*Just A Dream*[MG] FanFic ~~Thread 1~~

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Heyy Guyz!😃 Okay I'm Really Loving MaanEet And All The FanFics On Them So I Thought Lets Write One!😆 Okay So This is my second FanFic but first one on Maaneet😳 I'm not good at it but i've tried to make it as good as possible so pleasee forgive me if it's rubbish😳
Here it goes


Many of you might know where i found this from!😆 Nelly- Just A Dream. Loveee Thiss Song!

Introduction

Main Characters;
Geet Malhotra
Maan Singh Khurrana
And Mayank Sharma



Geet Malhotra- At the age of 10, her life changed when she fell in love with someone. That Someone was none other Shahrukh Khan! She then fell in love with Akshay Kumar!Then Later On Salman Khan. The List Goes On And On But Geet Never Stops. She loves being alone so that she can dream. Dreams that will never come true. Geet wants to live in her dreams and meet her *dream man* which eventually comes true but with a few twists in this *dream man*. She's 18 and studying in college *I think you be in college at this age'not sure since I've not reached to college just yet*. Will Describe her more later on.



Maan Singh Khurrana- The *angry young man* of the town. He's always been serious and seems like he never ever smiles. He always wanted to stay away from girls *even though girls are fidaa over him ufff* until he met someone special *Quite obvious na*. He's 25 and owns his own company where *someone special* will enter for various reasons 😆. Okay I don't know how to describe so I'll stop right there!



Mayank Sharma- The Idiot of the town *Noo I mean the flirt and the playboy type*. He's always and always eyeing on Miss Geet! Poor Girl! He's Bugged Her Everyday until he gets serious and wants to actually get into a relationship with her. Little does he know, this isn't going to happen 'just yet!

Ohhh I'm giving the story away! LOL Okay that's it for the description but they will be described in the story later on.

Rest of the characters;
Geet's Family: Mum *Sadhna*, Dad *Ranveer*, And Sister *Pooja*
Pooja'a Husband--Vansh--
Maan's Family: Dadimaa, Brother Dev And Dev's Wife Naintara.
Mayank's Family: Mum *Only Kid And Without A Dad*

Then There's Sasha, Tasha, Pinky And Adi Who all work in Khurrana Construction *Maan's Company*

Okay I'll Add Further Details Later On, For Now Here's A Little Intro/Prologue Of My Story:

She stood near the window and looked up to the never ending sky. "Why?" she asked.
"Why? Why did this happen to me?" She cried.
But no one seemed to be listening to her. She screamed in rage. "WHY DID HE COME IN MY LIFE?!" Cried Geet as she dropped on the floor like a leaf falling from the tree. She had no one to listen to her endless complaints.



IndexChapter5-Page18
Chapter6-Page22
Chapter7-Page29
Chapter8-Page 34
Chapter9-Page 38


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Okay Guyz! So I've Written The Chapter😳 I Know I'm A Slow, Crapppy Writer But What To Do😆 Silly Naa😳
Okay My Back Is Killingg!!! I Have This Weird Neck Pain Which I Get Everytime I'm Doing Hard Work🤣 No Joke It Seriously Happens To Mee😭
Okay Enough Of My Bak-Bak Here's The Next Chapter Enjoy And Do Comment If You Liked It Or Not😛

Chapter3
How on earth is she going to get away from this creep?!
Geet kept pushing him but it was of no use.
"Let me go !let me go !let me go!!!!!!!" screamed Geet as she kicked Maan while he dragged her.
Maan didn't listen, instead he held her even more tight and opened the front door of the car. He roughly pushed her in and closed the door. Geet tried opening the door while Maan was still outside but Damn the doors were locked automatically. She tried getting into the back seat but it was too late, Maan was already in the car and he dragged her back to the front seat.
"Arghhh!!!" Fumed Geet.
"I'm A Champion At Kung Fu!! Don't Mess With Me!" She Lied.
"Calm Down My Queen! I'm Miles Better Than You At Your Kung Fuuu!" He mocked.
Geet: Don't Mess with me!
Maan: Well I Have!
Geet was shocked at his words. How dare he call her weak!!
Maan started the car and was on full speen.
"What the hell?!! Stop the car!!!" screamed Geet as she punched him on his arms to take it off the steering wheel.
"Ahhh Keep punching Mrs Maan Singh Khurrana! You'll Get tired anyways!"Laughed Maan as he looked at the road and sometimes at Geet intensely.
So that's his name, thought Geet, but why the heck is he calling me Mrs Maan Singh Khurrana?!
"Oi! Why did you call me Mrs'"she didn't want to say it.
"Mrs'" he smirked
"You knowww!! Why?" she asked curiously
"Obviously! Cz We're Gonna Get Married!" he said delightfully.
Geet could not believe her ears.
"WHAAA?!!!!!!!!!!!" She said it out loud with her mouth and eyes wide open. Lucky he didn't kiss her again to shut her up 😆
"Yeahhh!!" He said it in the same tone but a bit softer.
Geet shook her head in disbelief and quickly slid back near the door in case he does something.
Maan smiled at her silly action and again looked in front.

Geet was shivering and tears were playing in her eyes. What was she to do now? She looked outside and it was dark, what are her parents gonna be thinking? Are they looking for me? Thought Geet while looking at the time in her watch.
"Haila! It's 6 O'clock!!" Shouted Geet, Trying To make him hear.
"I Know That" he said simply.
"Umm Sir, Don't You think I should be going home?" she said hesitantly.
"Who Sir? And who told you we're going home?" he asked her with a smirk on his face.
"You Sir! Mister Or Whatever! And DON'T YOU DARE TAKE ME ANYWHERE!!" She screamed.
Maan stayed calm but gave an intense glare at her which scared her inside and out.
She closed her eyes and muttered "I Hate it when you give me that look"
He laughed at her talks.
She shot her eyes open and said "Come on man! Why are you doing this?! Don't you know I love someone else!"
Maan Instantly stopped the car in the middle of the road which made Geet move towards the front side. She was about to hit the front side when he slid his left arm across her and prevented her from hitting. She looked at his arms. Ohhh Waxed Eh? She thought In her mind.
She looked at him angrily and pushed him back.
But he didn't move, instead he came even closer with an angry look.
"Who do you love?" he demanded, like he would eat her alive if she said the wrong thing.
She moved her head back until it hit the seat. She was trapped already and now trapped between him and the stupid seat. Oh I wish I could absorb myself into the seat! She thought.
He came even closer and was only few inches away from her face.
She tried to look on the other side but he twisted her face back to him forcefully.
Geet was scared to look at him, he was looking really angry!
"Um..W..Woo..Wohh'M..M..mai.." she couldn't say anything.
Maan: Wohh Main Wohh Main Kya? *Tighting His Jaw*
Geet: Umm..I'
Maan: Tell Me Now!!
He shouted at her, holding her both arms and shaking them as he spoke.
"I LOVE SALMAN KHAN! HAPPY?!" She shouted back but a bit louder and in an angry tone.
Maan: Salman Khan? The ACTOR Salman Khan?! *He Started Laughing as he slowly let her go*
Geet: Yeah Him! Any Problem?!
Maan: Ahahaaahh!! You're Crazyy'
Geet: Shut Up Maan Singh Thurrana! Huh You scared the wits out of me!
Maan: Yeah This was just a teaser, picture toh abhi baaki hai mere dost! *Proudly*
Geet: So you're stealing dialogues of MY Stars?! How lame Mr Thurrana..Tut Tut *She was petrified from inside but tried to act normal*
Maan: Huh? What?! You think I Will steal? Jee Nahi! They're My Creation!
Geet: Yeah As If! Now stop being stupid and let me go!
Maan: And if I don't? *Coming closer again*
Geet: Umm Whaattt D..Do You mean? *Going back again*
Maan: You know what I mean.
His face was mere inches away from hers, scaring her to death.
She couldn't take it anymore. She pushed him with full strength but instead fell back. He was still there like nothing had happened.
"How many times have I told you, it's not gonna work with you pushing me like a kid" He said slowly.
She opened her mouth wide and thought 'how dare he?! Now he thinks I kick like a kid?!'
"How dare you! Don't you dare say I kick like a kid!" she warned
"Ooopss I forgot, you're my wife" he winked and continued "and you're bound to kick like a kid! Ahahaha"
"What the'!" she didn't know what to say, all she could do was stare at him wide her button like eyes and open her mouth wide open.
She decided not to say anything to him and instead think of how she can get away from him.
Maan started the car and drove off to nowhere.



Mayank had gone through a strange feeling today.
What was it? He thought as he walked slowly which was a sudden change.
"Dude, What's Happening to me?" he felt weird and strange.
"Oh it's nothing dude, just leave it!" he talked to himself as he walked at his normal speed to get home.




Geet looked here and there and decided not to talk to him forever!
"Huh! Who the hell does he think he is?! Maan Singh Khurrana! More Like Maan Singh Thurana!" she thought in her mind.
"Khurrana!" he said, as if he read her silly thoughts.
Her mouth opened again, she quickly closed it. Couldn't trust him 😆
"Huh! Whatever! I Don't care! I'm Gnna call him that from now on!" she thought again.
Suddenly her eyes fell on her bag which was with her all the time.
"OMG!! How stupid can I get?!!" She thought excitedly.
Her dear bag had her Phone, Iphone, Mp3, Psp and Ipod all shoved together and used according to her mood.
She was so excited that she didn't realise Maan had guessed what she was going to do.
As she slowly made her way to her bag, making sure he doesn't see it. She was about to take phone or whatever came into her out when suddenly Maan caught her hand in just a second.
She looked up to see him smiling while looking at the road, with one hand on the wheel and the other on her delicate hand *Sob Sob*
"Tut Tut, Too bad I found out what you were about to do" he said mockingly.
Geet tried with her other hand, you know to take the phone out of her bag but instead He pulled the bag to his side making her fall onto him. Her body fell on his side but it didn't make him move an inch, he remained where he was. She went back but he pulled her shoulder bag again and made her fall onto him again. *Seems like he was enjoying it Huh! Poor Geet*
"Arghhh!!! Get Off Me Mr!" She shouted.
"Woahhh! You're The One who's on me!" he said teasingly.
"Shut Up! Well you're the one who pulled me! Now let me go!" She shouted again and went back to her seat. This time he didn't pull her back as he couldn't stop laughing.
"And stop laughing!" She shouted, adjusting her clothes etc.
He didn't say anything and just continued laughing.
"Ughhh!!" She said and put her head on the side.
Suddenly her phone rang.
"Dulha Mill Gaya Dulha Mill Gaya Mill Gayaaa!" Was the tune playing. I mean her ring tone 😆
"Awhhh Now you're phone even knows that you've found your hone wala dulha!" he laughed.
"Shut Up!! Give me the phone now!" she demanded, lifting her hands towards the bag.
"You think I'm that stupid not to know you're silly CUNNING Plans?!" he exaggerated the word Cunning.
She rolled her eyes and tried taking the phone off him, but failed again and again as he held it further away from her. The only way to get the phone was to literally jump on him and TRY To take phone off him, which she will NEVER Ever do!
She edged herself away from him and looked outside, still listening to her phone ringing the same Ring tone again and again.
Few moments later, there was no tone. Yes Maan had turned it off to prevent it from ringing again. He also turned rest of her gadgets off while driving. Wow 😆

"Mum, Dad , Pooja I miss you so much! Where are you ? Why isn't anyone looking for me?" she wondered as a tear made its way down her cheek. She closed her eyes and imagined all the good times she's had in her entire life. Now she had no clue what will happen to her and where she will go. All she knew was that she was KIDNAPPED!!!

