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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime


Ok...will you accept by ice crystal crown...Yes it is ice, meaning maintenance...but what comes for free in this world...and when it comes to relationships, it means there are loads and loads of maintenance....and tune ups...something that will remind you that everything needs to be cared for the right way...nothing less...nothing more...
Let me know...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Time for NY update Day 3:
I checked out Geet first thing in the morning. Totally impressed with the CV's today. After a very long time, the screen sizzled with Maan and Geet. I really cant count RTM sequence because, it was very much intentionally put in where the CV's were trying to show that their relationship could take a turn for better or for worse. The last time, this chemistry was seen only for the Kehna hi Kya Jhumka scene. They were close, there was every intention to kiss, but nothing happened. What can I say, I had to remind myself to breathe today after watching those 12mts of passionate proximity between Maan and Geet. That was totally the best saturday ever.

After Geet, I got ready and left for the city. Took the PATH as always and then a cab to MoMA. What can I say? In all the five floors of exhibits, only one floor was worth the $20 I paid as entrance fee. I could totally be wrong...dont go by my words. Modern art is like wine. If you are not used to it, you need an induction. You need someone to get you started on the right kind, let you know on how to smell and taste it. The fifth floor had the usuals like Dali, Magritte, Max Ernst, Monet, Pablo Picasso, Frida, Paul Develaux. For some reason, even if I don't get surrealism in the first go, I do enjoy Magritte, Max and Paul for they blow me away with the ideas they try to convey. I had studied a few of Magritte's works in Psych class and it helped me enjoy some of his pieces today, even though I couldn't decipher the message.
I enjoyed Monet and sat there enjoying his water lilly. It was....maybe I'm not the one to describe for I don't have the choicest of words to describe it
Once I went to the forth floor, it was all chaos. Ideas were not contained and I was clueless as to how to go about measuring the quality and appreciate them. The fact that I didn't know the effort that goes into creating such pieces totally had me disinterested there from the fourth floor onwards. I didn't need a companion there but I wanted someone or something that could talk about why they were created that way and what the sculptor or the painter was trying to convey.
Anyways I got out of MoMA after 2.5 hrs and then walked all the way to Rockefeller center. The roads were jam packed to see the Biggest tree in NY. I managed to squeeze in as I was single. People from all walks of life were there. I just stood there momentarily, clicked a few snaps and got out. I walked down 15 blocks or so to get to Madison Square Garden Borders and tried to connect from there. The interesting thing is that every time I stopped to cross at the light between the cross streets, I would hear a different language. I was sure, I heard, mandarin, German and the other sounded like lebanese...what not. The walk truly gave me a feel of NY.The wifi didn't work at Borders, so I'm at the usual Starbucks at 33rd and 5th. I have no complaints for it was an eventful day. I covered quite a bit. I will post a few snaps once I get back to SF. Two more days of NY and I still have a few places in my list that I'm yet to cross off. Hopefully I will be able to cover them before I leave this memorable city.
I'm going to stick to writing the update from the cafe until they close. I will be online in Gchat as usual.
Oh! by the way, couldn't resist two handbags while window shopping and yet another black hole in the purse. Sob Sob!
Catch you people soon with the update.
Hasini
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime

@ Newdime,

I did not fall asleep because of you yaar.
I emailed you n den I decided to take a little nap.😆
Your PM was great...

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Posted: 14 years ago
As usual I'm late......but I'm so glad your not like others ...you know what I mean rite 😳

Ok...Leaning Tower of Pisa :) quite a unique name though !
Oh! I feel so sorry for Geet shez suffering from all this...why does this poor girl have to go through all this ? All the miseries are in store for her...even though happiness is a constant companion in recent days....Hope she gets well soon and nothing serious !

What should I say about Maan...an altogether different persona was highlighted as in another layer of his persona was peeled off and that too so very beautifully !!

I dunno why but their talks and all especially besides the window setting amazes me and sends me a trance...like so much could be felt and interpreted, feels like I'm living it and when ever I read it I picture myself in Geet's place...it's difficult for me to fit in Maan's shoes :)

And the Rugby match in the cool rains ah! that was heavenly and pleasurable at the same time.
and I oh so adore the White kurta 😳

The way it is going ....slow pace is what you say is good.....a reality factor comes into being this way....feels more like your living rather than mere fiction.

And yeah I read those post of yours in between; the temple..hari one....I'm not gonna quote everything though but then all of them... they are wonderful....the whole incidences and everything, taken right outta your life... never knew such things could also be put forward so beautifully and its so touching ....

Take Care,
Fatima

P.S: Guess this is the longest comment I've ever written :)


Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi hansini
sorry for so less comments
but i do read and enjoy ur wonderful ff
it's amazing
ur choice of place and pace of story telling it simply fantastic
love u
do continue writing
take care of ur self
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Posted: 14 years ago

This Mahi Moment is solely dedicated to Pushpi.

