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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 12

Disha; I wasn't!!

Dk: why are you lying???

Disha is like how does he know!!!

Dk: U are thinking how do I know right??

Disha is shocked!

Dk: I just heard everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is like omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He is looking at her!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He comes closer to her!!!

Disha is looking down!!!!!

Dk: What was he saying true????????

Disha is quiet!!!

Dk: What he did w/ me.. u felt more worst than me!!!! Why???

Disha looks at him!!!!!

Disha doesn't say anything!

Disha: I have to cook…..

She leaves

But he grabs her hand!!!

Disha is like omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Why aren't you saying anything??????

Disha closes her eyes!!!…..

Disha: Dk…..

Dk: He offered you cash too…. Why didn't you take it?? U should've!!……

Disha is looking at him!!!

Disha; No I didn't want to!!!

Dk: Why?

Disha: Becuz I want to make something for myself!!!!! I cant depend on other people!!!!!! I have to make something for myself to you know!!

Dk: But he's ur friend! He was trying to help you!!!

Disha; well I don't want his help!!!

Dk: Then what do u want??

Disha (herself): I want you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She closes her eyes!!!!!

Disha: I don't want anything!!

Dk: yes you do u want something!!!!! What is it???

Dk: (Himself) I know what u want! But you wont tell me!…..

Disha makes him let go

And she runs into the kitchen

DK goes in his room…….

Disha's in the kitchen!

She is thinking about DK!!

She is smiling!!!

Dk's in the room!!!

He's thinking about her

He is having flashbacks…. Of her!!!

She is too!

Both smile!!

Next day……..

Dk goes to work

He gets fired…..

Dk is shocked!

He's like why!!!

The guy said that he has to many workers….

So he has to leave!1

Dk is like oh no!!!

Dk leaves from there!!!

S comes there and gives the guy cash!!!!!

He smiles!




The End!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
Part 13

Dk comes home

He's like now wat do I do!!!!!

Poor guy lost his small job!!!

Then he goes and tries more places

But they wont give it to him!!

He gets mad!!

Disha comes home

Dk comes in

He's all sad!!!

Disha sees

He's like whats wrong???

Dk doesn't say anything

Disha comes to him!!!!

Disha: Whats wrong???

Dk: I lost my job!!!!

Disha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: What?? How????

Dk explains to her!!

Disha gets all sad

Disha: Now what?

Dk: Now I don't know!!!! I tried everywhere!!! But nothing!!!

Dk is sad!!!!

Disha tries to console him!!

He goes in his room!!

Disha is sad!!!!

She wishes she can do something

Next Morning….

Disha is awake!!!…..

Dk is awake

He sits on the couch!!!!

He's sad!!!!

Disha tells him to try again!!

Dk doesn't have cash on him at all!!

Disha gives him some!!

Dk: No I cant take it! You earned it…. Its yours!!

Disha: But!!!

Dk: No!!!!

Disha: Why not??

Dk: Disha!???? No!!!! I am will try myself!!!!

He gets up

Disha is sad!!!!

Disha stops him

Takes his hand..

And gives it to him!!

Disha: If u don't take it I will feel bad!!!!!

Dk is touched!!!

She leaves

Cuz she has to work

Dk looks at her!

Dk tries again!!!!

But there's nothing out there!!!!!

Poor guy…

All day

He goes place to place!!!!

He doesn't spend none of Disha's money!

He comes back home

He gives it to her!!!

She's sad!!!

He couldn't find anything!!!!!!

All his cash has been gone to food…

So he doesn't have anything

Disha sits next to him!!!!

She's all sad!

She cant do anything for him!!

Disha tells him that maybe she can help him get a job!!!

Dk: Disha its okay!!! I will try something!! But please… don't worry about me!!

Disha; How can I not??? I cant see you like this!!

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!



The End!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
Part 14

Dk: I guess I am paying for my bad deeds I did!!!!

Disha: Don't say that!! These bad times will go!! I know!!!!!

Dk: you say that w/ so much confidence!!!

Disha: Well I am not giving up!!! And I know that u will get something!

Next day

Dk thinks of a place

He goes there

Tries to look decent and goes

They interview him

They don't know who he is!!!

Looks at his qualifications……

They think it over

And give him the job

He's like thank god!!!!

He starts on the job the same day!!!!!

They are impressed w/ his work!!!!!!!

But he gets very little pay!!!!!!

But something is better than nothing for him!!

Afterwork

HE's going home

Disha is already at home

S comes there

Puts her down again

She is sad!

Disha tells him to leave!

But he wont!!

Disha pushes him to go!!

That makes him angry!!!

He grabs her shoulder

She is scared!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk comes and sees……

He is shocked

He comes to him!!

And makes him let go

S is looking at Dk!!!

S comes to know that they live together!!

That pisses him off!!!!

S orders Disha that she cant stay w/ him!!

Disha: Who are you to tell me that?????

S grabs her hand

Dk makes him let go!!

He doesn't!!!

He takes her away!!

Disha is yelling his name!!!

Dk grabs her other hand!!!

He pulls her……..

She lets of S….

And Dk pulls her into him!!!!

S is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha hugs him!!!!


The End!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 15

S: What will people say when they find out…. That a man and woman are living together but they aren't married???????

DK is shocked!

Disha closes her eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is getting mad!!

S laughs at them!!!!

Dk un hugs her

And he comes to him

He's about to punch him

S: Try it!!!!!! Then u can see what I can do!!!

He stops!!!!

S leaves!!

Disha runs in

Dk sees

He follows her

She cries on the sofa

Dk comes there!!!

Dk knows what she is crying about!!!!

He puts his hand on her shoulders…

Disha wipes her tears…

And looks at him!!!

Dk is looking at her!!!

Dk: Why are you crying?…Forget what he said!!!!!!!! He thinks he knows it all!!!!!

Disha: But its true wat he said!!!

Dk: He is just..

Disha; Its true!!! You know it is! You wont admit it! But its true!!

This S just had to ruin the mood!!!

All of a sudden

People are outside!!!!

S tells some of the people whats going on!!

DK is like what the hell!!!

People are like we cant have people like you staying here and what not

Dk is like what???

S created all of this

He just had to open his big mouth!!!!

Disha comes out!!!

They make a big deal that they stay together

But they aren't married! And etc…..

DK gets mad

Tells them to mind their own business

It gets all crazy!!

Disha is shocked!!

She's a little scared!!!!!!!!!!

Then Dk yells at them!!!!!!!

Dk: Arre…. She's my wife!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

His eyes pop out!!!

Dk: U want to know to who she is!! She's my wife!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone looks at her!!!!!!

Disha looks at Dk!!!!!!




The End!!!!


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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
u did a wonderful job on all the parts!
wow what a shock!
i hope they get married soon
dk should beat satya up
keep up the great work
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46

It took me forever to read it!!!! 😆

Great Parts!!!! 😆 😆

I agree with Ziddi. They should get married!! I wonder what Disha's reaction will be!!! 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful parts
just too good
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👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
👏 👏 👏 brilliant parts....atleast s has done one gud thing for dk 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
arre...u had to stop here!!!...now..i'll be behind for sure!!!...neways...it was awesome!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyagirl

It took me forever to read it!!!! 😆

Great Parts!!!! 😆 😆

I agree with Ziddi. They should get married!! I wonder what Disha's reaction will be!!! 😉



arre...very easy...disha would be like...finally he said it...cat is out of the bag!!!...took him forever!!!😆

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