Suddenly the car stopped, Geet was surprised and scared.
She looked at Maan who was staring at her since ages.
"Where am I?" she asked, her heart almost jumped out of her mouth when she thought of all the bad places where she could have landed into.
"Home" He smiled at her.

Do Tell me how it is and if i should continue with it😳
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Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Heyy Guyz!!😛 Sooo Sorry For Keeping You Waiting!
Actually All This Week, I've Been Veryy Busy So I Never Got The Chance To Write My Chapter
Anyways, To Make It Up, I've Made A Longgg Chapter!! Actually i was waiting for my friend so i kept adding extra extra so i ended up with 2406 words!😲😆
Okay so i've made it long and Sorrryyy Rozieee!! It's Late Now And I Have To Go Since Mum Is Screaming At Me!😡

Okay Anywayss Here's Chapter 2 Enjoy😳

Chapter 2

Geet Managed To Reach On Time And as she was about to enter, she stopped.
"Hey Gorgeous!" said Mayank as he slid from the right hand side and faced Geet.
"Ughh! You?!" Said Geet, Frustrated.
"Yeah Me Aur Koun!" He winked which irritated Geet.
Geet didn't bother to answer him so she walked past him, only to be stopped by him again. Mayank stood in front of her and she stopped. Then she tried walking from the other side but again he stood in front of her. This time she pushed him and walked past him *Huh!*
"Haayee Dhakkaa Lagaaa!!" Said Mayank as he sighed looking at her go.

"Stupid idiot! Why did I have to see his face today?! Now all my day will go bad!" muttered Geet as she walked towards her class.



Meanwhile, outside the college, parked a black car *I'm so bad at naming cars! I'll Stick To Colours* and the back door's window slowly opened. Revealing a man who slowly took off his designer glasses *those black ones someone wearss..*. He looked out of the window and smiled strangely. Then he put back his glasses on and signalled the driver to move.
Hmmm I Wonder Who It Was😆





It was break time now and everyone was in the canteen talking to their friends. Geet, Rozie and Jasmin were all sitting on the table munching their toasts since none of them had anything in the morning!
Nupur, their other friend, was buying something else so she was still in the line.
"Oh God I Never had anything in the morning! And my stomach was rumbling in class!" Said Geet while eating.
"I Think We Know That!" Laughed Jasmin.---Uhh Roopali Now😆
Geet and Rozie also laughed. Nupur also joined them and when she was about to sit on her chair, someone pushed the chair from her and sat on it. Luckily Nupur never fell while holding the hot coffee which could have burnt her!
"Sorry Ma'am! It's Taken!" Said Mayank as he sat on the chair faced backwards *Like the back of the chair is twisted around to sit on* Facing Geet.
Geet Rolled her eyes in annoyance and continued eating her toast.
"Heyy Miss Beautiful!" Said Mayank, Indicating It To Geet.
Geet couldn't be bothered looking at him so she decided to ignore him the idiot *ACCORDING TO HER!! I Lovee Mayankk!!*
Nupur was just standing there looking at him angrily whilst he flirted with Geet.
Nupur Secretly Liked Mayank But Didn't show it as she knew he would never pay attention to her. Not that she's not good looking No! She's Gorgeous! *Nupur From Miley Jab Hum Tum* But just that he's a flirt and he doesn't really get serious at all.

Mayank waved his hands in front of Geet's face and said "Hellooo Anyone there?"
She looked at him and shoved the toast in his mouth.
"Yeah! Someone is here!" she said angrily and walked off from there.
Jasmin Nupur and Rozie laughed at Mayank who had a toast stuffed in his mouth.
He smiled still with the toast in his mouth, which made him look even funnier.
The three girls laughed even louder looking at him and couldn't help but hold their stomachs.
Mayank just realized why they were laughing and he quickly pulled out the toast from his mouth and instead of chucking it, he surprisingly ate it as he made his way towards the classrooms where Geet was off to.
"Nupur!! Goo Run After Him!!" Shouted Rozie, Making Nupur go red in embarrassment.
"Shut Up Rozie!!" Shouted Nupur as she left from there with her coffee.
Jasmin And Rozie Laughed and also headed towards their classrooms.

"Huh! Stupid Monkey! Bandar Kahi Ka!! Ughhh!!!" Said Geet while walking in the corridors *By God! College Corridors are huge!! My Experience From the open evening of the college I'll be going to*

"Hum Yahan Aye Kis Liye?'Aap Ne Bulaya Iss Liye! Aye Hain Toh Kaam Bhi Bataaiye'Nanananana Pehle Zara Aap Muskaraaiye!" Sang Mayank As he moved left right left in front of Geet.
"For God's Sake! At least Learn The lyrics You idiot!" Shouted Geet, slapping her head with her right hand.
Mayank: I know the lyrics Ma'am but since you're not singing it with me, I had to change them *Wink*
Geet: Oh For crying out loud! Don't call me Ma'am and why do you want me to sing the song? That too with a monkey like you! Your Name should be Mr. Bandar Sharma!!
Mayank: Okay Mrs Bandar Sharma! Or Should I say Bandariya Ahahahahahhah!
Geet: MAYANK!!
Mayank: GEET! Hahahahahha!! You're Too Funny Geet Darling!
Geet: Why? Have I cracked a joke that you're laughing soo much! And Now why suddenly Darling?!
Mayank: Why'You Like Mrs.Bandar Sharma *Wink* Ahahahahah!!
Geet: Oh shut up you useless guy!
She walked off from there while he stood there looking at her go.

The whole day was like that. Mayank being a pain and Nupur getting into trouble every time because of him. It went even worse when he sat on the dinner table where the girls were supposed to be keeping their lunch and eating!
The whole day was crazy and finally over!
Geet said bye to her friends including Mayank who seemed to be stuck with her like everywhere she went!
"Okay then tell me! How do you like the idea?" Said Mayank as he walked with her like a shadow.
"Mayank! Get Lost! You know if my parents see you with me they'll be like OMG!! Forget them the whole world will be shocked to see us together! North Pole And South Pole Stuck like shadows!" Shouted Geet as she kind of increased her speed which didn't really help as he was walking slower than her but at the same speed. *Long Legs Inni 😆*
Mayank: Okay! But at least answer me!
Geet: Answer you what?
Mayank: Will You Go Out With Me? *Puppy Face*
Geet: Mayank!! I told you! N-O Spells NO!
Mayank: Y-E-S Spells Yes!!
Geet: Mayank how many times do I have to tell you! I Don't wanna go out with a jerk like you!
Mayank stopped whilst Geet continued walking. But even she was stopped when Mayank held her left wrist and dragged her back, taking her closer to him.
For a second she didn't know where to look, slowly she looked up to his mesmerizing eyes full of stupidity
She looked at him and pushed him back but instead he held her even more tighter.
"What the hell?!" shouted Geet, trying to take her hand away.
Suddenly he realized what he was about to do. He slowly let go of her and looked at her angle-like face. For a moment a felt as if he was holding a fairy, and she was so close to him! What's happening to me? Why did I get a strange feeling when I did that?
His thoughts were interrupted when he heard Geet shout his name out.
"Mayank!!" Shouted Geet.
"Huh? Oh Sorry Darling! I Don't know what happened to me then" said Mayank making a cute face.
"Whatever Mayank But don't you dare do that again!" said Geet and walked past him in quick steps.

"Hmm Mayank, You're Going crazy Dude!" Said Mayank as he slapped his head from the back and walked the opposite direction.




His eyes couldn't take what he saw. How could anyone touch Her?! How dare he! She's Mine! Only Mine!
He was about to knock this guy's head off if he kept holding her for even longer. But he managed to control his anger as he saw she herself had pushed him away. Yeah That's good!

It was quite dark outside and Geet was walking alone. She was walking through the same Alley which she came from and was just about to reach the pavements when a strong hand grabbed her by the waist and pushed her against the wall. She was about to scream when the guy wrapped his free hand on her mouth, preventing her from screaming. She couldn't exactly see who it was but she knew it was guy. He removed his hand from her waist and took out a lighter from his pocket. Thinking she could push him since he had let go of his hand from her waist, she pushed him back but instead he came even closer by putting his weight on her. She felt like as if her ribs would break! She didn't even get the chance to keep a distance between the two, he was so close to her. With one hand on her mouth and the other with the lighter, he lit it. Making it a bit easier for her to see who he was.

*Guys You know in kis desh main hai mera dil, when Prem gets Heer, he had done the same thing with the lighter..hope you can remember how it looked ..*

Her eyes were wide open as she was desperately trying to see who it was. He brought the lighter a little closer and both had an eye-lock. *Maaahhhiii!!!*
He realized he was going to break her bones *Duhhh!* so he had loosened a bit but still he had her stopped from going anywhere.
She was so scared, her eyes were showing how scared she was. She didn't bother to look at him closely. She didn't bother to look how God Damn Hot He Was!!! *Sorryyy I had To Add That* She didn't bother to look at his amazing features, perfectly done, almost feminine. *Loolzz His eyelashes Are soo Long!! Humppphh Me Jealous!!*
She didn't bother to see any of that. All she knew was that he had her trapped at a lonely Alley! Wondering what he'll do next!
She tried to scream, but couldn't as he had her mouth covered. She tried to push him but of no use, it was like hitting a brick wall.
"Don't Bother, It's not gonna help" he said.
She was screaming but it was unheard.
"Oh Godd!!!! Who the hell is he?! What does he want?! And why meee?!!! Shahrukhhh Bachaaaooo!!! Oh My Super Man My He-Man!! Come and rescue me!!! I'm gnna Cry!! Oh Godd Why Can I not get him off me?!!" she thought in her head. Unknowingly she started crying which shocked Him.
He wasn't sure what to do.
"Don't cry" he said softly.
Unknowingly he took his hand off her mouth which again gave her a chance to do something.
She screamed as loud as she could, making his ear drums vibrate vigorously . He closed his eyes and at once, covered her mouth with his. *Haila!!! First KISS?!!*
She was so shocked! He HAD just kissed her! Well he WAS kissing her! She pushed him back but couldn't do so. She punched him on his chest but it was of no use. Has he lost it?!
"OH MY GOD!!! What the hell?!!!! Omggg My first kiss?!! With this guy?!! And I don't even know if it is a guy! Omg OMG OMG!!! Arghhh!!!!" her mind screamed.
Tears rolled down her eyes as she continued kicking him and punching him but to no use. He was too strong.

He couldn't stop now, he couldn't control himself. This will teach her a lesson! Messing With MAAN SINGH KHURRANA! She just ripped my ear drums out of my ears!
He continued kissing her *forcefully that is* until he saw her sobbing, well crying like mad. Tears were rolling down uncontrollably. That's when he realized he had gone too far. He stopped and unwillingly let go of her *lips*.
She gasped for air and more over fresh air!
She was in a shock, going into coma any moment.
"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!" She screamed.
"A Kiss?" Replied Maan with a smirk.
"Yes I know that but..WHY?!" She asked again.
"Umm Cz You wouldn't shut up?" he replied again with a smirk.
"Ughh! God! I thought Mayank was bad but you! Unbelievable!" she Said .
Hearing that name, He froze at his spot. "Who's Mayank?" he asked with a serious look.
"Why? You're Gonna Kiss Him As well?" she asked without trying to be funny.
"What?! No! Tell Me Now! Who is this Mayank?" He asked again, getting angry.
"Nahi Bataaon Gi! Huh! After what you've done to me, do you expect me to be even talking to you?! Or standing here and looking at your face?!" She said annoyed and angry.
He didn't say anything but instead, he came a little closer to her. She stepped back looking at him come this closer. When he had let go of her, she had moved quite far from him to prevent another attack like that happening.
She saw him coming even closer to her, so she made a run for it. But before she could take at least 2 steps, he held her wrist and dragged her closer to him. She twirled when he did that *you know how Maan did it in the show*. She pushed him back but he was not letting her go.
"Why..Don't You Let Me GO!!!!" She screamed.
"Because you're supposed to be answering me!" he replied equally as loud as her.
"Well at least keep a distance!" she said in hushed voice *Maan made her go quiet Olalala LOL*
He laughed and said "What's happened to you voice? Did the screaming eat it?"
"N..Noo" she said quietly.
Now he was satisfied with her behaviour so he let her go slowly.
She quickly tried to run but again he held her wrists and thins time he didn't waste any time. He dragged her from there and headed towards his car.
"What are you doing?!" she shouted.
She tried to free her hands but he wasn't letting her go.
"Where the hell are you taking me?!" she asked, still pulling her hand away.
"Where you're supposed to be!" he said simply.
What was he up to?! Is he mental or about to be?! Geet thought as she struggled to free herself from his strong grip.


Okay So Tell Me How It Is And If I Should Continue With It.😳
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Oh and wohooo Rozie's back before i even posted it!!😃


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Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Okay Guyz! Sooo Sorry For The Delay!
I Have To Tell you all that after this Update, i'm going to be less active for at least 5-6 Months because😭😭 My exam results came and i seriously got a shock!😭 for my English i received a D! When i was targeted B/C!😭 And this will stay with me forever unless i work my socks off for the next few months left in school😭 So I'm Updating today but my next update will be after a long time. If i have time then i might try to update during the half term holidays etc but i seriously need to revise cz when i was supposed to revise, i didn't and the result is that My friends say i'm naturally clever but i'd say i'm naturally dumb!😡 Sorry Guyz I Hope You Understand😭
Okay Enough Of My Complaints Here's The Next Chapter And I've Made It As Long As Possible😳 Do Comment And II Will PM If I Can😳 Actually I'll Just Pm 😆

Enjoy My D Grade Chapter😭 What Am I Saying! It's Not Even Worth a D!


Chapter6

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Geet: What do you want?! Put me down!!
Maan: How many times do I have to tell you NO!
Geet punched him on his back with both her hands since they were tied together, but it didn't help.
She moved her legs to kick him on his face, but he held her legs together as well, with his hands.
"Hold still You ninja!"he shouted.
"Warna kya?!!"she shouted back.
He stopped walking.
"Uh Oh"she murmured.

Now The Rest:
Uh-Oh was the right thing to say at the moment.
"Umm...Why Did You Stop...?" she asked, confused
"You want me to walk then?" he mocked.
"Uhhh...No Not Really! You stopped walking so I thought maybe you just suffered another attack!" she said sarcastically.
"But if you ARE going to put me down then...go on" she said nicely, trying to fool him.
He didn't say anything. Instead, he started walking again.
"Ahh Nuts! Geet! You're Soo Stupid!!" she scolded herself, while Maan Listened *Self Talks 😆* And Smiled.
He walked fast while carrying her with ease.
Soon they were home *Homee? Apna Ghar? 😆*
He came to the front side of the house, more like the mansion and stopped as he saw an eager Dadima Running towards him but stopped instantly.

What she saw was shocking. A Girl Hanging Onto Maan Like he's just kidnapped her.
Because she was kicking and moving about.
"Dadi ma It's Nothing like that!" said Maan, after looking at her horrified expression.
"Dadima?" Repeated Geet, slowing down her kicking process.
Dadima was just standing there, mouth wide open. What the hell was Maan thinking?! she thought. Bringing a girl like THAT! On his back! she continued.
"MAAN! What the hell do you think you're doing?! Put Her Down! Now!!" she shouted, coming closer.
"Yeah! Put Me Down NOW!" Repeated Geet.
Maan huffed and puffed and put her down irritatingly. Geet gave him a glare before turning to Dadima.
"Hello Beta" Said Dadi Maa.
Geet stood there stunned while Maan Looked here and there, Mad at her for being so stupid.
"Na..Naa..Namasstee.." She stammered.
"Oh Beta You Don't Have to worry!" she glanced at Maan.
"Come" she held her and brought her in the house *Ooppss I mean the Mansion*
Geet thought "What the heck? Okay At least This creep won't attack me in front of his Dadima"
She sat down and so did Dadima. Maan just leaned on one of the sofas.
"Hmm So tell me What's your name?" asked Dadima
"Uhh'Umm..G..Geet" she stammered. 'Great! Now she wants to know my name! And you Ghadi! You just told her!'
"Hmmm So That's Her Name, Nice. Makes a great name..MaanEet" Thought Maan
"Nice Name Dear, I see my grandson has petrified you to death! You look so pale!" Said Dadima, holding her hand. Maan gave her a glare.
"Haan..Nahii'Uhhh" she didn't know what to say
Before Geet could say anything, Maan interrupted "Uh Dadi, Ask her where she lives'"
Both looked up at him in shock.
"Kya?" both asked at the same time.
"God Dadi! I Told you before I didn't know who she is! Still you're giving me those looks!" Thought Maan.
"Uhmm Dadi..I Mean Ma'am ..Can I go home?" asked Geet pleadingly.
"Ah Beta I know you're scared but you don't need to be!" encouraged Dadima.
Geet: Huh?! I Shouldn't Be?! I SHOULDN'T Be?! He Literally Kidnapped Me And I shouldn't be scared?!
Dadima: Geet Beta? You Okay?
Geet: Huh? Oh Umm Please Can I Go? My Family Will be waiting for me
Dadima: Oh, Um Maan Beta
Maan: Ji Dadi?
Dadima: Could You drop her off Please?
Maan was all set to go.
"NO!" Shouted Geet.
Both looked at her amazed.
"I Mean..I can go alone walking. Why trouble Mr.Thur..I mean Khurana" she managed to say.
"No, I'm dropping you off" Ordered Maan.
"Par-" she couldn't finish. Maan was walking towards her.
Geet stood up to defend herself behind Dadima who also stood up.
"Maan! Calm down!" shouted Dadima.
"Geet Beta, just go with him Okay? I Promise he won't do anything, He's just bad tempered." Dadima Assured Geet.
With no other option, Geet walked outside followed by Maan.
"I Thought I would get away with this but no! It's gone even worse!" she mumbled.
"This is just the beginning" said Maan from behind, leaning down to her ear and whispering which made her shiver.
She didn't dare turn around, instead she made her towards the Officially Broken car.
"Oh No! How am I gonna get home?" she acted like she was so shocked, deep inside she was jumping in joy.
"Miss Geet, I have several other cars and this one you're looking at is all because of you!" he said, looking at her intently.
She rolled her eyes and waited.
"The car?" she asked.
"Over there" he pointed.
"My Bag?" she asked again.
"Here" he pointed towards his left side of the blazer.
"Ohhh no wonder you looked fat! Like you were Pregnant!" she mocked.
"GEET!" He shouted.
"Okay Okay! Give it here!" she demanded.
Maan: Dare you Take it from me *Walking towards her*
Geet: I'm'Gonna Take it off you but you have to stop doing that! *Walking backwards*
Maan: Doing What? *Still walking towards her*
Geet: Th..Th..This'.*Walking Back*
Before she could walk backwards any further, he grabbed her by the waist, crushing her to him.
She closed her eyes and didn't dare to look at him *Too tall Na 😆 her head reaches his chest!*
She tried pushing him away but he wouldn't budge, instead he grabbed both of her hands and placed them behind her back. She couldn't escape then.
"No one asks Maan Singh Khurana, he simply knows" said Maan in a husky voice. Geet Felt her stomach was full of butterflies. She struggled to free herself.
He held her both hands in his one hand and with the other he reached for his blazer.
"You wanted this?" he asked, well whispering into her ear.
She moved a little, feeling his breath on her face.
He slowly let her go and gave her the bag.
"Chalo" he said .
Geet put her hand on her heart and made a face "By God! Is he crazy or what?" she muttered as she pulled out her tongue behind him and made way towards the passenger seat. Then stopped and decided to sit at the back.
Maan was already in the car, he looked at how she changed her mind and sat at the back. He got out of the car and got into the back seat with her.
"What are you doing?!" she shouted, moving back
"What are you doing?!" he said, angry and coming closer.
"Uhh Who's Gonna Drive? Or Are you like some sort of James Bond whose car drives by itself?" she said stupidly.
"Shut Up Geet! You know what I can do!" he warned.
Without any delay, he yanked her out of the car and placed her back to the front seat.
Before closing the door he said "Don't you dare come out or else!"
He came around and sat on his seat.
She didn't bother fighting with him, not when she's alone with him.
He started the drive.
"Uhmm'do you even know where I live?" she asked innocently.
"Haan? Uhh If you tell me then yes" he said.
She briefly told him where she lived unwillingly and just wished this journey ended fast. It was dragging on. *Just like my FanFic*
At last she was home.
"Victory!!!" she thought.
She got out of the car holding her bag close to her heart Awhhh but in a split second, she was back into the car.
Maan had pulled onto the strap of her bag, making her fall back.
"Now what?!" she hissed.
"Your parents are going to be angry" he started.
"Duh!" she replied.
He ignored her.
"So I'm coming with you inside" he stated.
"What?!" she looked at him shocked.
"Are you crazy?! They'll Kill me!! Yeah I'm late! Yeah they'll get mad but none of that is compared to what my state will be like if they see me with YOU!" She half-screamed.
"Shut Up!" he shouted.
"No!" she shouted back. "Now you go away and I'll handle this myself!"
"Oh Really? Well lets see how you do that!" he challenged.
"Watch Me" she stepped outside the car, with her bag, and made her to her house 'just a house not a mansion.

