FF:despair 2 (if you want to read more check blog) - Page 42

Created

Last reply

Replies

832

Views

168k

Users

171

Likes

2.9k

Frequent Posters

zaara2212 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
oh no no pls nothing should happen to Maan

Geet deserves to be happy pls.. update soon
Tishuu thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
oooooooooooooooooooooooo
ok ok ok the promo is slightly scaringggggggggggggggg - scaring?? i mean scaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
oooooooooooooo ok ok ok i knw hes not dead.....cos it says:
iss ka leya Maan ko theek kar da...
hmmmmm i wonder.......
..shreyaa.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomeeee update
loved it
OMG promo is scaryyyyyy
hope maan is fine
update soon
Thankz

SahSah thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
That was awesome update as always and congrats on changing colour
--Zehnaseeb-- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
No sadness plzzzzz.😭
zubi123 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
thts lovelyyyyy naddi, oh plzz maan ku kuchh mat karna, nd lovea the each nd every ppart of maaneet,update the nxt soonn
maansee thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
hi naddi
loved the promo. poor geet feeling 😭 for her............... abbhi to happiness ke starting hone wali thi in their life.................. donot do anything to our maan................... loved it...............continue soon
Hinal.94 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
nadiya loved the promo plz continue yaar
cyberprincess thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
good to see updates from nadiyya after some time. keep going, its a nice update, you cleared one problem and you got another one ready :) would look forward to see how the story goes.
naddiya26 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 14 years ago

despair 29

hi dear readers i know few of you are very angry for me as again a sad track... dear this was the story line ....please tolerate this track for few days .... i dont know why i just want to write some thing emotional .or how i feel if the person you love the most in your life is going way from you .... i hope you all will support me ..for those who dont like sad track i will update FF Simply Love the you can read janu manu and coffees ....trust me you will not be disappointed ... pain is part of life ....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=87cPoPIiDEo[/YOUTUBE]
do listen it while reading you will like it
Geet: please dadi let me go ..she try to go out ..
Jay: called Dr
Dadi: beta they will bring him here
Geet: i want to see how much he is hurt
Dadi: beta ..he is tough thori se lagi hogi
Geet; dadi mein jao JAY bhai ka saath
JAY: bhabi you stay here i will go and bring him ....asked Pari to hold her ..and he went out
Meera: woke up with the noise .... "what happen ?why she is crying ?"
Dadi: beta Maan
Meera: kya huwa Maan ko....
Pari: didi he just fall down from
Meera: looked at Geet who was trying to remove Pari hand form her arm...
Dadi: just collapse in sofa ....
Meera: " please you both don't worry nothing is going to happen to my brother....
Beejee: Geet...she just hold Geet....
Geet: please ask her to let me go and see him ....
Beejee: looked at Dadi....
Dadi: beta come here. he had fall down from horse before ...just wait and see he will be coming in few minutes ...
Geet: placed her head in dadi's lap ..her tears was flowing badly all over her cheeks.... she recollected few hours back Maan said to her "Geet you know your tears make me weak ...when you cry my heart sink ...he wipe her tears ..." murmur i will not make you weak Maan i am your strength...... she quickly got up walk to the worship placed and started praying....
Dadi looked at her ...


Romeo ( i hope you guys remember he was brij friend i did introduce him )....ran in Beejee..
Beejee: what are you doing here?
Romeo i will tell you later..JAY Bhai is saying he is taking Maan bhai to hospital you all come with me..
Geet: Romeo how he is?
Romeo: looked at her .... you come with me.
Pari and Meera quickly picked up Tanu and Ved ...they all rush to hospital.....
Geet was just looking out side holding her Maangal suthar .....murmur "why always me?"
Meera: hold her hand ...." our love is strong Geet kuch nahi hoga"
Geet; placed her head on her shoulder....
VED: kya huwa where are we going?
Beejee: beta your mamoo met an accident
VED:kya woh ma..
Geet: shouted chup ...pleased her hand on his mouth..
Meera: Ved if you will say any thing now i will slap you.....
VED: was scared :he stared crying
Geet:just hug him tight.... "sorry beta sorry lets pray for him hold his small hands in her's"
Dadi: beta please drive fast
Romeo: i am ...
In half hour time they reached hospital
Geet: ran in with Meera..
JAY :was standing in corridor .
Geet: where is he?
JAY: in side ...he pointed at operation theater ...
Geet: what happen ?
JAY : he slipped while going up to the hill.... and was unconscious. a villager told me they saw his horse coming back towards farm they went up to search .....
Geet; for how long his is unconscious ?
JAY: 4 to 5 hours...
Geet: murmur i can feel him( as she woke 5 hours back ) ...she walk to the operation theater.... nurse stopped her ....
Nurse: ma you cannot go in
Geet can i sit here ..she sit on floor ...
Nurse looked at her could nt say no
Geet:gave a blank look to everyone

