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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Hasini,

In ten days...you have 53 pages on your 2nd thread. Yippieeeeeeeeee!!!
👏👏



Just proves how popular and liked this FF is😊

Keep up the great writing Hasini! 👏

P.S. i think the show needs some tips from ur FF and writing skills right now! It had soo much potential after last weeks "khoon bhari maang" scene... and it looks like it may go all down hill now:(
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nisharoyce


awesome part mishti

where have u taken me or leaving me ?
no time for opinions or precaps ?
u will b going to NY tomrow followed by the weekend so i guess we will have to wait(long wait) for the next update
OMG itnee badi punishment
this part is wonderful yaar
tell me which is ideal season to explore this place
& maan geet wow
definitely dont rush
its not even 5 months they know eachother
as said marriage is just an excuse to keep them together
if they were not married they would have been hiding ,staring or maybe dating
i m not saying that u will know ur better half completely within this certain time
infact there is nothing like that
every day u will get to know some thing new , even after years
its all about accepting. accepting the way u are
i guess they will b going to NY in the next part & geet may b moving to SF
waiting to see them through ur eyes
dont make me miss u mishti


Hi Nisha,
Thanks for your comment.

Can you PM me what you meant by this?
"as said marriage is just an excuse to keep them together
if they were not married they would have been hiding ,staring or maybe dating "

I think you have missed a couple of my other posts. I'm going to NY just to feel NY and write from there. NO other plans. Perhaps, I want to go to MoMA and catch up with one Broadway musical, but that's it. I'm just going to be in one of the cafe's around Central Park writing updates. May be have lunch at little italy and take the PATH back to the other side of Hudson and enjoy the view of Manhattan from there.
This is just a very adhoc trip that I planned a month ago, because I started the FF and was craving for New York. Hopefully NY becomes more beautiful in the FF once I start writing from there, for I will actually get a chance to write about it. When Geet moves to SF, anyways I will be there once again. I will probably drive down to the bay bridge and post from there. What say?

You are not going to be punished. If not one update a day, you will definitely atleast get 1 every 1.5 days..
I'm just being a very noice Mishti here.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

.post which it shall all be about whose turn it is to take the garbage out/do the dishes...though I sincerely hope Maan's riches will help there😆

See I think this one is even longer than the previous post...What have you done to me Hasini? Making a writer out of me are you??? To think i detest writing 😆


Oh! my god are you good at reading my scripts from far. The trash can scene is totally there..but not the way you might expect. Its just a couple of scenes and they are not fighting over it.

What's harm in writing? If I can write you totally can. and I absolutely love your construction and choice of words to express a point.

Geet to loosen up a bit...it will take some time. She is now Maan's wife. Let him decide what needs to happen. I think you are forgetting they are going to do long distance for some time. She is scared because she will be going away without even getting to know him.
Yes you got the right one. I'm talking about that post where the CV's were getting bashed. I was part of the other group by the way 😉. But today's precap gives me some hope that there is going to be more Maneet. I'm sure there is a Maan getting wet scene and she giving him the towel...or the usual repeat of roop tera mastana, only Maan getting dry clothes from Geet ROTFL


Hasini
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Heyy I'm glad you're enjoying the experience of being in the hustle-bustle of NY. I can only imagine how magnificent it would be this time of year with everything and everyone being so festive :-)

Get some sleep tonight okay. Dont worry about the update cause we all have had sleep and will survive another day withone an udpate. You, on the other hand, desperately need sleep!!!
Plz do take care of yourself


NY is pepping me up and I dont mind going with another double shot for a couple of hours. I want the rain and candle scene...
Guess I'm just filling in for Jake.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

@ Pixie,

I completely agree with the fact that a person has no other moment in their lives beside the present moment. I mean present is all a person has...past is gone and future is unpredictible.
All that you say is true, she is married, he loves her a lot and is always there to support her..but like I was saying before...if some of those negative thought patterns have been embedded in you for a really long time..it takes a lot of courage, determination and self-reflection work to actually change y our thought process.
The new thought process does not come right away in one day, one week or one month. It takes constant effort and positive self-talk in your mind to get over the negative. Sometimes a person needs a little push in regards to start changing their mind set.
Dev might still clog their relationship and he might still be in her sub conscious....I believe she just needs time to get over him.
Just my thoughts.

