FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2

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Manpreet

@Maneetkraze

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Posted: 14 years ago

#311

Such a beautiful post. Now I really want to visit this place but I don't think that I can handle the mud after 8 years of living abroad. haha! Too much mud in one visit!

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

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Posted: 14 years ago

#312

awesome dear !!!!.. no other words to say.. I think it's one of the best episodes written by you ..I liked each and every bit of it. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Tesha

@Lov26

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Posted: 14 years ago

#313

I don't know how to express how i am feeling after reading your mind blowing update. Whatever i say will not really convey how absolutely beautiful is this update.

Every time you update your story, I am amazed with your writing, its so beautiful and whenever i get super emotional or i feel really strongly about a particular update, i think there is nothing that you will write that will be more beautiful that this but you do it. It happened like so many times. I don't comment really a lot. i DO comment but not every single time. Sorry. But this time i know i HAD to tell you how i feel.

Seriously you should be professional writer. Or maybe are you one already? 😉
I read a lot of FF and there are none that can be compared to yours in terms of descriptions and emoting feelings so well. There is a flow in your story and you have it all- the fun, the drama, the happy moments and what i love the most is how they self analyze themselves. There is nothing, i mean it: NOTHING that i would like to change in your story up to now. I love the way Maan and Geet's character are.

Way to GO Hansini. The way they revealed how they felt since the beginning and i so love the way that there was no questions asked but they simply from one statement went to another and they each understood how each one's feeling developed.

Would you mind if i ask you how old you are?

~Tesha

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@curry-sistah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#314

This was a beautiful update! It was so wonderfully described that i would like to visit this place. Loved every bit of it! i agree with punjabi princess- and have the exact situation going on.

Its always a pleasure to read your FF;

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Hasina

@kellz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#315

i loved how easy and romantic they are with each other
thier secret confessions of how they fell in love was my fave part

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#316

Thank you all for the posts and comments. Please keep it coming.

This post was meant to explore a remote place in India and hopefully I'm successful at it.

The pictures are real and It is the valley that I claimed it to be.

The routes and the bus stand information, everything is for real.

The place that I posted where they camped is not prohibited. I just took the back route to the place :)

But it does exist and it is part of elephant falls.

I will talk about actual elephant falls in the next update.

For the one person, who felt there is too much mud in the post....please live a little. Its the best way to experience life in the raw.

I dont know if all you of know, but writing this FF based on NY, forced me to buy tickets one fine day to go there. I'm going there this week and cant imagine sitting in one of the cafe's to sip on a half caff back or a Non-fat, Decaf, extra-foam white chocolate mocha and write and update for you people.

I will try post some pictures from there as well.

Factoid coming your way..NY has the most expensive hot chocolate in the world. One cup is $1000 for it has gold and some truffles that is super expensive. No wonder...Should we make Maan take Geet to this place? Actually I did think about this in the part where they go out to the french restaurant and have hot chocolate, but skipped it because it would be too much for Maan to show off when they had not declared themselves to each other.

By the way I had Godiva's hot chocolate two days in a row :) Calories have piled up in me. Once this FF is over I'm hitting the gym regularly. I need to get a life and a guy for god's sake.

I really want to post some office nok-jhok's trying my best at it, but its not to my satisfaction yet. Hopefully I will do that soon.

Hasini

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nisharoyce

@nisharoyce

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Posted: 14 years ago

#317

omg hasini

i m christning u as mishti

as i find hasini leaving us with mystry & mishti coming up with revealing explantions all time

wow i am sure u r a tamilian becaz the song & the 1 line can come from a proper tamilian only ,

& i had a friend named subhashini - is that u ?

thats what i belive ,

have a great trip to NY & do keep us updated about ur experiances there yaar

chirapunji - awesome

have u really been to the place ? luv to here more

i m glad u had given yet another long '1

thank u

loads of luv

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: nisharoyce
omg hasini
i m christning u as mishti

as i find hasini leaving us with mystry & mishti coming up with revealing explantions all time

wow i am sure u r a tamilian becaz the song & the 1 line can come from a proper tamilian only ,

& i had a friend named subhashini - is that u ?

thats what i belive ,

have a great trip to NY & do keep us updated about ur experiances there yaar

chirapunji - awesome

have u really been to the place ? luv to here more

i m glad u had given yet another long '1

thank u

loads of luv

Oh! god...no I'm no tamilian...trust me as long as Google is there you can call yourself a chezh and I still wouldn't know.

Subhashini? Bashini stands for sweetly speaking and I stand for sweetly smiling...so No...but aren't we friends now?

I think I have already posted this. I listen to all all kinds of music and I can research enough before I write a post so no one can finger point me, but I'm still human and do err as always.

I read write and speak five languages...so there you go English, Hindi (bad grammar), Tamil, Telugu and French....I also understand 2 more...so dont be surprised if I post a scene from Manichitra thazh (malayalam) or ask you hoota ayitha (kannada)?

I will post for sure form NY...are you kidding me...I will not miss it for anything. I'm planning to write updates from there just to add the NY feeling.

Thank you. You are the only one that also commented that many of the long standing questions where answered in this post.

I had kept it in store to answer why she came back from Toronto without meeting Dev or why he jumped in the pool.

Thanks you are keen reader.

Edited by Hasini67 - 14 years ago

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#319

Hey....I have updated my comment from reserved...cutting n pasting the same here...so you do not have to look for it.

Edited....

Hasini,

It was such a beautiful update. I loved how you picked Cherrapunji. I have never been there myself but I yearn n long to travel to India mostly to Kerela, Himalayas, Assam, Ladakh, etc. and mostly south. That is one trip I wanna make to India for personal groW*H and self-reflection.😍😍

(do not know why it is not spelling groW*H properly, something is wrong with this post😭)

There is nothing more beautiful than connecting with nature and feeling grounded to the land, nation and soil on which you were born. Adding to that.....being connected to your core, to your being n your soul. The mud would be so calming, soothing to your body. 😍

I love water but just cannot swim....I was able to picture and visualize myself minus the almost underwater/floating scenes.

I loved how both Maan n Geet one after the other revealed their masks to each other. It takes a lot of courage and guts to reveal the truth about your feelings and emotions...even to your better half. A person is always scared of rejection, judgements, humility, etc again even from your better half.

I could not believe how one after the other they were able to open up to each other without any hesitation between them...that brought them even closer to each other and bonded them even further...because nothing feels more content and complete in knowing that your better half was feeling the same way about you when you were feeling the same way about them.

It was a beautiful update Hasini..and I hope n wish that I will be able to express my feelings when I find that person for myself.

Love

Rachana

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago