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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: firefly99

Sorry for late replying as I was busy with assingments but I read the three parts in one go loved the concept and the context written in my Fav. language just lovedd those lines*anjana rishta bina soche bina jane....aik khuli kitab ki tarah* and then the dreamy dream of Geet wohooo and loved the characterization and independence of Geet now when will she meet her dream boy?😉

Helloesss.......Thank you soooooo much for finding the time to read and comment on my FF. I know how difficult it can be juggling with assignments and the entertainment that is IF....hehehe
Awww I'm glad you liked those lines - I thought of them as I was asleep...yes i know weird but kya karoon........aisi hi hoon main...............
Hehehe hopefully you catch up with the other parts and the other FF too and enjoy it more xx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fauziya

I liked ur ff. Do pm me

Hello welcome to my FF
U surely are added to the PM List
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

nice one dear
hope u get well soon

Helloo............thankss for the wishes.....I'm slowly slowly getting better
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nithi07

nice update..
maan and NT bonding is good...
get well soon dear...
thnx for pm...

Nithi......thank u sooo much!!!!!!!!! yes.....I wanted NT and Maan to actually get along in this FF - it'll be different to that which is seen in the show......
Thanks for the wishes - slowly getting better
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

In next update we are getting Maaneet update na

Plz say yes
Liked this update
So Maan is smaller here
Liked that Dev wanted Maan to fulfill his dream
NT n Maan's relation is really sweet
Liked it
Update soon n plz lil longer parts

😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊..................i duno about the next update.....but yhh Geet is coming sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

yey.. me 1st 2 comment...😊
awesome update... loved maan's bonding wid bibiji..
cant wait 4 maneet meeting...
read it b4 u pm it.. he..he..😃
cont soon...m being selfish here..😉
tek cre of ur health too..

SaJan SaJan............thats not fair - u cheateds!!!!!! hehe kiddin..............u must really love this FF to be able to get to it whenever I update before I manage to PM u all.........
awwwww I can't wait for Maaneet meeting toooooo - I wonder how dreamy i'll be able to make it........
Thanks for your wishes - I'm slowly slowly getting better...........
hehehe I can let you be selfish....just this once - I'll update once I finish replying to the comments for both FFs.......though I might not be able to PM tonight - but that shouldn't bother you much.....because you seem to get to the FFs before me anyways😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25

awwwwwwwwwwwwww.......Tishu I just loved this part.....😳
yohoooooooooooooooo so now we are gonna get maneet meeting in your next update....yippie......
loved Maan and bibiji's convo....Maan is a sweetheart....😃hey you updated bibiji's lines in punjabi...it was pure fun reading it....but thank god ...you had translated those lines in English as well...or else I would have taken ages in understanding that part😆....the precap sounds yumilicious.......can't wait for it now.......😳


love
Namita

Namitaaaaaaaaaaa dear..............thank u sooooooooo much for loving the update!!!!!
hehehe hmmmmmmmmm wellll Maaneet meeting - maybe - maybe not.......we'll have to see......hehehe
yes yes my bibihi - ahem I mean the bibiji of this FF will be talking walking eating - everything punjabi!!!!! hehehe yhhhhh I know what you mean............see when I was writing them I just let the punjabi roll off my tongue but when I had to translate them....oh god......not even my dad could help me.....hehe
awwww i like that word "yumilicious"
hehehe shall update soon though you'll have to wait for the PM - until then you're more than welcome to fish through it to check if its updated
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, sweet, and cute parts.
loved the bonding between maan- nt and maan- bibiji .
loved it.

update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, sweet, and cute parts.
loved the bonding between maan- nt and maan- bibiji .
loved it.

update soon.

Aww Rakhii you are just in time my dear!!!!!
hehehehehe Updating like - just after this comment!!!!!!! hehehehe
awww thanksssssss - hopefully you'll find the Maaneet bonding nyc toooo - i know i'm already in luv with it just writing it down
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Posted: 14 years ago

Elo jiiiiiiiii - .......................welllll I is upto no good again!!!! I should be sleeping and not even looking at my laptop - but what to do.......I love you allll soooo much and your lubbly jubbly comments!!!!!!

Welll......here is your next update!!!!! - I assure you I am writing the next one as soon as I post this.......I'm trying to get the next few updates of Our Strange Journey too......because I absolutely adore that FF too.........so I shall not be PM-ing you guys this update - you'll have to fish for it my dears!!!
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A CAKE!!!!!!!!!!!! *Maan exclaimed as he was guided towards a cake on the table with candles placed in a M shape*

Everyone: Happy Birthday Maan!!!!!!

