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Posted: 14 years ago
ur really to good so pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi my dearest & sweet readers sorry for not adding for quiet sometime ..i know i left you all at a cliffhanger & vanished or isolated my self from forum sorry for that.. i am thank full for your support & Pm's to ask my well being .. i was not able to pen down any thing..as a Dr advise i gave myself a break.. don't ask my DR name...:D sorry once again ... special thx to my buddy as i am back because of my buddy .... let me clear few things here as few of you ask me to change the story line as i got many Pm's if you will make one sick we will stop reading etc ... dear readers sickness is part of life . let me carry on the track as i had a story line when i started this FF.if i will change the story then i have to change the title too.... please do let me know what all you guys want... Up & down are part of life & love. enough of my blah blah ....( mera yeh point ha sar time serious rahoga tou life bahot boring hojai gi yar aik he tou life ha :) Goswami ... so no serious talk



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f1fIuXZ7mvI[/YOUTUBE]

by Hasan Shirazi

Geet : " jee bola i am hearing you"

Maan: started walking towards her .

some one knocked at door

Geet: open the door

Tanu : Didi come with us

Maan: but your didi can't go with you...

Tanu: why?

Maan: she has to work

Ved: mamoo she has to come with us

Maan: why?

Tanu : because mama is waiting for us downstairs

Maan: tell mama your didi has to attend a meeting with me

Meera: Maan you handle it i am taking her with me .. Meera enter room

Maan: sorry he pull her back behind him

Meera: try to hold her hand..." let me take her "

Maan: no

Tanu: is didi a ball you both are fighting on her

Maan & Meera stopped

Tanu: ask didi if she want's to stay she can stay ..

everyone turn towards Geet...

Maan: jee bola...stared at her

Geet: looked at meera who was from behind saying come with us... "we all join you"

Meera: uff you are so scared of your hubby cum boss .... made a sad face

Maan: smiled "see i told you"

Geet: hug Meera "actually i like this driver" hit at Maan shoulder

Maan: see she treat me as a driver.

Meera: you stay with your driver ... walked out

Geet: didi is annoyed from me... looked at Maan

Maan : she is not...

Geet: are you sure ?

Maan : yes

Geet: now tell me what i have to do?

Maan :you just sit i will do .. made her sit on his chair ...

Geet: then why you stopped me?

Maan : dil caha raha tha.. started working on his laptop

Geet: started at him

Maan : thinking if she is really sick what i will do?

Geet: waved her hand in front of his eyes " can you share with me what is bothering you that much?"

Maan : nothing..

Geet: hmmm

Adi: knocked .."sir clients are here"

Maan : ok we are coming.



Brij know i will tell you Geet..

romeo :what you have done?

Brij: time will tell you

Romeo: i am smell some thing fishy

Brij: had a laughter...


evening in Delhi..

Geet: i think we are very late...

Maan : while driving "yes now didi must be really annoyed from us"

Geet: i really didn't get time to gave her call

Maan : don't worry we will sort it

Geet: smiled...

they reached home

Maan : nakul where is every one ?

nakul: they all left for farm house

Maan : All

nakul: yes

Geet: but know one told us

nakul: dadi asked to call her when you come home

Geet: looked at Maan

Maan : but when they made a plan to go to Farm house.. he landed on his rocking chair

Geet: should i call dadi?

Maan : yes

Geet: called her

Dadi: tou aagai aap dono ghar

Geet: jee

Dadi: beta why don't you both come here tomorrow ?

Geet: looked at Maan .. his eyes was closed & he was thinking something" what can i say you ask him?"gave phone to him

Maan : kya?

Geet: dadi wants to talk to you

Maan : grab the phone..

Dadi: beta you both come here

Maan : looked at Geet who was surfing news channel..."i can't i have a very important meeting"

Meera: from other end " do you have some time for family"

Maan: didi trust me it is really important

Meera: Maan i will not hear a word you have to come here tomorrow... cut the call

Maan: yeh didi bhi na kabhi nahi sunti

Geet: what happen?

Maan: she had cut the call

Geet: she is annoyed

Maan: will you go and freshen up we are invited at a dinner

Geet: today

Maan: yes

Geet: ok she walk to their room "why he always tell thing at last min? murmur" quickly changed into white dress..

Maan: walked in look at her all dress in white

Geet: why are you looking at me like that?

Maan:i can't look at you ?

Geet: turn her face on other side as she felt shy...

Maan: i will come in 5 mins he walk to washroom ... he was holding himself for hours as he stand under shower his tear started running from his eyes .."why me again?" he cry for sometime...

Geet: "he said 5 mins now 20 mins had past ...she knocked at door "

Maan: wipe his tears.. "coming"

Geet: ok ..

Maan: lets go

Geet: are you fine?