Dadi: Geet beta be brave..kissed her forehead ..who was sitting on floor
Geet: again started crying bitterly "today i am feeling lonely......i didnt felt like this when papa died ......"
beejee : sabar beta sabar ...just pray..
Geet: beejee you know my prayers are never heard .......looked at door
beejee :karo tou ....
Geet: beejee i can live without my parents but not without him,not a single min .... hide her self in beejee lap.
Dadi: iss ka leya Maan ko theek kar da...
JAY: please .....he was help less as he was not getting how to stop them from crying..

Dr came out....JAY ran to him ..
JAY: how is he ?
DR: his back bone is damaged & he is still unconscious ..i cannot say anything just pray.
Geet: can i see him please ? she quickly got up... held Dadi hand
DR: one at a time
Geet: dadi you go first ....
Dadi: walk in ..he was sleeping in between many machine she could not see him just walk out"i can't see him like that"
Geet: can i go ..looked at Meera
Meera :yes
Geet: walked in with heavy heart ....
nurse had just removed his oxygen mask ...
Geet: can i sit here
nurse :yes you can but dont touch anything.
Geet: walked to bed Maan's words echo in her ears "i will not leave you at any cost kuch bhi hojai" tears roll down her eyes ..."you were right happiness time span is very short". kissed his forehead.




Geet: sit next to his bed "i just came to know how much i am attached with you for the first time you were away from me for more than 5 hours ..hold his hand in hers....I felt like i could not breath.you were right .... she suddenly smiled move more close to him whisper "pata ha i am not sick you were right .your dream of having paused ...can be fulfilled. "she started recollection how Maan said to her " Geet you know i need four kids 2 girls 2 boys so no one is alone . you know my heart say that we will have he brush his his nose tip to hers "
Geet:hide herself in his arms ...."you and your dreams "
Maan:kya dream dekhna mein paaisa lagta ha ... pull her more close. he didnot leave a tiny pace between them.

Geet:"get up Maan you have to make your dream come true" she placed her head on his shoulder .
DR: pat her shoulder :Mrs Maan he cannot hear you
Geet: he can
DR: clinical he is ..
Geet:dr please stop it i know he can hear me and you keep your advise to ..paused...
JAY: Bhabi please come with me they will take him for more tests
Geet: bhahi i want to be with him Please
JAY: ok you come with me we will
Geet: walked with him

DR had his ct scan
Geet: is everything fine.
DR: just wait till he gets up...
Time flies it was 8 at night ...
dadi :Geet beta why dont you go home and freshen up
Geet:dadi please let me stay with him i am fine here.
Dadi: beta you are sitting like this for last 10 hours .staring at him
Geet: dadi please...... she recollected Maan" Geet when you look at me like this i feel like drown in your eyes , i dont know what is in your eyes .that always pull me towards you ."
Geet : i think you should have a eye test.
Maan:"why ? "tickled her "mera naughty wife'
Geet: really... removed his hand from her bare back.
Maan:"Geet if i die and you whisper in my ear or you will see me like this surly i will get up"
Geet: what are you saying ? hide her self in his chest......
Dadi: beta why are you smiling ?
Geet: dadi he will get up .. she move close to his ear.. whisper" i love you Maan ,love you the most in the whole world ,for me you have to get up "
Dadi :who was holding Maan hand " Geet he moved "
Geet:Dadi he will as he said ..paused ..where ever he is if i will call him he will come as he my only friend ....right Maan..."
Dadi: kya bol rahi ho beta
Geet: dadi aap nahi samjhe gi yeh meri aur Maan ki love theory ha.... jo pal ha iss ko jeelo ,jo saat ha iss ko enjoy karo baghar kaise daar ka right Maan"she was talking with him as he was listening her ....placed her head on his shoulder closed her eyes
to be cont... do tell me do you like this part or not, dear readers i know this is very emotional but can't help it as this was in my mind ...if i change the story then i might not be able to write... do comment and tell me
thx for your support ....loved each and every comment
Hit like button if you like & do comment to show me you are still interested in this FF or not 😕
join this http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_203217116359195

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".