"Huh! He thinks I'm that weak! Well Maan Singh Thurana, you're going to be disappointed!" she muttered.
He watched her admiringly *God I don't even know if that is a word!*
"She's So innocent! Seriously! How on earth is she going to escape her parent's questions? Don't worry Geet I'm right here, dekhte hain for how long you can keep your challenge" he talked to himself as he folded his arms across his chest.
Geet knew that she'll be in trouble so she had another plan.
Her room is on the front side with a balcony. There's a pipe-like thing and All Geet needed to do was climb. She jumped onto the pipe and climbed up until she was hanging onto the balcony swinging her legs.
"By God! Akki! How on earth do you do this?!!" she struggled to say her self talks.
Her balcony was not that wide in height. At least Geet was able to jump straight into it.
"Haiyaaa!!!!" she said, quietly.
Maan froze at his spot.
"What the heck?!! This girl's crazy!" He shouted, shocked and started his car to leave before getting caught.
"Phew! That was close Geet!" she talked to herself.
"Oh No! What Am I Gonna say to Mum And Dad?!" she thought.




"Pooja! Where is Geet?!!" shouted Mr.Malhotra.
"Dad I Don't Know!" Said Pooja.
"Check Her Room Again!" He Roared.
"Yes Dad" Pooja Headed Towards Geet's Room.
"You Stupid Geet! Tumhaare Saath Saath Main Bhi Mar Gayi Aaj! That Too In Front Of My Hubby!" Pooja Complained as she made her way towards the room.

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OMFGGG!!!! I Was Sooo Lame!!! What A Twat!!🤣


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Going Straight Onto The Chapter No More Bak-Bak From Me😆
P.s I Won't Be Sending PM's Just Yet I'm In A Rush...

Next Chapter Enjoy😳

Chapter 5

Maan ran thinking she had done something but stopped when he saw Ramu Kaka, one of the servants, shaking in fear since he had broken the vase which he was holding a moment ago.
"S..Soo'Soorr..Soorrryyy..S..s'Sii.Sii'Sirr'" was all he could say.
"Ramu Kaka! Clean all this up before I lose my temper!" shouted Maan.
He was relieved it wasn't anything to do with her, but still he couldn't take any risks. He rushed outside thinking everything will be fine but Nahi! He looked at his car, which was now a broken car. The window had been smashed brutally and the glass was all over the floor. He was right, this girl will make him go crazy! He ran to the security guard and shouted "Where did that girl go?!"
Security Guard: S..Sir'That way *Pointing towards the direction*
Maan: WHY DIDN'T YOU STOP HER?!
Security Guard: Sir I just arrived now and all I saw was a broken window and a girl running that way'
Maan: FINE! Let me handle her first, then I'll see you!
The man gulped as Maan ran from there. "Just Wait Till I Get You!" he shouted as he ran to find her.




Geet had a slight hint of where she was at the moment so she ran the way his car had come from, her house would be that way.
She ran as fast as she could and kept looking back in case he was following her. To her relief, he wasn't, Just yet!
"Oh God!!! Why does everything happen to me for?!!" she shouted while running.
Since she was looking back most of the times, she didn't realize where she was heading to. Suddenly, she bumped into someone or something. Geet went flying back! About few feet away from whatever she bumped into.
"Oh Teri..!" she shouted as she stopped herself from falling on the ground.
She looked up to find a group of weird looking guys. She stood there in fury and shouted "Idiot! Dekh Ke Nahi Chal Sakte?!!"
The Guy whom she had bumped into was the only one to speak.
"Ahhh Madam! What are you saying? You're the one who bumped into me.." said the man looking at her from head to toe *Eghhh Checking her out inni*. Geet gave him a glare.
"Ohh Madam Ko Ghussa Agaya!" he laughed and the rest joined him *Boss Ke Chamchas Phu*.
"Why don't you come with us?" he continued.
Geet stood where she was but they kept moving forward. Eventually she had to take few steps back.
"Are you scared?" he asked mockingly.
Geet walked backwards and suddenly laughed a little. More like mocked them with her laugh.
"You think, I'm gonna go begging you to leave me? Like Bachaaoo Mujhe kuch mat karna wagera wagera'well You're wrong mister!" she said it with attitude.
"If you think, I'm gonna cry well you're stupid to think that. Just because I'm a girl doesn't mean I can't do anything" she continued.
The guys just laughed at her thinking she won't really do anything, she's just trying to act big and all.
"Oh Yeah? Well lets see how you can run away from 6 Good looking guys like us!" said the main guy.
"What did you say? GOOD LOOKING?" She started to laugh loud. They all stopped coming towards her and she stopped walking back.
"I'm..Sorry'But Good Looking?" she broke into laughter.
"You're Wrong Dude! Go and look at yourselves in the mirror! You look like pumpkins crushed in an elevator!"she again started laughing as she had just cracked a joke without thinking.
"Wow Geet You're Too Good!" she said to herself, still laughing.
The main guy got angry and in an instant, he caught her left hand tightly. Geet stopped laughing and gave him the You're-So-Dead Look.
"Haath Chor" she said.
"Nahi toh kya?" he said
"Bohot bol rahi thi! Now what's happened to you?" he continued.
"Maine kaha Haath Chor!" she repeated.
"And if I don't?" he said.
Geet had enough! She lifted her right leg and BOOM!
She kicked him alright. The guy stumbled back and was in shock.
"Who wants a piece of me?!!" she shouted as the rest of them gathered around her in a circle.
So this is how it was, Geet in the middle, and the 5 guys surrounding her with the 6th main guy in front of her.
"Wow! One Kick wasn't enough?" she said.
"Shut Up! Now we'll show you who's who!" said the main guy, still holding his stomach. Moments later he stopped holding his stomach.
He came forward and again tried to hold her by hand, this time she PUNCHED HIM! *Muahahahah My Geet Is My Imagination!! Go Geet Go Geet Go Geet!🤣* She punched him on his cheekbone and instantly held her hand as it hurt her badly.
The rest of the guys stood where they were, looking at her take the life out of their boss.
Two of the other guys came forward, one on each side of the main guy's.
"Oye! If You wanna fight, then one by one! Lets see how Manly you are!" she challenged.
The main guy, was holding his cheek and a tear came out of his eye. He stepped back for some time and signalled the one on the left to continue.
The second guy competing with Geet stood in front of her and was about to touch her shoulders when she gave him a tight slap across his cheeks. His face was on the other side and with that, Geet kicked him in the '.so hard he screamed in agony.
"Ewww I can't believe I kicked you there!'.Does it hurt?"she said and asked in mockery.
"Aghhh!!!!!" he screamed.
"Next!" she shouted.
Despite getting beaten up by a girl, they still stood there getting beaten up one by one.
The third guy came forward, ready to be thrashed when suddenly Geet's eyes opened wide and her mouth flung open.
"Haila!! Akshay Kumar ke stunts karte karte I totally forgot Maan Singh Thurana's After Me!!" she said loudly as she saw Maan coming towards her.
She made a small run but the guys had surrounded her!
"Go Away! Let Me Go!" she shouted but they wouldn't move.
It was hopeless to be telling them! She again started with her stunts and slapped the two other guys together. Both held their cheeks in pain. That left two to fight before Maan caught her. At the moment Maan was far far away but Geet had noticed him. *Sharp Eyesight 😆*
"Now Be good boys and let me go! Or else that dude over there, will kill me!" she threatened.
All the guys looked at her and looked at her, and looked at her.
"Oh for crying out loud! I won't fight if you save me from that guy there!" she said, finally giving up.
"Sure?" said the main guy.
"Yeah!!!" she shouted.
"Okay Madam, But next time pleasee don't beat us again!" he said scared.
"Fine!" she said.
"Aha Maan Singh Thurrana! Now we'll see how you can take 6 guys all at once!" she thought.
All the guys gathered around, leaving Geet behind.
"Hmm'I Won't run just yet. I'll run after he's beaten up by 6 Guys!" she said excitedly.
Maan was few feet away from the Goons when he stopped.
He looked at them, panting, and then looked further back to see Geet standing in the middle of the road, smiling evilly, arms folded.
"Oh, so she's hired These Goons to beat me up" he thought. "Well sorry to disappoint you miss but Maan Singh Khurana never loses against a bunch of weird looking guys!" he continued and smirked.
The main guy stood in front of Maan, forcing Maan to remove his intense gaze Off Geet. Maan looked at the guy and instantly grabbed his collar. The guy became furious.
"Don't you dare mess with me" hissed Maan.
"Warna Kya?" said the guy.
"Do you know who I am? Maan Singh Khurana! Do you hear me? MAAN Singh Khurana. And that girl over there is MY WIFE" He replied with rage.
The guy shuddered in fear as he let go of him. "Agar the wife is that hard'imagine him!" he thought.
"Sorry..Sir..Galati Hogayi.." was all he could say.
"Who actually, you're wife beated us up and then told us to beat you up as well." he continued.
Maan could not believe his ears. SHE Beated up these guys?! How is that?
"And..Sirr we were only here because she's told us that if we don't beat you up, she'll beat us up instead.." said the guy.
"Then Hit me." Said Maan.
"Whaat?" he asked.
"I Said beat me up! But remember, keep hitting me gently or else!" he warned.
"But sir..how do we beat you gently?" he asked.
"Oh for god's sake! Just pretend to beat me up and make it look like as if you're hitting me really hard." Maan Ordered.

