AR OS : *A Perfect Match* :) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
I LOVE IT!!
You totally deserve to win...congrats!! This is exactly how I imagine AR as a married couple...Please write some more...you should make this a FF...if possible...I hope demand kuch zaada nahi ho gaya na😆...

Love
Moni
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
hey nandini first of all congrats on ur winning !!! u truly deserves it 😊 it was awesome onshot beautifully written loved it do write more take care and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
It's so great to read something from you, again! I'll be back in a minute.

*edit*

Hey, I'm so so sorry for the huge delay, but I was just caught up with some work. It was one of the most cutest things I've come across. Really, I mean the way both of them talked and stuff, was just so damn cute...I couldn't help but smile. Nice way of coming back, huh! heheh. Well written, Nandini, once again. You rocked! :) Thanks for the PM and sorry for being such a late-latif! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
AWESOME....NO WORDS AT ALL....WAS THE CUTEST THING I read in sometime.... thnks for the pm...and write more often...now tht dmg has ended it feels tht these lil lil stories are soooo much important and ........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
awesome one shot. i cant believe riddhima punched the doctor. god it was so hilarious.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
omg..!!!! tht was super cute.. I loved it totally.. this is how Armaan & Riddhima's relationship was meant to be.. thodi masti.. thoda drama.. aur bahut bahut sara pyar.. pls pls pls pls do write more.. n ya if u can thn pls Pm with ur updates :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Shooooooooooooooooooooooo Cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Congratz for Winning :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
i loved ittttttttt
sooooooo adorable
crzy people crazily in love with each other's craziness
hahahahaha
loved it
cheers
sonia
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Okay I finally read it! Nandini, that was amazing <3 AHH Im so glad you won the one shot contest! It was simply outstanding, something that we've wanted to see AR in...Their life after marriage! You seriously scripted this idea perfectly! I would die to see this on TV you know! Abhi toh sirf sapne main dekh rahi thi!

You did an exceptional job! The flow of words, our typical AR characteristics, the witty dialogues, even their mannerisms--everything was picture perfeeeeeeect!

Please write moreee OS's and FF's soon! I still need to finish reading your last one, but its almost break time, :D so imma finish that up!

-Anu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Hey Nandini!

Read your OS as soon as you posted it through my phone but I wanted to leave a longer comment, hence, decided to comment once I come on through my laptop.

Anyways, coming to your OS, I simply loved it! Your writing skills are really commendable. I was smiling throughout the whole OS as it was so simple and sweet. My favourite parts out of the whole OS were when Armaan found out that Ridhima punched that dude because he was chatting bullshit about Armaan and also the last dialogue of Ridhima's. It was so Ridhima-ish!

Overall, a really cute OS and well-written! Take a bow Nandini! :)

Melena.

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