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Cytherea

@Cytherea

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

hey..excellent work..i love how u portray their emotions

and maan seems much more approachable in ur FF

update soon plz

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Durga

@mrk-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

loved it yaar..awsome one ..maan in some way or the other supports her .. i dont know wat sasha and tasha ll do to them in the party..

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

Loved the update Kia!!

That line about Adi...being a pea-hen was so LOL!!

Loved how you described the scene between Maan and Geet!!

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516645

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

hey twinni.....so where to start?? I'll start with my Nayno ki tara first...😆
God she's impossible!! She can even plan something from the restrictions she had n ultimatum given to her...she can actually plan anything n everything despite the situations...no wonder she would do a great event manager!! or wedding planner like Arjun !!😆
Another stupid PJ of mine...don't mind!!
And next i'll skip asha twins' conversation..they r good for nothing lolz!! And then comes my avourite part adi pinky duo..did i tell you i love the pinky in ur story??
she's not portrayed just as a foodie but she's more sensible in your story....the sweet n bholi pinky we know from the show could not crack a joke at adi but she can!!
I liked how u portrayed da relation between adi and Geet..they r indeed like siblings..😊 And adi n pinky teaming up for Geet's help is just so sweet..And then comes the bestest of the best part...MAAN!! hayyeeee...he's lovable adorable and what not!! His voice becoming soft at once and he assuring Geet was cool according to me!! And Last but not least i loved Geet's lines 'every time she concludes he is so and so he does something completely opposite that change all her understanding and her perceptions about him'.👏 Good work twinni...keep it up!!👍🏼

Edited by --Shika-- - 14 years ago

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Shamima

@-shamima-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

Ergh sasha and tasha really need to move on they don't realise hey help maaneet get closer lol and awe liked the aid and pinky scene it was sweet and haye maan is willing to help her anyways great update and do can't wait to read more 😊

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sommie

@s-o-m-m-i-e

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Posted: 14 years ago

#226

hey kia....very nice👍🏼loved it...

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-Sangs-

@-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#227

Hey kia ...Lovely update..i simply loved how you described the scene between maan and geet..👏

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#228

It was nice update

This Sasha n Tasha Geet shuld do sumthg of them

Loved how Maan was helping her n was cool n clam

Geet n her self talks are fab

Loved Adi's care for her

NT i wish she dosent succeeds in her plans at all

Update soon

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kia_s

@kia_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#229

@Sanji - no problem, thanks for dropping by😊

@shah10 - thankyou😊

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kia_s

@kia_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#230

@preethia - Thanks for the comments and am glad you like my take on an already existing serial track.😊

@shiv-gauri4eva - Thanks for your comments. I hope i did justice to the character of maan as i still wanted to keep the not approachable but a person with multiple complexities intact😊

@mrk - Thanks for the comments, with sasha and tasha there is not gona be much of a change from the kurban hua night i believe during the party.i felt their behaviour in the serial is quiet apt for their characterisation so am going to keep that with the story.😊

@xxxyyyzzz- Thankyou😊

Edited by kia_s - 14 years ago

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