"Huh? What the heck? Are they fighting or just talking?" said Geet to herself.
Suddenly, she saw Maan falling on the floor.
"Haila! First Punch?! Good Job Pumpkins!" she said loud.
Maan gave him a glare.
"So'sorr'Sorryy Sir" said the guy, petrified.
"Now lemme punch you!" said Maan, as he got up and kicked him in the stomach.
"Arghhh!!!" shouted the man, clearly in pain.
"Now Run!" ordered Maan.
The whole gang ran from there without looking and reached to Geet.
"Madam! Hume Maaf Karo!!" they all said it together and ran from there as fast as they could.
"Oyee!!!! Suno Toh!" she shouted, waving at them.
She realized her plan had flopped. So she made a run for it but before she could even take a step, someone held her tightly by the waist with both hands. Geet froze at her spot and dared not to breathe forget moving.
"You can breathe at least" laughed Maan.
Geet tried to take his arms off him but he wouldn't budge. Instead, he twisted her around so that she was facing him, still holding her with one hand now. She pushed him but he held her even tighter with his left hand.
"Why don't you just let me go?!!" she shouted, punching him on his chest.
Maan didn't say anything. Instead, he started opening his tie with his right hand. Geet stood there shocked.
"Oh God what is he gonna do?!" she thought.
He removed his tie and in an instant, caught both of her hands. He held her both hands and wrapped the tie tightly.
"What?!" she shouted, trying to take back her hands.
"Be a good girl and don't move!" he ordered, wrapping the tie as securely as possible.
She moved and moved but it didn't help.
Finally he managed to tie her up.
"Okay now can I go?!" she asked, taking steps back.
He didn't say anything, instead he lifted her up on his shoulder and headed towards his house, again!
"What the!!! Put me down!!" she demanded.
Maan: No!
Geet: I'll beat you up like I did to those guys!
Maan: Ha! Shut Up!
Geet: What do you want?! Put me down!!
Maan: How many times do I have to tell you NO!
Geet punched him on his back with both her hands since they were tied together, but it didn't help.
She moved her legs to kick him on his face, but he held her legs together as well, with his hands.
"Hold still You ninja!" he shouted.
"Warna kya?!!" she shouted back.
He stopped walking.
"Uh Oh" she murmured.

Okay I Could have continued but i'm in a rush. Do tell me how it was and the Pm's...Sorryy😳


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DAMNNN!!!! Geet was an idiot!!! And I Was A Bigger Idiot!!!🤣

Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Heyy Guyz!! Soo Sorry For Keeping You Waiting! *Maafi*😳
Well Like Last Time, My Neck Is A Pain !!😭 It Really Really Really Hurts!😭 After Posting I'm Taking A Rest😆😛
Okay Enough Of My Bakwaas Here's The Next Chapter. I Know It's Lame But What To Doo😆
And And One More Thing, The Beginning Of The Chapter Is Maan's POV, Like How He Met Her Etc Etc. I Skipped Some Bits Cz It Would Become Repetitive😆
Okay Okay Enough Of Me Here's Chapter 4😳

Chapter 4
Maan was leaving for a business deal with Mr.Sharma When he received a call from his beloved dadi.
"Heyy dadi.."he said in his usual voice.
"Maan beta, where are you?"asked Dadi.
Maan: Dadi you know where I am!
Dadi: No I don't! I don't have ten thousand detectives telling me where you are!
Maan: *Laughs* Dadi I'm on my way to meet Mr.Sharma.
Dadi: Ohhh'.Does he have a daughter?
Maan: DADI Ma! No he doesn't and even if he did I wouldn't tell you!
Dadi: Maan! Why are you doing this? Can't you find a nice girl for yourself?
Maan: Dadi how many times have I told you I'm'.
Dadi: Maan? You there?

Maan stopped talking when he looked out to the window. There she was, looking like an angel. He couldn't take his eyes off her.
"MAAN!" Screamed Dadi ma from the phone.
"Huh? Oh Dadi Maa I'll call you innabit" Said Maan as he quickly ended the call.
"Ohhh So Maan's finally found the right girl" laughed Dadi Maa as she put the phone down.
He told the driver to go back. As the driver slowly went back, the girl had noticed it, she went from there.
"Damn!" he muttered.
"Where does that alley go to?" he asked the driver.
"Umm Sir..there is a College near it, maybe she's going there" the driver said nervously.
"Oh" said Maan. "Well what are you looking at? Take me there!" He said.

Maan had no idea what happened to him, just now. He doesn't like women but why is it that this girl made his heart skip a beat? Maan had no idea what's Going to happen but all he knew was that there's something special about this girl.
He told the driver to take him there and himself rang his Dadi Maa.
"Awhhh So Maan Singh Khurrana Has finally decided to talk to his Dadi" she mocked.
"Dadi! Okay listen, I have..chosen the girl.." he waited for her response.
"KYA?!! Maan I'm soo happy!!" said Dadi Maa in joy.
"And And Dadi Maa I'll bring her to you Soon.." with that he ended the call.
"Hmm now lets see what happens next" he said to himself.

Now he was outside the college and yes, he had seen her going in. He smiled knowingly and signalled the driver to go.

The meeting with Mr.Sharma went fine and then Maan decided to give Geet a surprise. He found out that the college will be finished at 4 so Maan decided to keep himself busy for the day and then do something about this angelic girl.
At 4, he was outside the college when the bell went. He waited for his girl but couldn't find her. He was worried. He was tempted to go inside but stopped himself as this would be inappropriate. No! what if something's happened to her? He was really getting restless so he decided to go in.
He entered the main entrance and asked the receptionist , but wait, what was he to ask? He doesn't even know her name!
He decided it's best if he just stayed outside and waited for her. So he went outside and waited for her in his car.

It was about 5:30 And still she wasn't out yet! Now he was losing his patience so he opened the door and froze at what he saw. His angel with an idiot like him?! *He's referring to Mayank 😆*. He clenched his jaw and squeezed his hand into a fist which made his knuckles go pale. But he couldn't actually go and punch him in the face just because he was talking to her. Suddenly he saw her going closer to him or rather him bringing her closer to himself. That's it, he couldn't take It no more. He walked towards them in fury but stopped as he saw her push that guy. He was relieved. And took few steps back until he was near his car and away from her at the moment.
He saw her walking towards the alley so he followed her. She didn't realize there was a car coming and she was about to go. Before she could even reach the pavements, he grabbed her back and pinned her to the wall.
She was so close to him! But why was she struggling? He wasn't Gonna eat her.
Unknowingly he had let go of her mouth and she screamed her head off. His eardrums were like they could just disappear if she continued screaming like this. Without thinking twice, he covered her mouth with his to stop her from screaming. That was the only way to shut her up. But he couldn't resist kissing her. But wait, did I go too far? Thought Maan. He slowly let go of her even though he wanted it to last forever.
But what is this girl up to?! She tried to run again and again! He thought it was best if he directly took her somewhere else. *Mysteryyy!! 😆*


Present :

"We're Home?" asked Geet.
"WE'RE Home?" she asked again.
"What do you mean We are home?" she asked again and again.
"Umm We're Home" He replied .
"Oh For God's Sake! WHO's House?!" she asked getting irritated.
"Umm I suppose MINE!" He said with a grin.
Geet's eyes were wide open, How dare he take her here!

Geet: What the hell?! Take me to my house right now!!
Maan: Make Me *Leaning forward*
Geet: Okay fine! I'll go by myself!
Maan: Huh! You think I'm that stupid?
Geet: Yeah You are! And I bet you're stupider than what I think of you!
Maan: Yeah Yeah! Say whatever you want! *slight hint of anger but he had to hide it*

Geet was dreading what will happen next. Maan was about to open the door when he leaned towards her and said "Now, Mrs Maan Singh Khurrana, Wait here while I tell someone something very important"
Her mouth was wide open but again she closed it before he did something to her 😆
Maan got out of the car with her precious bag, which had all her gadgets, leaving Geet puzzled.
"What the hell Man?!" she talked to herself.
"First he takes me to nowhere and now he's stolen my bag!!" she continued.
Geet didn't know what to do, she couldn't just sit here doing nothing. She had to do something.
Geet looked at the doors and all were locked, but still tried opening them but failed.
Now she looked through the drawer thingy in front of her and saw a torch inside.
"Aha!" she said out aloud.
She took the torch and obviously she needed some strength, so she thought of the Great Maan Singh Thurrana And CRASH!! She broke the window! There was a slight hole in the middle but the whole window was not yet destroyed. She tried using her tiny fingers to kind of push it forward but it wasn't working so she got the end of the torch and slowly pushed the broken glass outside. Finally it was big enough to fit her through. She stuck her head out first, then she placed her both hands on top of the car, and forced her legs to come out from the car. Now her feet were on the window line while she struggled to keep a firm grip on the car. It was slippery! Still she managed to reach on top of the car.
"VICTORY!!" She screamed,
But she looked down and freaked out to see how high she was!
She slowly slid down the car like her Mr.Stunt Man Does *Akshay Kumar!* and jumped down the car.
"Victory!" she said in a quiet tone as she ran from there.



