Maneet FF- A Lifetime of Gratitude- 3 updt-pg 37 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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no updates for a long time
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ITs winter..I was feeling lazy..And yep..Im a chalti phirti disaster..got hurt...LOL

I'm updating now!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEy guys!
its winters..- yeah yeah.I know you know..let me show winters here too..😉who wants to cozy up with MAneet?😆

Okay okay..

There was a chill in the air, as Geet sat thinking of how to welcome back MAan..

Should I make him a sweater? or a scarf?
Yeah right, Geet..are you mad? When has he ever worn a scarf? or a sweater that's hand made?

But she wanted to give him something to keep him warm..
she decided to make one for him without telling anyone. So, she went and bought the wool-black because it was his favorite color.

She smiled as she thought of MAan's reaction. She wanted however to talk to him seriously about her design..

Maan was thinking..of her as usual.
OF course- he was done with his meeting but there was something very important he had to do..there was a crucial problem with geet's design..let him get back home..he will see to it that she never forgot again.
So he got back to work..decided to buy something for Geet..as a symbol of them together and with an eager heart, went back to her

Geet was tired..and she was only halfway..she looked at the clock..she had some time..so she decided to rest for a while and closed her eyes.
In her dream..she saw Maan coming back home..but..to a different home..at a beach..a beautiful house..with tinkling wind chimes, the laughter of their children bouncing off walls..Geet laughing too...scolding the kinds lovingly..waiting for MAan to come back home..
The children were being troublesome..they'll spoil their dresses,she told them..

and then he came...

the water is fine..perfect for the bachhas.

Geet- And this bachha?
Pointing to herself..
MAan came to her and shooed the kids outside

Alone, he kissed her deep and long and said
Geet- you make our lives perfect...compared to you..the water is a bit imperfect...but come with me..

Geet with twinkling eyes shooed him out of the house, got into her swimsuit and smiling..joined her perfection..

MAan-GEEET

She jolted awake and the yarn needles dropped to the floor..

Geet- jj...jee..aap kab aaye?
MAan didn't answer..just got in bed with her

Geet put her head on his chest and smiled
Geet- kya hua?
MAan planted a kiss in her hair
Maan- kyun? kuchh hona tha kya?
Geet closed her eyes tightly and hugged him.

MAan was drawing circles with his thumb, just below her elbow..and his touch was making it difficult for him to think
Maan- tum thik ho?
Geet-ab thik hoon

MAan- by the way Geet..I loved...
Geet placed a hand on his lips..
Geet- chup..bilkul chup.
I was making something for you..tell me if you liked it?
Maan- later..this is more important Geet..meri baat suno..

Geet- boliye
Maan- I loved everything...i loved the design..bas ek bohot bohot badi fault thi...tum kaise bhool sakti thi geet?
Geet- kya hua?
Maan- Ek cheez missing..
Geet smiled and blushed
GEet- I'm glad you found and brought it up...abhi missing hai...lekin...😳
MAan's face lit up...
Maan- you mean?....
Geet-😳 kuchh maheeno mein complete ho sakti hai construction?
Maan- I have dreamt of a place..we'll go in a few days and finalize..construction starts immediately..humara sapno ka aashiyaan..haqeeqat mein..

anyway..tum kya keh rahi thi?

Geet was about to get up but maan pulled her back..
Maan- nu-uh..you're not going anywhere..
Geet- KAhin nahi jaa rahi baba..i'm just going to show you what I made..
She showed Maan the half complete sweater

MAan felt his heart expand out of love
MAan- Geet..tum yeh mere liye?
He looked so incredulous that Geet got a bit scared
Geet- I'm sorry maan..aapko pasand nahi aaya..main bi nah pata nahi kya kya sochti rehti hoon..
MAan stopped her chatter with a kiss...

Everything in her melted as she wound her fingers around his thick hair
MAan took off her dupatta and continued to kiss her..making his way towards her neck and placed butterfly kisses on her throat
Geet dragged his mouth off her neck and looked into his eyes
Geet- you really love doing that don't you..well.it's my turn now..
And before maan knew what she was talking about, she was on top of him..
she gently traced her fingers around his delectably firm yet soft lips.
and then she touched them..those lips that said the most beautiful and loving things..those that gave voice to his heart's feelings...
She kissed them with all she had...two pairs of lips, speaking to each other..
....and while kissing..removed his tie, opened his shirt buttons.
She nibbled on his ear and kissed just below it..making him moan😳
she trailed a finger all the way to his belt...eyes flying upto his..
MAan- geeet...
he opened his eyes..filled with desire...
satisfied, Geet said
Geet- this was nothing..you see.I have learnt from the expert..😉
Devoid of all clothes..she had Maan Singh Khurana at her mercy😳😆
She kissed him and made her way down...
then up...teasing him...
Maan could barely breathe..
HE called out to her and she heard his call from somewhere far away..
Maan then took off her kurti and turned so he was on top of her..
MAan looked deep into her eyes with a gaze that made her heart stop for a second and then resume uneven beating..

Maan- iski sazaa...tumhe zaroor milegi

and what a pleasurable sazaa he gave her- making her moan and sigh with pleasure..
BReaking off from a long eternal kiss
Maan- so...
Geet- not bad...
MAan- achha...
GEet- simply buried her head in his chest...kissing him there and holding him tighter..

MAan- Geet...
Geet- hmm..
Maan- I love you
Geet smiled and placed a long lingering kiss on his lips...
Geet- I love you too

Happy to be one again...their hands entwined on Geet's stomach

Maan got up and kissed it..
Geet- 😳
MAan looked into her eyes..and an unsaid understanding passed..
HE moved to kiss her again..slowly and gently this time,they built up the crescendo of emotions that overpowered them as they reveled in their oneness..


Okay guys that's it..Sorry if it wasn't upto the mark..
I'm annoyed with the CV's for introducing a new entry which makes no sense..LOL





Edited by geet.a - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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geet..............................☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️u made me forget abt anvesha........its lovely
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Geet ....chill. Your update is awesome! Dont worry about new entry/....usko to hum dekh lenge!😆 you focus on the next update...haan? Maaneet need to be cosier so that we feel warmer😉

Edited by Anshu_A - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyyyyyy

when are you updatinggggggggggg??????/

plzzzzzzzzzzz update soonnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update..... but sweetie pura love making complete to karti... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: deniac

nice update..... but sweetie pura love making complete to karti... 😃


LOL gou di..would you believe..I got bored..and show shuru ho gaya tha..😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
d update is awesome just luved ittttttt
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey geet 😊 u know what?? i read all ur 3 threads at one go😉
u r just awesum!! plzz keep posting dear nd luved ur ideas abt vicky and rajji really cute😛
and that mehek part sweeett😊
update soon nd plz send a pm
cheers 😊 and btw congrats on the new thread

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