MAYUR FF...The Lost Magic.

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

aawwwww mayank is soo naughty
love nupur

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Mulan.

@mulan.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

wow! so cute!!!!!!!!!!! love bth of thm!! kinza aap ka to jawab nahe!!! :) :) plz continue soon!! papers ka bahana na banana!! wo idea mera hai!! :p :p

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

Hey Di I am sorry I didn't comment earlier but you know the reasons right ...

Coming to the update - it was marvelous ... I am happy that Mayank is so naughty and cute ... Aww, Nupur is shying and the bai scene was so funny - ya r-i-g-h-t sensitive ... the lunch scene, I don't wish to talk about it , I know you will understand-it was beautiful☺️

she is so beautiful, aisye hi itna time study mian waste kar diya..

this line actually tells about their life - the time they wasted apart from each other ... the staring at each other was so lovely ... and the last part was just - even I am blushing ...

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

sorry for being late!net problem.
and i wonder how do you do it every time? writing romance and all? its brilliant!

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

thank u so much guys..🤗

PART 9:

Nupur closed her eyes, and titled her head away when mayank left her waist, she was shocked and looked at mayank with questioning eyes as if WHAT-HAPPENED?, but mayank made a sad face..

M..what?..tum meri taraf dekh nahi rahi ho, tu i can't continue the romance..

Mayank pouted and nupur's blush got even more deep

M..mana k blush karte hoye bht khobsorat lagti ho, compliment bhi de diya hai main ne per..

Nupur again looked up at mayank sudden pause, he leaned over her ear

M...meri anknon main dekhtey hoye us se bhi ziyada khobsorat lagti ho..

Nupur was turning more red, mayank placed his hand back on her waist and picked up something from the vegetable basket ..

M..ye dekho..

Nupru looked up and he was holding a tomato..

M..Laal honey main tum is ko bhi competetion de rahi ho..

Nupur snatched the tomato from his hand and moved away, freeing herself from his grip..

N..kia hai mayank..umm..tumhain apni wo book pori nahi parhni hai..

M..kaun si book?

N..wohi jo parh rahe they..jao ..

M..really..?

Nupru didn't wanted him to go, but as he was teasing her so much so she pushed him gently..

N..jaooooooo..

M..excuse me, main kahin nahi ja rha hon, hum dono ja rahe hain..

N..kahan?..

M..bahir, kahin bhi..jahan tum kaho..

N..mayank kia..

He took a step forward..

M..please..

Nupur remembered how last night she refused him and this time she was still apprehensive..

N..mayank merey rashes abhi..

He immediately moved forward to see her neck..

M..nupur nahi hai..please chalety hain na..

N..maynk hum lunch pe chaley jaate, per ab tu hm ne lunch kar liya hai tu.

M..tu nupur dinner pe chlan jaye gey..

N..per mayank abhi ty 4 bajey hain, itni jaldi dinner thori hota hai..hum..

He moved forward and held her hand..

M..jab tak dinner ka time nahi hota, hum asey hi ghoom len gey, aur phir dinner kar k a jayen gey wapis..plzz..

this time she agreed, she wasn't brave enough to refuse his soft voice again and again..

N..thek hai..main..

M..haan jao tum change kar lo.

Nupur felt so much in awe of his child like excitement, she smiled and went towards the stairs and when mayank called her..

M..ik minute..

she turned..

N.,kia hua?..

M..main bhi ata hon, mujhe bhi tu change karna hai..

Nupur started laughing and so did mayank and they both went to their room, and mayank opened the wardrobe, he chose a black jeans with a black shirt and went to change, when he returned nupur was still standing in front of the cupboard..

M..tum abhi tak kapre decide kar rahi ho?

N..haan main soch rahi thi,,

Nupur was brushing hands over her clothes when mayank picked out a white shalwar suit..

M..ye phen lo..

nupur was about to say something when mayank spoke up.

M...please..

Nupur was just flowing at the gestures of mayank..he gently patted on her cheeck

M..jaldi karna..main neche ja raha hon..

Sje was looking him walking out of the room, just staring..mayank stopped at the door..and said without turning..

M..nupur mujhe dekhna band karo and hurry up..

He said it and left the room, leaving nupur blushing and cursing herself for being so silly..

Mayank was playing with the keys of the car when nupur came down,

N..chalen..

She started moving towards the door and this time mayank was staring her she stopped at the door saying..

N..mayank mujhe dekhna band karo and hurry up..

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

Wow Di ... the blushing-teasing session was just amazing ... tamaatar ko competition - I can so imagine Mayank and Nupur doing that ...

The childish Mayank was a delight ... She could not say no - thank god ...

and the way they teased each other was the cherry over the cake ...

Fabulous update Di ....

I wish this is a new beginning for both of them ....

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#287

ah! how do you feel when you've just watched an wonderful magic trick?
just like what i feel now!

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#288

mehak!😊

omg u hav written so many ff but this ff is the cutest! i must say........

each n evry update of urz is more cute then d previous one.......how do u do that????lol😆😆😆

anyways comin bck to the update........i loved the way mayank teased her........naughty mayu! hayeeeeee😳😳😳😳

n she gettin nervous n all.....awwwwwwwwww😳😳

then he asking her for goin out...n she cant help but has to agree.......

it was super cute n adorable!!

n white suite ....awwww....m sure their lost magic will b reveved soon....as it is it has come bck almost!!😳

waitin for the nxt part......!!do cont soon!

n thnx for d pm!

n i suppose u havin xam na tom????

BEST OF LUCK!👍🏼🤗⭐️

Edited by nikitasharma. - 14 years ago

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 14 years ago

#289

awesome update mehake .
jaldi next part kal update karna

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#290

Loved it!! It was such a cute part! Nice to see both of them making an effort to bring back that lost magic.

Mayank letting go of her at the beginning, then she giving him that look and his explanation...he wanting to go out for dinner, she is hesistant and then accept coz she couldn't refuse him and the last part where both of them are staring at the other....They are just too ADORABLE!!!

Can't wait to find out how their "date" goes....

Thanks for the PM.

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