi - wohi yah bussiness ke chaker main isse time hi nahi de pati
sochti hoon kuch din iske saat ghar main rahloon
munshi ji - waise beda shaab ke canada shift hone ke baad KC ka bahut bura halat hain
agar aap office nahi aayengi to bachi kuchi clients bhi hume chod denge
daadi gets reslly stressed, she has been managing to keep the bussiness alive for
past 10yrs now. it is the only source of income, no new clients, no great bussiness
its running on Khurana's name in the market which was started by maans grand father
taken over by maans father but left it mid way & settled in canada now.
last year daadi & maan had moved to a smaller house because they could'nt manage the
expenses of maintaining the mansion. this was a small 2 bedroom flat. he confined himself to
his room. he sat by the window & kept looking out which faced the woods. he could only see
her cute face jumping infront of him. he smiled, wondered why was she so happy to see him
he fished his pocket & looked at the cadbury wraper, which she had droped after finishing
the chocolate, he looked at it. he then took a white A4 paper & pasted it in the page
wrote we met..wrote the time & date

it was 3.30pm he took his kit & ran out of his room to the hall out of the main door
down to the steps & took his cycle & went to his karate classes.
daadi - jitna intreset yeh aapne karate class main dihka tha hain, uska aadha apne
studies main dihka de to pass ho jayen
munshi ji nodded sadly
5.00pm he sadly returning back, the only thing he liked about his day was practicing
his martial art. he was lost in his thoughts pedaling down his usual route
back home. geet & meera followed like the usual way they have been doing for
last one month now. geet giggles ..cute hain na. meera ..yah..iske cuteness ke chaker main
humari roz band bajthi hain
. geet was used to their cribbing now.
geet - abhi left turn legha
he turned left
meera - chal ho gaya lets go back
geet - nahi mujhe uska ghar dehkna hain
meera - I am not coming further
geet - please please just today
meera - mujhe tera saat ekla aana hi nahi chahiya tha
they follow further
5.15pm maan notices them now..he takes his next turn & waits for them off the road
she follows & wonders where did he go
geet stops the cycle & stand next to it - kanha gayen?
meera - ghar
geet - dehk miss kar diyana, sab teri wajah se
she was about to leave he hold her hand
she gets scared & turns back but sees him & smiles
he gives a stirn & angry look - why are u following me
geet - main to roz kati hoon bites her lips
meera - chal yanha se & starts riding back
geet sees meera going away & looks at him & keeps looking at him
her eyes where to fall for especially the way she looked at him
he let go her hand & started to ride back
she still followed him, but now he knew she did.
he reached home & parked his cycle. she went up to the gate & screemed - bye
he ignored her & went to his house

geet went back to her house & called meera
meera - did he say any thing
geet - I saw his house
meera - really
geet - umm, he stays near ridz's house
meera - kya bolrahi hain
geet - cool na, shaadi ke baad bhi I will be statying near her house
meera - tu pagal hain kya
geet - kyun
meera - how can u talk like this, we are just in 6th
geet - I have decided main usse se hi shaadi karongi
meera - tu sach main deewani ho rahi hain
geet spinned arround with the phone & entangled herself - umm..maan ki deewani
meera - tu ne maths tution ka pata kiya
geet - nahi actually I don't need maths tution, I think I can manage
meera - I desperately need one
geet - ask arohi, she was mentioning some thing
meera - mujhe se to HW bhi nahi hota
geet - I will do it & e-mail it to u
meera - thanxs
geet - raat ko chat karte hain

maan back in his room, changes & comes to daadi. hugs her from behind
daadi - challo dinner khaa lo
maan - umm
daadi - how was ur karate class
maan - nice
daadi - I have arranged for tutions for u
maan - i don't want tutions
daadi - ur marks are really poor.
he continues to eat
daadi - aap aapne padhai pe thoda dyan dijiya please
he quitly finishes her dinner & goes to his room & sits by his window looking out
the woods..he started liking the window more now..because every time he looks
out he could see her smiling delightfully looking at him.
daadi came latter at night & swtiched on the light - aap andher main kyun beta ho
gives him the glass of milk kisses his forehead
daadi - u understand na, I don't get enough time with you because, I am held up
with the bussiness.
he nodes sadly
daadi felt bad & hugged him feeling guilty
he coldly sat there, he did'nt hug back. he never did since the time his mom died
but occasionaly he would come & hug her. that was only the emotion he ever showed.
he never cried, never spoke or got angry. daadi had always tried to keep him away
from the gossips. but least did she knew how much he heard from other sources,
even his own teachers, class mates even the servants at times.

rano - itni jaldi kanha jah rahi hain
geet - I need to pick some notes on the way..bye & rushes out
next day morning geet reached his house at 8.00am. she knew it takes 30mins from his
house to school. she waited near the gate. he came out at around 8.30am
she smiled - hi
maan ignored her & continued to ride on
she kept pedaling along side
geet - I was waiting from 8, I did'nt know what time u leave. kal se I
will come little late, wait karna teehk hain, waise main late nahi hoti.
I will be there at 8.15am
he kept riding but at her pace. he kept looking at her every now & then when she did't notice.
geet - meri friend hain na ridz uska ghar bhi aapke ghar ke pass hain
to mama ko kha dongi ki, I will be going with her
, she smiled naughtly.
she parked her cycle next to his. he locked the cycle & left.
geet took her lock & tied it around both the cycles togather & ran to her class
ridz, meera & arohi were waiting for her at the door, not letting her inside
geet looked at them knowing she was caught
ridz - we waited for u at the signal for 10mins
geet - main ,,main late hogaye
arohi - yah we can see that
geet - teehk hain..main maan ke saat aayee thi
meera - he came to pick u
geet - no I went to pick him
ridz - yeh sab kuch jayada ho raha hain
arohi - tu ladki hain, logically he should come to pick u
geet - kaunse book main likha hain
ridz - come on yaar, thats common sense
geet - jab mujhe problem nahi usse problem nahi to, tumlogon ko kya problem hain
she pushes their hand & goes inside the class.
geet sits with meera, arohi & ridz sits togather infront of them

lunch break she takes her luch & runs to see him.
she looked for him but he was not seen any where in the class or the ground.
she disheartedly comes back to her friends, they laugh at her.
she gets upset & cries behind the tree.

maan & tution!!!!

~NEXT PART 4~
please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
.yay..its a mind blowing update..

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