Ye lamha, filhaal jee lene de...
Zamane me sabhi ko, milte hain ghum
Tum na ghabrana
Yahan har raat ki subha hai humdum,
Tum na ghabrana...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

@ Pixie,

I completely agree with the fact that a person has no other moment in their lives beside the present moment. I mean present is all a person has...past is gone and future is unpredictible.
All that you say is true, she is married, he loves her a lot and is always there to support her..but like I was saying before...if some of those negative thought patterns have been embedded in you for a really long time..it takes a lot of courage, determination and self-reflection work to actually change y our thought process.
The new thought process does not come right away in one day, one week or one month. It takes constant effort and positive self-talk in your mind to get over the negative. Sometimes a person needs a little push in regards to start changing their mind set.
Dev might still clog their relationship and he might still be in her sub conscious....I believe she just needs time to get over him.
Just my thoughts.
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Please trust me. You will know that this will be handled only slowly. I have seen one two many people in the same situations with beaten up self esteem's. Maan has had time for 6 years to recover, but Geet is married within 5 months of the breakup. I cannot make her transform without any baggage. Why do you think the candle and the rain scene is coming up...

Sorry guys...I had no idea that I slept off. In the morning when I got up is when I realized, that I had. The lights were on, the TV was running. Laptop battery low. Luckily I didnt lose what I had typed. So the update coming in a few hours. Sorry for the delay. I'm just plain messed up.

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Posted: 14 years ago

i must say u r a great writer and story teller.👏

once i started reading ur FF i couldnt stop myself although it took 2 whole days to complete all parts.😃

plz do continue

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Starry_night

I really liked your new username.....it's cool!

Lovely update! Amazing! Loved how Maan was looking after her and was worried for her. Glad that it's not something serious that Geet is suffering from.....I am having a craving for chocolate after reading that Dairy Milk bit.....will have to wait till tomorrow morning to get that particular one.....lolz. Dadima is really nice.....good to see her concern for Geet. Ah, the whole window sitting part was great....guess I won't ever have enough of it.....lolz. Awww.....Geet loves him so much.....she, despite not being well herself was ready to go out in the rain and play rugby just to make him feel better.....me loves their love! Loved it how she evoked him to play with her......their game and little rain romance.....too good! He kissed her just to relieve her of her pain.....that's actually very cute of him....lolz. Hmm....office arguements......even am sure that we are in for a lot of fun moments in the office......especially with their nok-jhoks and the fact that they can hardly keep their hands off each other.....lolz.

About the candle part, it was a turn-off in the show.....really did not expect it to go that way.....but I loved it here.....it was so couple like.....just the way it should be for two people who are so much in love.....it need not necessarily be intimate but some cozy moments are fine.

Hope you are having a great time in NY....it's your favourite afterall....


Thanks Starry night for the long comment. I have been biting off chocolate since last night. He He!
I was reading an article on chocolate and how to eat it when I saw another that compared the endorphins produced when Kissing and eating chocolate. Couldnt resist myself from putting it into the scene and it could have ended up as Jake's scene 😉. Actually the truth is I wrote up a lot of stuff that was not planned for this update. It all happened after I came down to NY.
Trust me starry night I could have gotten a whole lot cuter, but I already feel Maan's machoness in the FF was fading. So I had to bring back that using the last scene where he sort of manhandles her.
Which of course he has never done in the FF. Manhandle is probably too strong a word. Sorry Maan.
Yeah office arguments is something I have been thinking off, but I really doubt my ability to write it. I will starting soon, so that I have time to edit it properly.

@ Rachana: I think in person, I'm so lost to even identify Mahi moments. So nothing to talk about there for I will not even know it happened. So Dumb!

@ Sharmake: Thanks for your comments. You also make it a point to leave me something to read.

@ Punjabi Princess: Thanks. For all the time I stayed indoors today, I will make up for it tomm. Office work came up and so I stayed back without going to Central park. Will hang out late night in the city.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res.
Till den Dairy Milk is my favourite....n for some reason dairy milk in Hindustan tastes 100% better than the one here....
Yummyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy in the Tummyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!
Purple font - dairy milk wrapper is also purple........hummmm😍
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Posted: 14 years ago


Arabian Paki,

I noticed that your post to Hasini was your FIRST post.
That is pretty cool n awesum and you decided to post such a long comment.
Yippieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Welcome to NY Times with Maan n Geet.


I thought Jake was the only one out there with a secretary 🤣 ...lucky me...Thanks Rachana you have taken up the post officially.

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