Meanwhile, Maan had gone inside his mansion to find an eager Dadi sitting on the couch.
"Maan!" she said in excitement.
"Where is she?" she asked looking behind him.
"Dadi Dadi Dadi! Calm down! She's in the car!" he said smilingly.
"Oh My God! Why didn't you bring her in?! Move now I'm going to go and get her!" she said in joy as she made her towards the front door.
"Dadi! Wait! Before you see her, I need to tell you something.." said Maan.
"Not now! Save it after I've seen my Bahu!" she said not even looking at his worried face.
"Dadi! Listen to me first!" he made her sit down on the nearest couch.
"Kya Hai Maan?!" she said getting irritated by his odd behaviour.
Maan sat in front of her, on his knees and began.
"Dadi, I told you that I have chosen a girl for myself but'.I still don't know who she is'" he bit his lower lip.
Dadi's face changed instantly.
"WHAT?!" She shouted, not able to believe him.
"Yes!" he replied innocently and truthfully.
"Maan'I can't believe my favourite Grandson is stupid!" she said shocked but laughing.
"Yeah',,,What?!" he looked at her to find her laughing.
"Dadi! I'm serious!" he shouted.
"I know you are..ahahaha'sorry Beta but I just can't believe you don't know her!" he said in between her laughing sessions.

CRASH!!
What was that? He thought. First thing that came into his mind was her.
Maan looked outside and instantly ran out.
"Oh God This girl's gonna drive me nuts!" he said while running.

Okay Tell Me How It Was And How I Can Improve On It😳


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Daaammnnn!!!! Such A Baby!!! 😆



Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Okay!!!
Now Shall I Reveal WHY I Was Pissed Off?
Okay A Couple Of You Asked Though😆
Well, It Was My Sister's Birthday Yesterday---NO NO NO WISHES FOR HER NOW!!
And She Kept Boasting About Her Presents IN FRONT OF ME!!!
Subha I Woke Up And She Used All The Charge Of My Phone!! And Didn't Charge It Again!!!😡
Got MAD!!!
Phir Upar Aati Hai And Says "Sadiieee Loook!!!" And GUESS What It Was!!!!
DESIGNER HEADPHONES!!!!!!!
THOSE BIG BIG ONES!!!1
MY Ears Are In NEED For Them!!!!!
My Ear Is Frigin DEMENTED!!!!
Poocho Matt Kya Hai Isse!! It's Sooo Ughh!!! Kya Bataaoo!!! I Can't Fit An Earphone In😔 And It Just Pops Out Because My Ears Are Odd😆😭
So Got REALLY MAD And Was In A BAD Mood!!
Itna Bad Mood That I Chewed Furiously And My Tooth Suffered!!!!
Grrr BAD Mood!!!!
Phir Akhi Behen Kis Ki Hai😳 She First Admits She Was Making Me Jealous *I'm The Odd Baby😆* And Then She Gave Them To Meee😃 I'm Sooo Happy Nowww!!! My Ears Are At Peace!!!!🤣

Okay Enough Of That !!
So I Sorta Completed The Second Half Of Chapter 17---Really Chapters Are Like Minni Stories😆 And I Think It Should Be PARTS Instead Of Chapters--Oh Well I'll Stick To Chapters😆

So Without Further Bak-Bak
HERE It It!

Chapter 17-B

Continued---

She started getting ready.

On the other side, Maan was busy listening to her self-talks.

He smiled thinking about the 'date' with his Mishty.

"I Promise, you'll remember this day for the rest of your life" he murmured slowly.


Geet came downstairs really late.

"Geet is the time you were supposed to be here?" Sadhna questioned.

Geet looked at Maan Angrily who was busy munching an apple while sitting on the dining table.

"Sexy, Girls tend to do that. In This Case, Geet does it a lot" Maan interrupted.

'Ughhh I Wanna Kill This Asshole!!!!!!"' she screamed in her head.

"Okay Okay Whatever! Let's Leave now for the Dinner" Pooja said.

All started walking outside.

Maan was still sitting down.

Seeing him unmoved, Geet quickly walked behind Pooja and Sadhna.

"Umm Geet I left my purse in my room, can you get it please?" Sadhna said turning around.

"MUM!!!" Geet whined.

"Geet!" Sadhna said sternly.

"Ughhh Fine!!!!" She started walking back, whizzing past Maan who kept his eyes on her.

She didn't even realize when Both Sadhna and Pooja had gone out of the door, leaving her alone with him.

'Hold On a sec, Wasn't Pooja holding mum's purse?' Geet thought.

Sensing something fishy, she turned around to find no on except Maan.

"Shit!!" She shouted and made a mad dash towards the front door. Dodging Maan who tried grabbing her waist.

'Hell!! He's always fast!! Abh Kya Hua Thurana Ko!' she thought quickly.

She heard him chuckle slightly at her antics.

Stopping at the door she turned around and showed her tongue to him.

"Loser Khurana! Oh Thurana Sorry!" she shouted before running away.

"Just you wait Mrs.Khurana" he smirked and headed outside.

"Mum!!!!!" Geet screamed, running towards the car in which Sadhna and Pooja were about to sit in.

"Uhh Geet you're sitting In Maan's Car" Sadhna smiled at her.

"Mum first of all, I DON'T EVEN WANNA GO!!! BUT STILL I AM!!! And NOW! You're saying I should go in the SAME Car as him?!!! Kya Zaalim Zamaana Hai Babaji!!!" Geet complained looking up.

"Stop being all dramatic and go with Maan now" Sadhna said and instantly sat in the car along with Pooja.

"But'"Geet couldn't finish as she felt a hand encircle her waist from behind.

"Chalain Mrs.Khurana?" He whispered near her ear.

"Move You Idiot!!" she shouted, trying to pry off his hand.

"Say Bye Bye To Sexy And Pooja" he said slowly waving his hand towards Sadhna And Pooja.

"You are such a dog!! I Swear I'm Gonna kill you one day!!" she spoke through clenched teeth.

"Ohh Mishty I'm Already Dead" he murmured near her ear again.

"Hatt!" she shouted and pushed him away.

"Where's your smashed car?! I don't have all day for you!" she shouted frustratingly.

"It's almost NIGHT AND My Car is over there" he pointed towards the direction of his car.

Geet started walking fast as he followed her with hands in his pockets.

'Dusht Dhanav! Abh Issi ke saath Jaana Hoga Babaji!!!!' she murmured as she sat inside the car.



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=85uH-79zd_E[/YOUTUBE]

inteha ho gayi intezaar ki

aayi na kuchh khabar mere yaar ki

yeh hamein hai yakeen bewafaa woh nahin

phir wajah kya hui intezaar ki

The music played in the car.

Maan looked at her occasionally as she looked outside the window

inteha ho gayi intezaar ki

aayi na kuchh khabar mere yaar ki

yeh hamein hai yakeen bewafaa woh nahin

phir wajah kya hui intezaar ki


Maan started humming to it.

Geet tried ignoring him.

baat jo hai uss mein baat woh yahaan kahin nahin kissi mein

woh hai meri bas hai meri shor hai yahi gali gali mein


Geet wanted to close her ears. He was playing this by purpose!!!

saath saath hai woh mere gham mein meri har khushi mein

zindagi mein woh nahin toh kuchh nahin hai meri zindagi mein


Maan knew she was getting annoyed. He smirked.

bujh na jaaye yeh shama aitbaar ki


intehaa...intezaar ki

Geet moved to the other side and turned the music off.

Maan got pissed off and instantly stopped the car.

Turning his head around, he looked down at her with Red eyes.

"Stupid track for A Stupid man!" Geet shouted, crossing her arms over her chest.

Next moment she felt herself in his iron grip.

"Leave me!!!" she shouted, prying his hands off her shoulders.

"Why don't you admit it describes you?" He said slowly, in a deadly voice.

"Why don't you accept that you're mine?!" He spoke hoarsely leaning in closer.

"Leave Me!! I don't accept you!!" she screamed, drumming hers fists on his rock hard chest.

"Oh Really? We'll see about that!" And with that, he sealed her lips with his while she continued to struggle.

Ahhh!!! DONE!!!!!

I Love My Bollywood Songs Even Though Half Of The Lyrics I Barely Understand BUT I Tried😆 I LOVE That Track😳


PRE-CAP De Doon?😉😆 Challo De Deti Hoon Kya Yaad Rakho Ge😆

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Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Okay! I Am Extremely Sorry For the late update but you guyz know the reason na😭
Anyways! I'm here with the next update since my stupid internet wasn't working so i got more time to update😆😛
Now that it works, i can post the chapter!
I Tried my best to make it better but kya karoon! My Writing is a U Grade now!😭
And I'm still writing it up!!
And and i have this mental disorder thing! When my sister commented saying happy birthday, i COULDN'T Reply back to her because i was replying in order! So like after a week i've replied to her😆 Sorry Ameena😳 You know me naa! I'm Mentally Disordered😆
Anyways Enough of me! Here's the next chapter! Enjoy 😳
Oh Oh and few pm's about 12, will be sent by my sister cz my mum's shouting at me!

Chapter7

Re-cap
"Dad I Don't Know!" Said Pooja.
"Check Her Room Again!" He Roared.
"Yes Dad" Pooja Headed Towards Geet's Room.
"You Stupid Geet! Tumhaare Saath Saath Main Bhi Mar Gayi Aaj! That Too In Front Of My Hubby!" Pooja Complained as she made her way towards the room.