Maan looked at each and everyone present there, and couldn't help but smile at their efforts to make his birthday the next big thing........

Maan: You really shouldn't have......I'm not 1 – it's 21...don't you think I've outgrown this now??

Dev: Come on Maan, we don't want to hear your bhaashan.......close your eyes, make a wish and blow the candles out, then cut the cake and if you really think you've outgrown it, you can leave it to us– we'll enjoy it for you *Dev said as he handed Maan the knife*

Maan: What?? What's this close your eyes and wish drama....no I'm just going to blow them out and cut it...you guys can enjoy it later on then....After, I've taken my first slice.....I just I've outgrown the whole shabam of cakes and all....not the eating part....*as he bent down to blow the candles*

Tara: ahhhhhh Maan ruko........uffo.....didn't you hear what Dev said...close your eyes, make a wish and then blow them.......*maan looked at her with a –you-cannot-be-serious-type of look* Chalo chalo.....I don't want to hear anything.....pleaseeeee... for me.....*as she smiled for her kid devar*

Maan smiled and nodded his head agreeing.

Dev: ohhohoho kya baat hai......your bhai is standing here, requesting you the same and you choose not to listen, and yet your bhabhi says it once and you do so without questioning........bohut aache bachooo

Tara: Maan.....I think I smell something burning...and it's definitely not the candles

Everyone began laughing........except Dev who was clearly not amused.........

Dev: hmmmm haslo ....jitna hasna hai haslo.....but let me tell you one thing Tara...after our wedding...it's not going to be me who you make fun of...it's going to be your hubby dear....

Tara was gobsmacked.....this was the first time in the 2 years of engagement that Dev had even mentioned something about the wedding...was she dreaming???

Tara: Well....that's later ......like after we get married but not until then............whenever that is....at the way things are now it seems not until another couple of decades.....*murmuring the last bit hoping he wouldn't hear – except he did*

Dev: Well...in that case.....we shall have to do something about this....*winking at Tara* ahem...come on Maan...we don't have all day....look the candle wax is melting onto the cake........

Maan did as he was told and closed his eyes to make this wish of his......except he wasn't quite sure what his wish was.......but as soon as he closed them....the sooner he opened them....shocked at what he had seen, blinking a few times to try and make sense of it.....but the image kept coming in front of his eyes as soon as he closed his eyes......

"A pair of eyes????!!!"

"Not just a pair of eyes Jenny..." Maan persisted as he recalled the entire event from this morning to his new found friend Jenny, who he had met at Freshers and happened to be doing the same course as him. Maan was relieved to meet Jenny....she was on the same level as Maan in terms of the content of the course as Jenny has taken a gap year to go on holiday abroad and started this year, having forgotten the C of chemistry. Jenny and Maan had gotten on well from the first go and since both were on the same course – they were sure to be in the same lectures so were able to help each other out.

Jenny: Yes yes I know.....it was magical, mesmerizing, the most awesome looking eyes ever.... I've heard it all.......

Maan: Jen......

Jenny: Maan.....it's a fantasy........you just saw a pair of eyes.....- you sure it wasn't just a hidden desire of yours or something??? *she said as a mischievous smile crept over her face*

Maan: my what??? Jen...just leave it....let's just drop the topic shall we....you won't understand.....

Jenny: My pleasure.................. *and she turned to talk to her other friends*

Maan stood there, thinking.......,.he had seen those pair of eyes....the eyes had a sparkle in them....he had never seen such eyes before.....well come to think of it he had never had such a vision before.......but now...every time he closed his eyes even for a split second, all he could see was those eyes.......they were a light brown in colour.......he didn't get much of a view of the face but he knew there was something magical about those eyes....something was inviting about them........he hadn't seen those eyes before......but somehow he seemed to have drowned in them.......

He stood there dazed...thinking about those eyes and who they may belong to and why he was constantly only seeing them in his head....when he heard a jingling sound in the distance..........he hadn't heard that kind of jingle in a long time...as the sound seemed to come closer...Maan recognised it to be of an anklet – the one with small bells attached.........the sound was causing havoc in Maan's head........he desperately looked around to see who the owner of the anklet was........he saw a group of people entering through the main door........but couldn't quite see who the anklet belonged to.........the jingling seemed to be calling out to him.....he closed his eyes in frustration...only to open them sooner than he closed them...the eyes were still present there – only now they seemed to be much brighter......and more vivid....as if......maybe..... were near him......

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Ok Ok....I'm going now.......need to write more.........my creative mind is on a roll at the moment....
Mwah guys xxxx

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