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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan i loved ur updates...dey r very nice...n m jst bit worried abt maan's health...n i feel tht geet wnt him to go through the same pain tht she went through whn he was rejecting her n always stopped her to come close to him...i liked it tht geet's efforts hv helped him to recover in such a small time...bt precap sounds interesting..
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Posted: 14 years ago
When will you update next part... [:0]
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Posted: 14 years ago
i cant see maan and geet like this ..pls pls unite them ....eager to see the next update ..wen the next update ll be ?????????
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Posted: 14 years ago


its been a long tym..

hope maan get back healthy himself..

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
waitng...wen ru going to update??
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 78

impt note all the updates have the link to the next part near the precap
once it is updated...so it is easy to read ...at one go...all the threads & parts are connected one after the other...just for readers convience..
there routine continued. it was a sunday
daadi came to meet maan. geet left them alone, daadi never questioned her
coldnesss, understanding her. she did'nt want to say any thing that would hurt her.
daadi - what happened to the doctors visit, sab teehk hain na
maan - every thing is fine, we are planning to have the c-section on wednesday
daadi was delighted - I will do all the preparations now
meera walks in then, daadi tells her the plan
meera - wow that will be cool
daadi hugs maan & so does meera
meera - geet ke hospital ka bag ready kiya
maan looked concerned
meera - thats no big deal I will do it.
she pulls out a bag & packs few cloths for geet to wear in the hospital
pads, cloths for baby, some toiletries, towel, spread
daadi also helped in pulling out maans old clothes for the baby
maan - old cloths kyun daadi
daadi - baby must wear old cloths not the new ones from the market
they set every thing up. they spend the whole day with maan
geet was no where near them. she did'nt join them for lunch or
dinner. she infact just went out. she returned real late at night.

tuesday evening maan was getting really excited & scared & nervous
he could barely share it with her. she was preoccupied with some thing else
maan was concerned, she should not have anything at night to be ready for the c-section.
maan - u will have to fill the form for the hospital
geet - umm
she avoided confronting him
wednesday morning maan was getting really excited now
she continued with the normal routine. gym, water tub & then to office
maan - yeh sab kay kar rahi ho
geet - office nahi jana aaj..then smiled naughtly u want to spend the
day with me on the bed. don't tell me
maan was confused did she not remember or she pretending not to
maan - we have to be in the hospital
geet - kisne kaha?
maan - we decided it
she intrupted - u decided not we
maan rolled his eyes, but calmed himself - geet its for our baby
she intrupted again - ur baby not our baby
baby~felt bad
maan - what ever geet it is not safe for both of u to wait for normal delivery
geet - how does it bother u ?
maan - we can fight over this latter, challo hospital chalten hain
geet - i am not going any where
maan was losing it. daadi came in . maan was relived to see daadi
daadi - challo beta, humne puja bhi rakvai hain
geet just left from there
daadi - isse kya huwa
maan - daadi she does'nt want the c-section, she wants to wait for the labor
dr ne kaha hain it not safe for them. woh mera gussa bache pe nikal rahi hain
daadi - lekin woh aise kyun kareghi
they look for her for the whole day she does'nt come back.
it was late night when she returned home. maan was fuming
maan - untill now I had a slight hope u will be right in what ever u did
but today u just broke my last ray of hope
she ignored him. she changed her dress & laid next to him
maan yelled - u hate me, I can understand but why are u doing this to our baby
tum mera gussa bache pe kyun nikal rahi ho. u know ur just risking
that life in ur stomach by delaying the c-section
she picks out the paper from her bag shows him - i was just wondering
coldly she tells him. she points at a declaration form
he was too furious to look at any thing
geet - it is asking in the event of circumstance when we can save only the child or
mother whom do you want us to save
.
maan turned at once to look at the form
geet - mujhe samjh nahi aaya main issmain kya baroon
maan looked at her in shock, his heart just stopped for that instance
geet - challo inky pinky karte hain
maan shouted in top of his voice - tumhe mazak sujraha hain
she calmly sat next to him pointing at her stomach & then at her
she went on inky - pinky, ponky, father had a donkey, donkey died father cried
she looked at him inky pinky ponky....every time she swicthed her hand from her
heart to her stomach maans heart just bleeded & bleeded...
it landed on her heart..well decided...
maan - tum kya kar rahi ho
geet took the pen & started writing - iss main mera aur aapka sign manga hain
she signs & then puts a ink mark on his thumb & presses it on the page
he clutches the paper in his hand & then tears it into small pieces(his both hands were in control now. )
geet - woh copy tha orginal mera pass hain
she was about to leave the bed he holds her hand back
turning it back ward - main kuch bhi man leta, lekin tum baby ka nuksan karogi
yah nahi man sakta, what do u want from me
she turns back to see him - I told u I don't want any thing from u
she snaps her hand & brings the orginal paper
geet - time for u to know step 2
maans heart was scared did she mean to hurt the baby in her hateredness.
geet - BABY
maan closed his eyes in pain & disbelief
geet - I will give u the baby
he opened the eyes in shock
geet - u love the baby & baby loves u so u can have each other
I promise u. u will have the baby safe & sound in ur arms.
she shows the orginal papers already signed for the baby & she had taken his thumb
print last night itself on that.
maan - lekin I did'nt want to sign for the baby
geet - I am not giving u an option here.
nafrat kya hoti hai, koi iss se na poocho
zeher peena kaisa lagta hai, koi isse na poocho
woh to khud barsoo se saza bhugat rehe hain
qistoon mein khud-khushi ka anjaam, unse na poocho

precap
maan on his legs!!

NEXT PART 79
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan hows u? sorry for late commenting was out of station from 3-4 days so just back n now read ur all updates.. its much passionate, too bold and sweet..
have a wonderful day sweety..

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Posted: 14 years ago
omg.i knew she is planning sumthng like this...maan has really hurt her alot...nd the precap, sounds interesting...plz plz ek aur update karo na
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Posted: 14 years ago
Is this really that old Geet or do v hav sum twin of her staying wit Khuranas
Matlab Geet culd get so cold
Its the biggest shock
Man she loosed her mind
The worst was wen she was doing inky pinky
Maan is loosing his control
Good she got his half body in work jus lil more than she'll be done
I really wanna c wat Maan will do wen he is fully recovered
Update was good n wit shockers
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Posted: 14 years ago
no way!! She is committing a suicide?? But its risky for the baby also....i reall felt bad for geet before but nw i felt that she must be too hurt...bcz for acting lyk this there must be sm emotion behind!!

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