Now the rest:
Pooja banged the door open .
"Geet!!!" she shouted, looking here and there.
"Hiyaaa!!!" said Geet while texting.
Pooja looked around to see where that came from.
"Down here!" Said Geet.
Geet was lying under her' bed, like underneath the bed hidden from everyone.
"Geet! What are you doing under there?!! Get Out Now!" shouted Pooja
She dragged her out and held her ear.
"Owww!!" Cried Geet
"Chodo Di!! Dard Ho Raha Hai!!" she begged.
Pooja Let go of her ear and shouted "You stupid Idiot! Kahan thi tum?!"
"Di! Relax!! Main Kahan Thi? Yahi Thi! Under The Bed Heehee" Lied Geet Casually.
"What?!" Asked Pooja, confused.
Geet Nodded Innocently.
"So..You..You Were'DOWN There For HOURS?!" She asked Shocked.
"Hailaa! Has It Been Hours? I Didn't Realize!" Thought Geet.
"Uh Haaan!!! I Accidentally Slipped Off The Bed While Texting So When I Was About to get up, I received a text..and I shifted under the bed instead with my Ipod To Listen To Some Good Tunes Hehee" Lied Geet.
Pooja Could Not believe her ears. So she was under there texting?! Weird..
"Uffooo!! Di!! Wake Up!!" Shouted Geet, Shaking Pooja From The Shoulders.
"Huh? Uhh..Youu Fool! Idiot! Gadhi! Ullu! You could have just told me that you're in your room! Patta Hai I had to hear Dad's scolding!" Pouted Pooja.
"Awhhh Dii!Sorry! You know naa when I'm sooo into the music I forget everything!" said Geet, hugging Pooja.
"Oh Not Again! Don't tell me you were imagining yourself with Shahrukh/Salman/Akshay! Dancing And Stuff!" Said Pooja.
"Hehee Yeahhh That's Why I'm Sooo Dreamyyy" Said Geet, Getting All Dreamy.
Pooja Rolled her eyes.
"Achcha Chal! Dad's SuperMad At You Today!" Warned Pooja.
"Kyaaa?!!! Hailaaa!! No No Noo I'm Not Going Downstairs!" Said a now scared Geet.
"Chal Na!! You have to! Warna he'll come in here! And By God If he comes in here you're doomed!" Said Pooja, Warning Geet.

Geet Had A Massive Room. Massive room means more space! On one wall which faces her everyday when she gets up, is COVERED With Salman/Akshay/Shahrukh Pictures!. Most Are Shirtless 🤣. While The rest are like..not that exciting as that wall. One wall has the family pictures Pheww. And the rest are reserved Hehe.

"Uh Too.To..Tohh.Tohhh! Mujhe Kya koi darr lag raha hai! I'm Not scared! Jo Bhi Chaahe Mera Paagalpan Dekh Sakta Hai!!!!!!!!!" She shouted Twirling Around, Trying to be cool.
"Haha! Very Funny! When he comes then you'll know!" warned Pooja as she turned around.
"Okay Baba!! I Don't want him coming into my room ever!!" Said Geet, Scared what he'll do if he finds out she loves 3 Guys who are almost his age or older and ARE Better Looking😆
"Pooja You do know I love Some other guys except These Three Right?" Asked Geet as she walked towards the door.
"Hmphh..Haan I Know you Love some other guys! You have 2 categories, one is the Bollywood film Celebrities and the other is the Tv celebrities'And Blah Blah Blahh! Now shut up or else! Shouted Pooja.
"Achcha then when one day eventually he'll find out my craziness so will you be kind enough to tell him there's other People whom she likes and they are better looking than him too!" Shouted Geet, angry that her Dad Disapproves her Love for So Many Guys.
"Shut Up! Are you being nice or just fooling yourself?!" Asked Pooja getting irritated.
"Lets just shut up and face Your Dad!" Shouted Geet.
"He's Your Dad Too!" Argued Pooja.
"Well He's Nothing Like Me, Agar Hote Toh he would have not turned me into Anarkali and chipko-oed me into a wall of barriers" Mumbled Geet.
They Both walked down the stairs.
Their Dad was fuming!
"Woah! Dad! Wassup?" Asked Geet calmly.
"Wassup?! What is up with you?!" He Roared.
"Uhh Dad Calm Down Naa!" She said innocently.
"No Geet! Where the hell were you?!" he demanded.
"Dad I was upstairs!" She said it ever so innocently with those huge eyes.
"Oh Really? Then how come we never knew?" he said, a bit calmer now.
"Dad, main na text kar rahi thi toh main gir gayi, then when I received another text I stayed down there and shifted under the bed and then I was so lost I didn't realize what time it was" She talked like a baby and it was so innocent anyone could believe her nonsense.
Everyone just stared at Geet including Vansh. *Saali Pe Nazar?!!
And Suddenly they all cracked up with laughter.
Geet just looked at them, like has she said some seriously funny joke that they're laughing like mad?
"Uhmm You can stop laughing now, I didn't crack a joke" she said annoyingly.
"Geet..Tum..Gir..Gayii Ahahahahaha!" Said Her Dad In Between his laughs.
"Haan Toh? Its Not Funny!" She stomped her way back into the room while they laughed even harder as her entire back was covered with talcum powder.

"Huh! Haste Hain! Waise Geet You're Amazing! At least Tu Bach Gayi!" Said Geet while entering her room and closing it with a BANG.

"Ahhh Iss Ladki Ka Kya Hoga?! She's Soo Careless And Funny!" Said Pooja and everyone agreed.




Maan Drove Home but his mind was somewhere else.
"What is wrong with me? After whatever happened in the past, I lost trust in women but why her? What is it that I can't figure out about her? And When the hell did I plan to get Married to her? I mean what if she turns out to be like..NO! If she ever does that then she'll Know the consequences." his mind argued and in the end he decided that "She's Gonna be nothing like 'her' and IF She even tries to then she'll face the consequences! Okay that means I'm getting Married to her As Soon As Possible!"
With that he arrive home to his lovely Dadima.

"Drop kar aye Sherni Ko?" she teased.
"Haan Dadi! Now stop teasing me and start the preparations" he said.
"Koun si preparations?" Asked Dadima, but somewhere she had a slight idea what he was on about.
"Shaadi Ki!" He Said.
Dadima gave a big smile and hugged Maan.
"Omg Beta I'm so Happy For You!" She said, hugging him tightly.
"Achcha Dadi! I Know! Now can you let go off me? I'm suffocating" he complained.
"Sorry" She let go of him.
"But beta You have to first ask for the Rishta!" She reminded him.
He looked at her shocked. What is that? Isn't it just straight to Shaadi?
"Idiot! Kal Hum Unke Ghar Jaake Rishta Fix Karte Hain Okay?" She Said Directly.
"Haan And Then We'll Get Married Tomorrow Too" He replied.
"Maan! First You and me are going to her house an ask for her hand" She started.
"Why Hand? Why not Her?" He asked.
"Oh Shut Up Maan! Tumhe Seriously Kuch Nahi Patta Hai!" Said Dadima.
"Yeah That's Because I've Never Gotten Married Before!" He Replied.
"Okay Whatever! Yeah Then We Fix The Wedding Date And THEN You'll Get Married!" She told him.
"But Dadima Make Sure Its Not Like Months or Weeks!" He Pouted.
"Kyunn Badi Jaldi Ho Rahi Hai Tumhe!" She Teased.
"Dadima!"
"Maan!"
"Okay then Tomorrow we'll go Okay?" Said Dadima as Maan left for his master bedroom.
"Geet, I Can't wait now. Not Months Not Weeks But In Few Days, You'll Be MINE. And Your Dream of running away from me will stay as Just A Dream.." Said Maan In His Mind as he changed his clothes and wore almost..NOTHING!🤣


Pooja had decided not to sleep in Geet's room today because she knew what was going to happen. So she stayed in her own room with her Hubby.
Geet had now changed her clothes and wore shorts and a sleeveless shirt.
"God! Why couldn't anyone tell me I had talcum powder all over my back?! And how did it land on the floor?! Ughhh Pooja!! I'm Gonna get you for this!" she complained.

She slid into her bed and thought "God! What a hectic day! And that Maan Singh Thurana! How dare he! And now he even knows my Address! I'm Gonna have to change my house, Haan We'll go Mumbai! But I'm Going to have to explain to Dad! What shall I say? Uh Dad I Wanna Go Mumbai Cz there's some weirdo who's after me! What comes next? Baaaghooo!! I'm Soo Much In trouble if I say anything! Oh God! Pleasee I Don't want that Guy following me! And Okay if he does then..Thenn..Kya Karoon Babaji? Koi baat nahi Geet! I'll simply tell him to buzz of! And Agar tu 6 gundas ko maar sakti hai toh woh kya cheez hai! Haan That should do it! One alternative to million!" With that she fell asleep and forgot to put her alarm on.


Maan Woke Up and stretched his arms. He was sleeping facing the pillow, on his stomach.
"Ahhh! Good Morning Maan! Ooopss I Better Stop saying that! Cz Someone else will do that for me Hehe" He talked to himself.
He had a shower and came out with just a towel wrapped around his waist *Thud!*
"Oh Maan You're So Hot Did You know that?! Kaashh I could go like this outside to meet her parents but kya patta who na fidaa ho jaayein instead Ahaha" he joked around.
Finally he got ready and came down for breakfast.
Dadima was sitting waiting for him.
"Maan Beta, jaldi se have your breakfast then we'll leave. Aur haan, You're not going Office today." Said Dadima while eating.
"Haan Dadi I Rang them and have already told them what to do" Said Maan also eating.
Finally they both finished and were ready to leave.
"Geet, I'm Coming!!" Said Maan In His Mind as he drove with Dadi on the back seat.




Geet woke up facing the pillow too. She yawned and stretched her small arms.
"Owww!" She complained eyes wide shut.
"Why Am I always facing the pillow when I wake up?!" She complained.
She slowly got up and was satisfied that she had slept enough for her tiredness to vanish.
She lazily went to the bathroom and brushed her teeth and washed her face.
She came outside feeling fresh.
Then suddenly her eyes went big.
"Omg..What'Time'Is'.It..?" she said each word slowly.
Then she looked to her left and saw the clock.
"OMGGG!!!! 12 O'clock!! " She screamed.
She went screaming down the stairs.
"WHY DIDN'T ANYONE WAKE ME UP!!!" She ran down the stairs and ran to find her mum.
"MUUUM!!! MAMAAA!!!! DAAAD!!! POOO!!!!! WHY DIDN'T ANYONE WAKE ME UP?!!!!" She screamed everywhere and didn't care to look at anything or..anyone.
"AHHH I'M LATEEE!!!!!!" She kept screaming until she saw 2 familiar faces sitting on the sofa along with Mum, Dad, Pooja And Vansh who all stared at her.
"ARGHHH!!!" She screamed again and ran up the stairs.