Maan: yes

Geet: hmmm she walked out of room

Maan: quickly comb his hairs & walk out

Geet: can i ask you some thing .. while walking to car

Maan: yes sure

Geet: what is bothering you that much?

Maan: "i am fine" he said bit loud

Geet: just sit quietly in car ....

Maan: overcome his emotions.." i am sorry for being harsh with you"

Geet:"its ok"

Maan: "i will tell you promise if i will have any problem"

Geet: smiled...

after 15 mins drive they reached to Jay & Pari home...

introducing JAY & PARI as Maan Friends..

Pari: Maan bhai you are so late .. she said started of as she saw them coming out of car

Maan: My wife took so much time to get ready...

Geet: looked at him in astonished

JAY: pata chal after getting married why we get late

Maan: had a laughter

Pari :let me introduce myself

Maan: oh i am sorry .. Geet this is Pari..

JAY: i am his school friend

Geet: pleasure meeting you

Pari: same here

Maan: will we stand here & talk ..

Jay:yes please come in

Geet: lovely home

Pari: thanks

Jay: Maan what happen to your eyes

Maan: looked at Geet " oh shampoo chala gaya tha"

Pari: oh i thought you stared bhabi

Maan: might be possible

Geet: blushed

Maan: will you excuse us ?

Pari: sure go go you can do your business talk..

Jay: yar lets have dinner first

Maan: ok

Pari : just wait five mins

Geet: should i help you?

Pari: sure you can.

they had a dinner ..

Jay: ladies if you don't mind can we go in study

Pari: sure as Maan bhai had stare bhabi alot

Maan: when?

Pari: through out the dinner

Geet: you know now days guys gossip more

Pari: so true


Jay: now tell what is problem....

Maan: took out her reports from his jacket pocket

Jay: what is this?

Maan: see it your self he sank in sofa hold his head

Jay: OMG what the H*** is this?

Maan: i don't know

Jay: Maan if you will act like this how she will take...

Maan: i don't know

Jay: did you talk to dr?

Maan: at that time i was not able to talk

Jay:hug him

Maan: i love her if anything happen to her i will ..

Jay: chup ho... may be it is a fake report

Maan: Dr Sharma is dadi's dr how it can be fake?

Jay: you just relax

Maan: i am not getting how to tell her

Jay: are you crazy?

Maan: but i can't hide it for long

Jay: go wash your face

Maan: tell me what to do my mind is shell..

Jay: you first compose yourself ...

Maan: i want the treatment should start soon

Jay: Maan we will send her sample to other dr's when we will be sure then we will tell her

Maan: i don't want to waste a min

Jay: listen to me sometime reports are not correct let us confirm first

Maan: dadi had asked us to come to farm house tomorrow

Jay: you go i will talk to dr's

Maan: she will be fine

Jay: yes she will be now cheer up these ladies read faces they will find by our faces..

Maan: yes since morning she is asking me...

Jay: hug him you just relax...

Maan: we should better leave as we have to go to farm in morning

Jay: yes sure..

they both walk out

Pari: karle gossips

Jay: yes

Geet: looked at him he was just trying to smile...

Maan: let go Geet

Pari: bus

Maan: actually we have to go to farm early morning...

Geet: looked at him in surprise

Jay: let them go

Pari: smiled

Geet: i will visit you soon


they reached home Maan didnot said a word.

Maan: you go & sleep... as he sit with his laptop

Geet: why you are ignoring me?

Maan: i am not

Geet: yes you are she walk to washroom & slam the door

Maan: i don't want to break in front of you my sleeping beauty .. walk to his library

Geet: he does not like me Sasha was right...splash water at her face.she walk out he was not there she laid down on bed ...."papa why you left me... now i will not stay with him i will talk to Meera didi"

to be cont.... i hope i am able to write maan emotions or pain which he is going through ..do comment

http://naddiya26.blogspot.com/2010/12/despair-chapter-23.html

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet noo he does love u!!!!!



thnkz for the update!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no geet is thinking in the wrong way
hope the reports r not true and she is fine
plzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome one naddiya
naddiya not to change the track its awesome agree with you
and i think the reports are false geet it not sick
may be iam wrong hehe
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwww geet please don't misunderstand his love. but it's good that she gonn talk to meera di so she will assure her that he only loves her.

please update soon

u took it so long.

i am sorry, i did not know u were sick. i hope ur feeling better. get well soon. missed ur updates

lovely update dear............
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part... hope that report is fake
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor girl, misunderstood him
Edited by vrsharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope the report a not true poor Geet she is taking in wrong way what emotional & sad part i almost cry feel sorry for Maan he really love her great update pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx for the update nadiya....i feel something fishy with brij..probably he did something....i just hope she is not sick..even if she is let it b curable.....hope geet doesnt mistake him for his doings

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