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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

heya guys back with my update

hope u like it


mayur in their bedroom

n : mayank tum hamesha uday bhaiya ko daante kyun rehte hoo

m : daantu nae to kyaa karoon hamesha kabaab main haddi banta hain

n : kyaa kabaab main haddi wo to sirf khel hi rae the naa

m : wasie wo koi chota bachcha nahi hain aur mere babies koi toy nae hain ki koi bhi khele ok

n : mayank tum hbi naa hamesha gussa karte ho]

mayank came near to nupur

m : to kyaa rmance karoon

nupur blushed he was going t okiss her but baby started crying

m : uff bad timings

n : yeah

mayank took his baby in his arms and baby stops crying

m : dekhaa apne dad ko pehchaan gayaa

n : haan dekhaa


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night time at dinner table


n : mayank aaj maa ka phonaa aaya thaa naa kyaa keh rahi thi tumne hamare babies ke baare main to bata diyaa naa

m : usme kyaa batane waali baat hain jab aayegi to dekh legi naa

n : kyaa is she coming to pune

m : maine aisa kab kahaa maine kahaa ki jab aayegi tab abhi t nae aa rahi

nupur becomes upset

m : tum bhi naa ye lo ice cream khaao

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all are sleeping suddenly baby started crying

n : mayank uthoo naa alaram baj raha hain der ho jaayegi

m : nupur tum band kar do naa mujhey neend aa rae hain

n : nae tum jaao tumhe job pe jaana hain mujhe nae

mayank sat on the bed and he realise that it is baby crying not alaram


mayank goes near baby and takes in his arms and tries to make him sleep after sometime baby stops crying

mayank takes him to their bed and puts between both of them and he also go to sleep putting his hands on his baby


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at morning

nupur wakes up and see her baby and mayank sleeping in same position

she smiled and tells "apne papa pe gayaa hain"

and aftersometime she came out of the bathroom with wet hair

she saw that mayank is still sleeping

she comes closer to mayank and kissed hi cheek then blushed and was about to go that mayank held her hand

m : hayee mrs sharma itni subah kiss mil gayee to din achcha jaaye gaa

nupur blushed and she sat near him helding his hands


n : main isliyee aai thi ki tumhein job ke liye der ho jaayegi

m : aaj nae kyun ki aaj main nae jaane waala

n : kyun aaj kya hain

m : aaj ka din main apne family ke saath spend karnaa chahta hoon

n : hayee aaj bade romantic lag rae hoo


and suddenyl door bell rangs

n : main kholti hoon

m : nae nupur tum rehne doo main dekhta hoon

mayank goes to open the door and saw his mom

m : maa aap aa gae aapka intezaar kar rahaa thaa

mm : haan aa gaye nupur ko to nae batayaa naa

m : nae maa and hugs her

nupur came from back

n : mayank kaun hain

she is hsocked seeing mayank's mom

n : maa aap yahaan ? kaise ? kab ? i mean..

mm : nupur thodi saans leke boloo haan main yahaan kyun nae aa sakti

n : nae aisi bat nae hain aap to kabhi bhi aa sakti hain

m : so nupur mera surprise kaisa lagaa

n : sabse best

all smiled



so guys this was my second update hope u all r not bored ..😆


do leave ur precious comments it means alot for me ..😳



jenny....:))

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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
haaayeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! mr. and mrs. sharma ka romance ...........
papa par gaya hai is so sweet loved it ................
great part ...............waiting for the next one .............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
mind blowing update jenny awesome

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

dear yoyr ff is amazing hope to see more updates that to very soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow jenny you are continuing mjht story from your new ff n thanks a tons jenny for writing it anywaz i also want mjht story to be continued wid mayur new life wid baby,i loved your ff plz continued n when ever u update do pm me ok.loved both part its awesome mindblowing loved it to the core.shilpa aunty bhi hai wow now we can see saas n babu scene,mayur romance is so cute n when nupar say apne papa pe gaya i loved that dialouges.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
So really mayur thought Baby's cry as alarm?😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
hey!
pllzzz add me to ur pm list....
thnxxx...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Jenny
very nice update
Mayank sharma and his perfect family
i loved the whole update
good going jenny
keep updating
Jenny.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayur4evr

hey!

pllzzz add me to ur pm list....
thnxxx...😊

yeah will surely add u 😃
Edited by jainypatel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
awsummmmmm!!!...👍🏼
continue soon...

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