Maneet ff:~A Drink~ UPD: pg 59,60 - Page 37

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow first to comment good to hear from yu excellent update pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
res...i miss u so much Amna..!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG tht was such a cute update....the Indian couple scene was hilarious! 😆....And aww Maan is so falling for Geet...cant wait till he realizes it! YAY they finally landed in India....so excited to read wat happens next....the precap sounds funny! PLZ continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay and update and great one too loved it and the new emotions of maan and geet are portrayed so nicely and loved the whole sitting on his lap and lady commenting on them that was so cute and romantic and awe how he was conscious if she found out if he kissed her lol I loved the update and the characters they're something new and fresh anyways continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan marrying geet
he said it 😲

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Posted: 14 years ago
You surely made us wait, but it was worth it 😉😊
Thank you
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

You surely made us wait, but it was worth it 😉😊

Thank you



You know what i'm updating again!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome..cant wait for the nxt update
do continue plz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Guys to make it up, i am here with another update!!

Chapter 10: Actions speak louder than words!

Throughout the car ride her stomach twisted and turned and did all sorts of weird things.

Now she felt like she was going to throw-up.

The sudden change from cool to HOT and dry was giving her a headache.

She was rubbing her thighs trying to deal with the thoughts and logic---that made no sense.

"We are home" he said opening the door of the house that looked beautiful.

It was a fairly big house, not bigger than the mansion he had in Chicago but still very big.

There were trees and flowers along it.

She stood there smiling at the flowers.

He was running around chasing her and she broke a flower and whipped it across his face and then all of a sudden she pricked herself---------

"Geet" he called out startling her from her thoughts.

"Maan we are going to live in this ONE house together?" she said scared.

"Relax, oh my! Geet your behaving like you are so not from America!" he said laughing.

She pouted.

"No, but still look'this is India not America" she said widening eyes.

"I know'but we are responsible young adults and we can maturely live together, shall I mention SEPARATE ROOMS!!! So chill" he said changing his voice from loud to calm in a matter of seconds.

"Okay" she said convincing herself.

They both went off and Ram---the housekeeper helped them settle in, and put their things in.


She sat by the window sill, and took deep breaths.

She felt like she would choke here, why did everything have to be so complicated.

He never said anything just did all this for her, and she, she couldn't give him anything in return----EVER??

That frustrated her, made her mad, she liked giving not taking.

She loved Maan, she couldn't be with him, he deserved better, she wasn't liking India too much, she couldn't tell her parents she was her'''''.

"ARGHHHHH!!!" she said breaking into loud sobs.

Her head throbbed and her heart thuddered.

Maan was sitting in his room getting ready for bed, he was so happy that she was with him , and that she would work with him when he heard loud sobs-----

He ran out, and rushed to her room.

Luckily, the door wasn't locked.

He saw her curled up into a ball in a corner and crying, her hair covered her face, and her head was between her knees.

"Geet are you okay, what happened?" he said softly.

She cried louder hearing his voice.

"Geet, sweetheart look here" he said gathering her into his arms.

He placed her on the chair she was curled up against.

He bent down, holding her hands.

He then went and got water and tissues.

"Here-drink it" he said offering her the glass.

She continued to cry.

He put it down and bent down infront of her again. Her knees leveling with his chest.

He tilted lower to see her face, but it was shadowed with her big messy hair, and her hands covered her eyes.

He then pulled her into a hug.

Her hands still remained on her eyes and his arms secured around her squishing her protectively into him.

She cried staining his shirt with tears of pain'

He stood on his knees so she didn't have to lean so down into him.

He caressed her hair and her back, hushing her.

After a good 20 minutes she stopped and pulled back.

He looked at her giving her water.

She took it the tears on her eyelashes looking heavy and lush.

He watched her drink it sniffing and wiping the tears with one hand.

She put it on the small bench beside her and then looked up at him, for the first time since.

He saw pain in her eyes, and clearly she was stressing because her eyes were red.

"It's okay, we'll talk about it when you're ready" he said softly, assuring her.

She nodded a yes.

He always made her feel---and feel special just added to the feel.

He pulled her up and guided her to the bed.

He sat down beside her caressing her hair.

She blinked watching him.

His cute, concerned expression'boy did he look concentrated at caressing her forehead.

She smiled sadly.

He looked up and winked at her.

She burst into laughter.

He was surprised at that reaction.

She got up and hugged him tight suddenly.

"You know you're one of a kind?" she said more to herself than him.

"I know, I'm awesome" he said smugly.

"Thank you!" she said moving back.

He was so lost in the hug that he didn't know she wanted out.

He immediately let go.

"You know I haven't cried like that since I was 13---and that was when I came to Chicago" she said smiling sadly looking down.

"Eh'." He said bringing her chin up.

"Let's hope this is the last time you EVER cry like that" he said serious and upset because of what happened.

She looked at him and couldn't help but blush----blush, this was serious and she was blushing.

He really cared for her.

"Maan you're the most wonderful------"she realized she was going too far.

He looked up at that, and raised a brow, his eyes pleading for her to continue.

"Geet just lay down and sleep, you need rest. We are starting work after tomorrow so just relax" he said gently pushing her back down.

She closed her eyes, feeling his warm hand tangled with hers.

His that one gesture made her stronger and gave her patience to fight for what was next.

They both slept like that his hand in hers and both beside each other. His head resting on the headboard and hers on the pillow.

PRECAP:

Geet shares a bit of her feelings with Maan.

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COMMENT!!!! And guys don't worry---all your questions will gradually be solved about her past.....

Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice...love maan..
cant wait geet to start working..
do continue plz.
thx

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