Okay Do Comment As It Helps And You Guyz Are Sooo Funny! I Crack Up When I Read The Comments About The Story😆
Next Update Will Not be Posted quickly...maybe a month
xx


EDIT
Yeah A Month
A Month hat Turned Into 6-7 Months😆

Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Heyy!😃 Okay I've Written The First Chapter. Grrr My Brain Is Always Making Me Go In Details!😆
Okay Anyways Here's Chapter 1 Enjoy😳

Chapter 1

*Jadoo Teri Nazar...Khushboo Teraa Badan..Tu Haan Kar Ya Na Kar Tu Hai Meri GEET!* Bzzz*Song Changes* Hooo Churaa Ke Dil Meraa GEET Chaliii* Song Changes Again* Yahaan Bhi Hoga Wahaan Bhi Hoga Abb Toh Saare Jahan Main Hoga Kya? GEET Ka Jalwa Jalwa Jalwa* BOOM!!
Shahrukh: Tum Meri Ho G-G-G-Geet!
Akshay: Abhe Bachche Ki Jaan Lega?! Geet Meri Hai!
Salman: Dude! She's Mine!
Mine Mine Mine Mine mine Mine Mine Minee!!!!
ARGHHH!!!! Screamed Geet as she woke up from her dangerous dream, Making Pooja *Sister* Jump Up As Well.
Pooja: GEET WHAT HAPPENED?!
Geet: Huh? Di!! Omg You Won't Believe It!
Pooja: Geet Tell Me Na!
Geet: Omg My Shahrukh, Akshay And Salman Were Fighting Over Me!!! One Was Saying Geet Is Mine Mine Mine And The Other Was Saying She's Mine Mine mine!!
Pooja Started Laughing. She couldn't believe What she had just said!
Geet: Di!! I'm Telling The Truthh Na! They were Gnna Kill each other over me Haila!!
Pooja: *Laughing* Geet You're Mad!
Geet: *Giggling* Hehe I Know I Know
Pooja: Totally Mad!!
Geet: *Still Giggling* Yeah Yeah I Know That Too!
Pooja: Actually Mad! *Laughing Even Louder*
Geet: *Laughs At First But Then Stops* What?! Dii!!
Both were running around hitting each other with their pillows *that never seem to rip apart huh!😆*
"Okay! Okay Sorry Baba! Forget All This! You're Getting Late For College!" Shouted Pooja.
"Ohh Damn It! Wait And Watch Poo! I'm Gnna Get You Soon Muahahahahah!!" Said Geet *Like In A Funny Tone*
Pooja: Grrr Stopp Calling Me That! You Know I Hate That Name!!
Geet: Well Tough! I've Already Said It Ha!
Pooja: GEEET!
Geet: POOJA!!
Both started laughing then Pooja reminded her that she's supposed to be in college! With no further delay, she ran into the bathroom to take a shower for a fresh new day. *Ohhh Fresh New Day? 😆*

Geet Lives In Delhi But Wants To Visit The Whole World *Home Of MSK 😆* And she's always tried to convince her parents to shift her here and there but they don't seem to agree with this.*Duhh! Shifting Everywhwere?!*
Her Parents want Geet to have the best education so that she can be successful in life and want her to get married just like Pooja did few years ago. But Geet doesn't Want to get married just yet. *Waiting For Her Dream Man Na😆*. She wishes to study for now and leave for work as soon as possible.

Geet was out of the bathroom, singing Mere Khwabon main jo aye *Same like Kajol, The way she had a towel on and is singing etc etc*
She dried her hair and wore a Suri Sequin Vest In Purple-ish Colour With white slim jeans *Ughhh What names!!*. She left her hair open *Naturally Straight* and rushed downstairs.
"Woahhh!! Look At You!" Said Pooja.
"Shut Up Di!" Shouted Geet.
"Beta! Is that how you talk to your big sister?" said Geet's Mum.
Geet: Mum!! You know she's always teasing me!
Pooja: Yeahh But I'm Still Older Than You *Pat On Her Back 😆*
Geet: Humph! Dekh Loon Gi Tumhe!
Pooja Laughed While she served everyone Including her husband, Vansh *They've Come to her house for few days*.
"Okay Mum I'm Getting Late! Bye Dad! By POO! And Byee Jiju!" Said Geet and rushed out of the house.
Pooja To her Vansh "Dekhna, she'll come back in few moments". Vansh Smiled.
And That's what happened, Geet came back to get her scarf and her bag.
"Kabhi Toh Yaad Se Le Jaya Karo!" Teased Pooja.
"You!" Geet was in a rush so she just left the conversation incomplete*Baad Main Dekh Loon Gi!*

Okay I'm taking the story somewhere else and almost all of it is just made up like now! I Think and write at the same time 😆

Meanwhile, someone else was in a rush as well.
"Mayank!!" Shouted His Mum While tidying up his room which was a mess! *Boys Boys Boys 😆 What Am I On About?!! My Room Looks As Though Someone's Been Murdered!!*
He was still sleeping, face on the pillow and back facing his mum *Ulta Soh Raha Tha 😆*. He opened his eyes lazily and slowly stretched his arms, showing his muscles *Hailaa That Takes me back when Mayank was introduced in Miley Jab Hum Tum!*
"Mayank! You're Getting Late Beta! Ullu Ka Patha! Gadha!" Shouted His Mum.
Mayank Was awake now and he could sense that his mum is really angry at him.
"Kya Mum? First You Said Beta, then you went mad at me!!" Said Mayank While Laughing.
Mayank: Okay Okay I'm Sorry! I Promise I'll come early every night. Okay?
Mum: Mayank Why do you do that? Staying out late!
Mayank: Come On mum! You know the reason na
Mum: Still Beta, Please Why can't you spend some time with me?
Mayank: Because You Remind Me Of Everything I Want To Forget.
With That he stood up and went to the bathroom, leaving his mum disappointed.
"Come On Come On!!" Shouted Geet In Frustration. She was waiting for the bus for the past 5 minutes and was getting late as well.
"Oh God! Stupid Bus! Looks Like I'm Gnna Have To Go Walking Again!" she said and started walking towards her college.
She was walking along the roads with her Ipod playing her favourite songs.
"Zor Ka Jhatka Hai Zoroon Se Lagaa Haan Lagaa'" She was humming the songs forgetting that she's getting late! She was about to cross the roads when suddenly one of the passing cars slowed down in front of her. She didn't really bother to look, so she walked around the car and crossed the road.
She again started walking, when the same car followed her slowly *like at the speed of someone walking*. This time she looked at the car, it was the same car! She stopped her music, kept her Ipod in her bag and crossed the roads again. This time that car wouldn't follow her since she was going through an alley *you know the ones where cars cant go through*.
"Huh! Looks Like Someone just fell in love with me!" Laughed Geet as she walked a little faster since she didn't want to get late.
Poor Girl, What has destiny in store for her'


Okayy That's It For Todayy. Do Tell Me How It Is And If I Should Continue With It Or Not😳

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Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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I Don't Think I Can Continue Today.
In A Foul Mood And My Mind Ain't Working Properly.
So Posting The First Half Now And Will Post The Other Part When I'm Feeling Calmer.

Don't Want You Guys Waiting, So Just Posting It Now.

So Like I Say, Read And Do Whatever You Want

Here's Part 17
17A Really--I'll Post The Rest Of This Part once I'm done with it and when I'm In better Mood

For Now Here It Is


Chapter 17-A


Re-cap:

"Uhhm…How can I change when you're here..?" she spoke meekly.

"Hold on let me correct my statement; Now be a good girl and get changed in front of me" he replied, folding his hands across his chest.

"Maan!" she shouted, utterly shocked at his bold attitude.

Now the rest:

"What the hell! Leave first!" she shouted.

"No Mishty" he smiled naughtily and leaned down.

"In.Front.Of.Me.NOW." He said every word slowly leaning in closer as he placed his hands on either side of her.

"Maan Leave now!" she said quickly, trying to put a brave face.

"If you don't change, I'll do the honours" he said huskily.

"What?!!!" she almost screamed.

"Umm Lemme show you" before she could react, he was again inches away from her with his hands behind her back.

"Maan leave me!!" she squirmed under his hold.

"Na-Uh First either change yourself or I'll do it" he whispered near her lips.

"Maan please" she looked into his with her big innocent ones, telling him not to be this Zaalim on her.

"Hmm…Theek hai, you don't have to change in front of me" he said moments later.

She sighed in relief which was only short lived.

"But on one condition" she heard him say.

"Kiss me" he ordered.

'Oh No! Phirse Serial Kisser Mode Main Agaya Kamina!!"' she thought.

"When I'm around you I can't control" he whispered huskily.

'Haaawww he can read my thoughts tooo Kaminaaa!!!!!!' she thought again.

"I'm waiting" he said.

Closing her eyes she leaned forward but quickly jumped back.

"Don't touch me!" she ordered, opening her eyes quickly.

"As you say Ma'am" he replied cheekily, raising his hands and placing them behind his back.

After a lot of thinking, she leaned forward.

'Only a peck only a peck Geet!! Nothing else!!' she chanted in her head.

She stopped and looked around.

'Ahaa!!!!' she thought, the bulb eventually lit up!

"Close your eyes too!!" she shouted.

"They're closed Mishty" he replied.

She mentally kicked herself.

Eyes closed, hands behind his back, this was it!!

She made a mad dash towards the bathroom only to be yanked back into his embrace.

"Trying to trick Maan Singh Khurana are you?" he chuckled slightly.

"Kiss me" he repeated.

Having no other option, she leaned forward to place a quick peck on his 'M' Shaped lips.

"Not so fast" she heard him say before he slammed his lips atop hers.

'Arghhh You serial kisser!!!!!' she mumbled to which he chuckled slightly.

*DETAILS Ki Baat Matt Karnaa!!!! Maar Daaloongi!!!!!!! I'm Gonna Open a Campaign!!! KISS KO BAN KARO!!!!! 🤣 All Are Welcome 🤣*

She pushed him away when she was out of breath.

"Ho Gaya?!! Now get lost!!" She pushed him out of the room while he tried all ways touching her at various places *don't ask! He wanted to kiss her that's all 😆*

She closed the door on his face but he was too quick.

"Jaane se pehle listen up, Get ready fast as we're going. And If you're not ready, then you know what ican do right?" he smirked.

"Shut Up! I'm going with my family! So fine!! Wait all your life!!" with that she shut the door forcefully.

"Ughhh!!! Dusht Dhanav!!! Chal Geet! Ready Ho Ja!! At least Iss Serial Kisser Ke Satth Akeli Nai Ja Rahi haina!" she talked to herself and started getting ready.



I'm Not Like Posting One Half While The Other Is Somewhere Typed Up. THIS Is ALL I've Typed.
And Having Like More Than 2 Stories Does My Head In.

So Yeah, This Is Incomplete But Will Finish It Off Soon Enough.

Sadiie x

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