Today was the last day of her exams and she was going to have exactly 3 weeks off from school. This semester had been a rollercoaster ride for her. She has been sick with flu for a few weeks, her best friend was away on a cruise and on top of that her cousin was getting married in one day. She had already missed her sangeet and mehandi. She and her cousin were very close and she detested the fact that she was not able to attend her sangeet and mehandi functions. In fact she was so mad that she had not talked to her for last 2 days. But today, she could not wait for her last exam to get over because right after the exam she was flying straight to Vancouver to attend the wedding. The rest of her family was already in Vancouver having fun while she was here studying.

3 hours later....

She walked out of her classroom and sighed in relief. She was so happy that her exams were finally over. Her pace increased as she started to walk towards the parking lot. Her inner voice was telling herself, Suhana, you are going to have a blast in these three weeks. Yes she was ...she said to herself.

The weather was pleasant and the sun was shining. Her happiness had no boundaries. Her feet started to pick up even more speed and she started humming the song '

Kahin to.. kahin to.

Hoga woh

Duniya jahan tu mere saaath hain....

Jane na kahan woh duniya hai
Jane na woh hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
Inti kafa nahi

While humming the song she was in her own world and did not realize when she had started to twirl. She was looking at the sun, the sky and the beautiful fall trees around her and just when she was about to twirl once again when she bumped into someone with full force. She found herself falling and felt a pair of strong arms grabbing her waist to keep her from falling. She closed her eyes and was about to breathe in relief thinking she was saved...but she had hit this person with such a force that they both went sprawling on the grass. He broke her fall and she landed on him. Her long and straight hair fell on his face and covered it. She could not see his face but could smell his strong cologne.

She was scared and nervous and could not believe that she was lying on top of a guy, a stranger in the middle of her university campus..eeeekkkk. Her heart had started hammering and she realized that his hands were still on her waist. She flipped her hair around and tried to get up and at the same time their eyes met and the time stopped.

To be continued.....

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

i must say u r a great writer.. nd a different one too👏...Once i started reading ur FF i couldnt stop myself although it took whole 2 days to complete it..

thx 4 the pm .. continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
I dont know if I should scream out loud or just sigh deeply from delight!! I love my Mahi moment dedication!!
Oh please do continue soon Rachana Di! I cant wait to read more hehe *got butterflies in my tummy*😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

This Mahi Moment is solely dedicated to Pushpi.

Today was the last day of her exams and she was going to have exactly 3 weeks off from school. This semester had been a rollercoaster ride for her. She has been sick with flu for a few weeks, her best friend was away on a cruise and on top of that her cousin was getting married in one day. She had already missed her sangeet and mehandi. She and her cousin were very close and she detested the fact that she was not able to attend her sangeet and mehandi functions. In fact she was so mad that she had not talked to her for last 2 days. But today, she could not wait for her last exam to get over because right after the exam she was flying straight to Vancouver to attend the wedding. The rest of her family was already in Vancouver having fun while she was here studying.

3 hours later....

She walked out of her classroom and sighed in relief. She was so happy that her exams were finally over. Her pace increased as she started to walk towards the parking lot. Her inner voice was telling herself, Suhana, you are going to have a blast in these three weeks. Yes she was ...she said to herself.

The weather was pleasant and the sun was shining. Her happiness had no boundaries. Her feet started to pick up even more speed and she started humming the song '

Kahin to.. kahin to.

Hoga woh

Duniya jahan tu mere saaath hain....

Jane na kahan woh duniya hai
Jane na woh hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
Inti kafa nahi

While humming the song she was in her own world and did not realize when she had started to twirl. She was looking at the sun, the sky and the beautiful fall trees around her and just when she was about to twirl once again when she bumped into someone with full force. She found herself falling and felt a pair of strong arms grabbing her waist to keep her from falling. She closed her eyes and was about to breathe in relief thinking she was saved...but she had hit this person with such a force that they both went sprawling on the grass. He broke her fall and she landed on him. Her long and straight hair fell on his face and covered it. She could not see his face but could smell his strong cologne.

She was scared and nervous and could not believe that she was lying on top of a guy, a stranger in the middle of her university campus..eeeekkkk. Her heart had started hammering and she realized that his hands were still on her waist. She flipped her hair around and tried to get up and at the same time their eyes met and the time stopped.

To be continued.....


I think you should give a heading for the novel...Mahi moments for my dear friends, define in Rachana's style. 😆 Who is next? What about yours?😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime


I think you should give a heading for the novel...Mahi moments for my dear friends, define in Rachana's style. 😆 Who is next? What about yours?😉



LOL this is really good. Start a FF!!


Update today Hasini plzz!
need something to get me through writing a paper and this cold weather:(

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